Building— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Reduce repetition, make the response more concise and directly state location then give one specific supporting detail. Use a linking word to connect ideas and avoid vague phrases like "sufficient sunshine."

예시: No, there aren’t many tall buildings near my home because I live on the city outskirts. As a result, the area has many parks and mature trees, so I enjoy plenty of natural light and quieter streets.

제안: Good content and clear examples. Improve by correcting minor grammar (plural forms) and tightening sentences. Use a linking phrase to make the comparison clearer.

예시: Yes. I usually photograph buildings with unique architectural styles or interesting histories because I like capturing their details and atmosphere. For example, I often photograph old townhouses and modern glass facades to compare the contrasting textures and shapes.

제안: Be more direct and avoid awkward phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a concise reason and one specific example of a building you might visit in future. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., "there isn't much" → "there aren't many buildings I want to visit").

예시: I’m not especially keen on visiting buildings because I prefer natural scenery; however, if I travel to a new city I would like to see at least one famous landmark, such as the cathedral or a well-known museum.

제안: Avoid repetition and tighten phrasing. Start with a clear statement, give one strong reason with a linking word, and end with a brief qualification. Remove duplicated words.

예시: Yes, I would. I’d like to live in a tall riverside building because I could enjoy scenic water views from my living room every day; however, I know such apartments are usually expensive.

× No, there are not many tall buildings near near my home.

✓ No, there are not many tall buildings near my home.

The word 'near' is repeated, which is a typographical/repetition error; this falls under singular/plural category per the list because it involves incorrect word count. Remove the duplicated 'near' to make the sentence grammatically correct and concise.

× I live in the outskirts of the city, far from the city center, so around my home there are many parks and trees.

✓ I live on the outskirts of the city, far from the city center, so there are many parks and trees around my home.

Use the preposition 'on' with 'the outskirts' (fixed expression). Also the original word order is awkward; moving 'around my home' after 'parks and trees' makes the sentence clearer and more natural. This is classified as a 'There be' issue because it involves the construction and placement of 'there are' and related elements.

× I think I benefit from the sufficient sunshine.

✓ I think I benefit from sufficient sunshine.

The article 'the' before 'sufficient sunshine' is unnecessary and unnatural here. Omit 'the' so the quantifier 'sufficient' correctly modifies 'sunshine.' This matches the quantifier problem type.

× For instance, I often take pictures of old townhouse and modern glass facades to compare textures and shapes.

✓ For instance, I often take pictures of old townhouses and modern glass facades to compare textures and shapes.

'Townhouse' should be plural 'townhouses' to match 'pictures of' and parallel 'modern glass facades.' This is a singular/plural error; make the noun plural for grammatical agreement.

× No, there isn't much I would like to visit.

✓ No, there aren't many buildings I would like to visit.

The original 'there isn't much I would like to visit' is unidiomatic. Use 'there aren't many buildings I would like to visit' to specify the subject and use the correct plural verb. This addresses the 'there be' construction and clarity of what 'much' refers to.

× But if I got a chance I will.

✓ But if I get a chance, I will.

Conditional time sequence requires present tense in the if-clause for a real possibility: 'if I get a chance' (present), then 'I will' (future). Using 'got' (past) with 'will' is incorrect here. Correct the verb tense in the conditional clause.

× I would like to visit some famous buildings when I arrive a specific place.

✓ I would like to visit some famous buildings when I arrive at a specific place.

The preposition 'at' is required with 'arrive' when specifying a place: 'arrive at a place.' This is categorized as a past participle issue in the provided list because it involves verb-preposition collocation with 'arrive.' Add 'at' to correct the phrase.

× Yes I do. I would like to live in a tall building near a river or a lake so that I can enjoy the beautiful scenery every day just from the windows in my in my living room.

✓ Yes, I do. I would like to live in a tall building near a river or a lake so that I can enjoy the beautiful scenery every day just from the windows in my living room.

The phrase 'in my in my living room' repeats 'in my'—a duplication error. Remove the duplicate to correct the pronoun/possessive phrase. This is categorized under pronoun errors because it involves the possessive pronoun 'my' usage.

× I think it's quite enjoyable but requires a lot of money.

✓ I think it would be quite enjoyable but would require a lot of money.

The subject 'living in a tall building' (implied) is singular and hypothetical; use 'would' to mark the conditional/hypothetical nature: 'would be' and 'would require.' The original mixes present 'it's' with 'requires,' which is less appropriate for a hypothetical preference. This fits the present tense issue as the tense/modal choice is inconsistent.