Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a clear direct answer first (topic sentence), then provide 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct vocabulary and simple grammar: name specific dishes, explain why you like them, and avoid repetition. Aim for 2–4 concise sentences within the 5-sentence limit.

예시: My favourite food is Iraqi cuisine, because it combines rich spices and fresh ingredients. For example, I enjoy biryani and stuffed vegetables (dolma) since they are flavorful and remind me of family meals. I also like trying different dishes like tomato-based pizza occasionally.

제안: Start with a clear past-time topic sentence, then give specific examples and a brief comparison to now, using linking words like 'when I was young' and 'nowadays'. Correct tense and noun forms (e.g., 'when I was younger', 'dolma', 'biryani'). Keep it concise and coherent.

예시: When I was younger, I loved traditional Iraqi dinners such as fish, dolma and biryani because they were comforting and homemade. However, I also enjoyed trying Asian foods like sushi occasionally, and I still like them nowadays.

제안: Answer directly about seasonal variation, then give specific examples of foods eaten in different seasons and a reason. Use linking words ('for example', 'in summer', 'during winter') and correct vocabulary. Avoid unclear phrases and aim for 2–3 clear sentences.

예시: Yes. For example, in the summer I often eat light dishes such as salads and sushi, while in winter I prefer warm, hearty meals like dolma and biryani. This change helps me feel comfortable in different weather.

제안: Respond clearly with a direct statement about change, then explain how and why tastes have changed, giving specific examples and using linking words ('now', 'because', 'for example'). Use correct grammar for comparisons and avoid vague phrases.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I mainly ate traditional Iraqi dishes, but now I enjoy a wider variety including Italian and Asian foods because I have more opportunities to try international cuisine.

× Actually, I am public.

✓ Actually, I am private about my food preferences.

The student used 'public' incorrectly; 'public' describes general openness, not a personal preference. Use 'private' or rephrase to 'I prefer to keep it private.' Also 'I am' + adjective needs an appropriate adjective that matches intended meaning.

× I am for my favorite food.

✓ I am asked about my favorite food.

The original sentence is ungrammatical; likely the student meant to say they were asked about their favorite food. Use passive or active: 'I am asked about my favorite food' or 'You asked about my favorite food.' Ensure subject and verb align.

× Is there Iraqi food because it is there more delicious?

✓ I like Iraqi food because it is more delicious to me.

Misuse of 'there is' and question form. The student intended a statement. Use 'I like' + reason 'because it is more delicious.' Avoid extra 'there'.

× There is such as Tom pizza, Bariani and whatever is sometimes of the it's I'm always have a hobby of attending and prepare the food for breakfast or for dinner or for any other.

✓ For example, I enjoy tomato pizza, biryani, and other dishes. I often have a hobby of preparing food for breakfast, dinner, or other meals.

The sentence mixes structures and has many word choice errors. Use 'For example,' to introduce examples and correct dish names 'tomato pizza' and 'biryani.' Use 'I often' or 'I usually' + 'enjoy preparing food' and correct noun forms 'meals.' Avoid 'there is' here.

× And my younger I am actually I love the Iraqi dinner such as the fish or Dolma bariani.

✓ When I was younger, I actually loved Iraqi dishes such as fish or dolma and biryani.

Tense mismatch: 'When I was younger' requires past tense 'loved.' 'Iraqi dinner' should be 'Iraqi dishes.' List items need commas and correct dish names.

× It's have more delicious Iraqi.

✓ Iraq's food is more delicious.

'It's have' is incorrect grammar. Use 'is' for 'it is' or possessive 'Iraq's food.' 'More delicious' compares to something; context implies 'to me' so add 'to me' if needed.

× Sometimes I like the Asian and Asian.

✓ Sometimes I like Asian food.

Repetition and article misuse: do not use 'the' with 'Asian' as a noun here. Use 'Asian food' or 'foods.' Avoid repeating 'Asian.'

× The Asian like sushi and other type in mind in my younger and nowaday I love it.

✓ I liked Asian food such as sushi when I was younger, and I still love it nowadays.

Tense and word order problems: 'The Asian like' should be 'I liked Asian food.' Use past tense for past preference and present for current. 'Nowaday' corrected to 'nowadays.' Put time phrases at appropriate places.

× Actually yes, I don't have the bar of burning food.

✓ Actually, yes, I don't have any barriers to trying new foods.

Original phrase is unclear; likely meant 'no bar/ barrier to trying different foods.' Use 'any barriers' and 'trying new foods' for clarity.

× I am always there have a very various food such as between the Iraqi and the ASEAN food.

✓ I always eat a variety of foods, such as Iraqi and Southeast Asian cuisine.

Incorrect use of 'there' and 'between.' Use 'a variety of foods' and 'such as' correctly. 'ASEAN food' is better as 'Southeast Asian cuisine.' 'Always eat' fits habitual present.

× Sometimes I am eating the Dalma Biryani Iraqi and always I am a change to 8 salad or sushi or another time.

✓ Sometimes I eat Iraqi dolma or biryani, and other times I choose salad or sushi.

Incorrect progressive 'I am eating' for habitual actions; use simple present 'I eat.' 'Always I am a change to' is ungrammatical — use 'other times I choose.' Remove unclear '8' which seems erroneous.

× And sometimes there is a different types of.

✓ And sometimes there are different types of food.

Missing noun at end and subject-verb agreement: use 'there are' for plural 'different types' and include 'of food.'

× Yes, there is a more different in my child there is the some of the food and there is no change and there is no barriers of the type.

✓ Yes, there were some differences in the food when I was a child; some dishes stayed the same and there were no major barriers to food types.

Mixed tenses and misuse of 'there is.' When referring to childhood, use past 'there were.' Clarify meaning: 'some dishes stayed the same' and 'no major barriers' is better phrasing.

× But nowadays there is more and more different types of them of the nations such as Italian and Asian, Iraqi number and Emirates.

✓ But nowadays there are more and more different types of cuisine from many countries, such as Italian, Asian, Iraqi and Emirati cuisines.

'More and more different types' needs 'there are' and 'types of cuisine.' 'Iraqi number and Emirates' is unclear; use 'Iraqi and Emirati.' Ensure parallel listing and correct nouns 'cuisines.'

× There is no different of the types of.

✓ There is no limit to the variety of types available.

Original is unclear and ungrammatical. If meaning 'no difference' use 'there is no difference in types' or if meaning 'no limit' use wording above. Use complete noun phrases.