Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct with a clear topic sentence naming a favourite (or stating you have many), reduce hesitation, correct grammar, and use linking words to add concise supporting details (e.g., why you like it, flavours, ingredients, or a brief example). Keep it within 3–4 well-formed sentences.

예시: I don't have a single favourite dish because I'm a real foodie, but I especially enjoy spicy Indian curries. For example, I love dishes with lots of garlic and ginger because they add deep flavour and warmth. Also, I prefer spicy food because it feels comforting and exciting to eat.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about what you liked as a child. Use correct tense (past), avoid filler words, and give a specific reason or short anecdote. Use linking words (for example, because, so) to make it coherent and limit to 3–4 sentences.

예시: When I was young I loved eating burgers from McDonald's. I used to enjoy them because they were tasty and special treats for me. I also liked their McCafé coffee because my family would buy it after outings.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and follow with specific examples of seasonal or festival foods and when they are eaten. Use linking words (for example, during, in contrast, for instance) and correct grammar to make the answer concise and informative.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For instance, during Diwali we make sweets like ladoos, while in the monsoon season I enjoy hot street snacks such as pakoras. In short, festivals and seasons influence what we cook and eat.

제안: Answer directly with past and present contrast, use correct verb tenses, avoid repetition, and provide a concise reason for the change. Add a specific example of a vegetarian dish you now enjoy and link the ideas with words like "however" or "now".

예시: Yes, my preferences have changed. As a child I loved meat dishes like chicken tikka, but now I follow a vegetarian diet. For example, I often make vegetable pasta at home because it's healthy and satisfying, so I no longer eat non-vegetarian food.

× It's quite difficult to say that, uh, one of my favorite food because I am very foodie.

✓ It's quite difficult to say one of my favorite foods because I am very much a foodie.

Original mixes phrases and lacks correct noun form and articles. 'one of my favorite food' needs plural 'foods' (type 1) and 'very foodie' is incorrect; use 'very much a foodie' or 'a big foodie' (type 26). Combine into a single clear clause: 'It's quite difficult to say one of my favorite foods because I am very much a foodie.' Suggestions: use plural for 'one of' structures and include the article 'a' before 'foodie.'

× I love to eat spicy food, uh, which have lot of garlic and ginger.

✓ I love to eat spicy food, which has a lot of garlic and ginger.

The relative clause refers to 'spicy food' (singular/uncountable), so the verb should be 'has' not 'have' (type 27/2). Also 'lot of' needs an article: 'a lot of' (type 22/11). Suggestion: match verb number to the noun and include 'a' before 'lot.'

× And I am not like not, I don't have that much specifically one food if I say.

✓ I don't have one specific favourite food.

Original is disfluent and uses incorrect phrasing. Simplify to 'I don't have one specific favourite food.' This addresses pronoun/structure issues (type 12 and 26). Suggestion: avoid double negatives and redundant words; use 'one specific' for clarity.

× I like the food.

✓ I liked that food.

Context asks about when young (past), so use past tense 'liked' not present 'like' (type 6/5). Suggestion: use past tense when describing past preferences.

× Like when I was young there was a like burger from McDonald's.

✓ When I was young, there was a burger from McDonald's that I liked.

Original repeats 'like' and misorders elements. Rephrase for clarity and correct sentence structure (type 26). Suggestion: place time expression at start and follow with simple past description.

× I and the coffee of there.

✓ And I liked the coffee there.

Original uses incorrect word order and 'the coffee of there' is wrong. Use 'liked the coffee there' (type 12). Suggestion: use natural English order: subject + verb + object + place adverb.

× I usually eat that thing because I just fall in love with that.

✓ I used to eat those because I had fallen in love with them.

Talking about past habitual action: use 'used to' or past simple. 'That thing' is vague and pronoun agreement is off. Use plural if referring to burgers and coffee (type 26/1). Suggestion: use 'used to' for past habits and match pronouns to antecedents.

× Which Pogo?

✓ Which one?

Fragment and unclear; likely asking 'Which one?' Use a complete interrogative phrase (type 26). Suggestion: use concise question forms in conversation.

× Yeah, I like to eat different foods because in India it's like a multi, uh, there are multi cuisines available.

✓ Yeah, I like to eat different foods because in India, there are many cuisines available.

'a multi' is incorrect; use 'many' or 'multiple' (type 22/14). Remove filler 'like' and restructure for fluency (type 26). Suggestion: use 'many cuisines' or 'a variety of cuisines.'

× There are multi festivals came in different festivals.

✓ There are many festivals that occur at different times of the year.

Original mixes tenses and repeats 'festivals.' Use 'occur' or 'take place' and 'many' instead of 'multi' (type 5/26/14). Suggestion: 'many festivals take place at different times.'

× We made different food and we eat different food at a different time.

✓ We make different foods and eat different foods at different times.

Mix of past and present and singular/plural inconsistencies. Use present simple for general habit (type 6) and plural 'foods' (type 1). Suggestion: for habitual customs use present simple and plural nouns.

× Yeah, when I was a child I love to eat meat, chicken, chicken tikka and now after that I just switched into like eating or vegetarian foods.

✓ When I was a child I loved to eat meat, like chicken and chicken tikka, but later I switched to eating vegetarian foods.

Describing past preference requires past tense 'loved' (type 5). 'Switched into like eating or vegetarian foods' is ungrammatical—use 'switched to eating vegetarian foods.' Suggestion: use past tense for past states and correct verb-preposition collocation 'switch to.'

× Not now I'm not eating any non vegetarian food now.

✓ Now I am not eating any non-vegetarian food.

Position of 'now' and double 'not' is awkward. Place 'now' at start or end and avoid redundancy (type 20/26). Also hyphenate 'non-vegetarian.' Suggestion: 'Now I'm not eating any non-vegetarian food.'

× Uh, it's just like eating something vegetarian that can be pasta, which is made by me.

✓ I usually eat vegetarian dishes now, such as pasta that I make myself.

Original uses awkward 'it's just like eating' and passive 'which is made by me.' Use active form 'I make myself' and plural 'dishes' for generality (type 26/9/10). Suggestion: prefer active voice and natural phrasing: 'such as pasta that I make myself.'