Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response grammatically correct, concise, and use clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give one or two specific details (why you like it and a brief example). Avoid repetition (e.g., "foreign foreigners") and keep it under five sentences. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to connect ideas.

예시: My favourite food is Thai cuisine, especially Tom Yum and Pad Thai. I like Tom Yum because of its spicy, sour broth and the fresh herbs, and I enjoy Pad Thai for its sweet-and-savoury flavours and chewy noodles. For example, I often eat Pad Thai at a street stall where it’s served with crushed peanuts and lime.

제안: Correct tense and grammar, give a clear topic sentence and specific reasons. Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to explain why you liked those foods. Replace unclear words ("sometime") with the intended food name, and keep sentences concise.

예시: When I was young, I usually liked fried rice and simple snacks. I liked them because they tasted mild and were easy to eat, so my parents and I could enjoy them often. For example, fried rice with a little soy sauce was a common family meal.

제안: Be more precise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No), then add specific examples of seasonal foods and use linking words like "however" or "sometimes". Avoid vague phrases like "quite very" and aim for natural collocations such as "readily available."

예시: Not really — I usually eat the same kinds of food year-round. However, sometimes I enjoy seasonal dishes, for example mango sticky rice in the mango season or fresh durian when it’s available. In Thailand, seasonal produce is readily available, so we have special treats at certain times of the year.

제안: Use full sentences and correct grammar, start with a clear topic sentence, and provide a specific reason or example of how your tastes changed. Use linking words like "because" or "as a result" to connect ideas, and avoid awkward phrasing like "endure the strong taste."

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed a little since childhood. I now prefer spicier food because I developed a higher tolerance for chili over the years. For example, I used to avoid spicy curries, but now I enjoy a very spicy green curry with rice.

× I like Thai food episode Tom Yum and Pad Thai with is most famous food for Thai people.

✓ I like Thai foods, especially Tom Yum and Pad Thai, which are the most famous foods for Thai people.

The original sentence has adjective/adverb and article errors and wrong clause structure. 'episode' is incorrect; use 'especially' to introduce examples. 'is' mismatches plural 'Tom Yum and Pad Thai' so use 'which are'. Use plural 'foods' when referring to types. Improve by using 'especially' and by matching number agreement between subject and verb. Use: 'especially' + examples; ensure subject-verb agreement and correct relative pronoun.

× Even foreign foreigners also enjoy eating Thai food.

✓ Even foreigners also enjoy eating Thai food.

Redundant word 'foreign foreigners' is incorrect adjective use and repetition. Use 'foreigners' to mean people from other countries. 'Even' and 'also' together are redundant; you can keep one. Suggestion: 'Even foreigners enjoy Thai food.'

× When I was young, I like to eat sometime or fried rice.

✓ When I was young, I liked to eat omelettes or fried rice sometimes.

The time phrase 'When I was young' sets past context, so the verb should be past tense 'liked' not 'like'. 'sometime or' is incorrect word choice and order; likely meant 'omelettes' or 'sometimes'. Place adverb 'sometimes' at end. Correct nouns and word order.

× I think is easy to eat, the taste is not so strong, everyone can eat.

✓ I think they were easy to eat, the taste was not very strong, so everyone could eat them.

Sentence lacks clear subjects and consistent tense. After referring to foods from childhood, use past tense 'were' and plural pronoun 'they/them'. Combine clauses with 'so' for cause-result. Replace 'not so strong' with 'not very strong' for natural phrasing. Ensure subject for 'can/could' matches past context.

× No, mostly I usually eat common foods in every month.

✓ No, I usually eat common foods every month.

'Mostly' and 'usually' together is redundant; choose one. 'in every month' is incorrect preposition use and quantifier sequence; use 'every month'. Keep simple present for habitual action.

× Sometimes I also eat some unique foods depending on the food season.

✓ Sometimes I also eat some special seasonal foods.

'unique' with 'some' is awkward because 'unique' is absolute; 'special' or 'seasonal' is better. 'depending on the food season' is wordy; 'seasonal foods' conveys meaning. Keep adverb placement before verb.

× I think everything is quite very prepared for us to eat in Thailand.

✓ I think everything is generally well prepared for us to eat in Thailand.

'quite very' is an incorrect and redundant adverb combination; use either 'quite' or 'very' but better 'generally well'. 'prepared for us to eat' is awkward; 'well prepared' is natural. Use adverb 'generally' to indicate overall situation.

× Yeah, a bit change over the time after growing up.

✓ Yeah, it changed a bit over time after I grew up.

The original mixes forms. Use past tense 'changed' to describe change that happened, and 'over time' is the correct phrase. Include subject 'it' referring to favourite food and 'I grew up' for clarity.

× I think I like more spicy food.

✓ I think I like spicier food now.

Comparative form 'more spicy' should be 'spicier'. Also add 'now' to indicate change with time. Keep present tense for current preference.

× I can endure the strong taste from that.

✓ I can tolerate that stronger taste.

'Endure the strong taste from that' is awkward pronoun and preposition use. Use verb 'tolerate' and noun phrase 'that stronger taste' with clearer reference. 'From that' is unnecessary. Make sure pronoun 'that' clearly refers to the spicy food mentioned earlier.