Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Clarify the food name and give a clear, concise description. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the favourite dish, then add one or two specific supporting details (why you like it and how you usually eat it). Keep to 1–3 sentences and use simple linking words if needed.

예시: My favourite food is my grandmother’s chicken curry. I love it because it is rich and spicy, and I usually eat it with plain steamed rice. For example, we have it every Sunday when my family gathers.

제안: Answer directly with a topic sentence naming the food you liked as a child, then give specific supporting details and a short example. Use linking words (because, for example, so) to connect ideas and keep sentences clear and grammatical.

예시: When I was young, I loved chicken noodle soup because it was warm and comforting. For example, my grandfather often made it for me after school, so it became my favourite childhood meal.

제안: Give a clear yes/no or general statement, then specify seasonal differences with 1–2 concrete examples. Use linking words (for example, in summer, in winter) and keep sentences short and grammatical. Mention specific dishes or ingredients you eat each season.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. In summer I prefer light foods like salads and watermelon because they are refreshing, while in winter I eat warm stews and rice to stay warm.

제안: Answer directly (Yes or No) and give a short reason with one specific detail or example. Keep it to 1–2 sentences and use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'favourite food', 'changed').

예시: No, my favourite food has not changed since I was a child because I still love my grandmother’s chicken curry. It reminds me of family meals and childhood memories.

× My favorite part is my grandmother Paul Creep.

✓ My favorite food is my grandmother's Paul Creep.

The original sentence uses 'part' and lacks possessive for 'grandmother'; likely intended to say a dish made by grandmother. Use possessive 'grandmother's' to show ownership and replace 'part' with 'food' to match the question. Also ensure proper noun formatting if 'Paul Creep' is a dish name.

× I love measures but I usually AMD with some with some rice.

✓ I love it, but I usually eat it with some rice.

The original has nonsense words ('measures', 'AMD') and repetition. Use direct object 'it' for the favorite food and present simple 'eat' for habitual action. Remove duplicate phrase 'with some'.

× When I was young, I looked like how many chickens give you an noodle because warm and comforting.

✓ When I was young, it felt like chicken noodle soup because it was warm and comforting.

The original mixes incorrect verbs and phrasing. 'Looked like how many chickens give you an noodle' is ungrammatical. Use 'felt like' to describe sensation and 'chicken noodle soup' as a likely intended noun. Use past tense 'was' for 'warm and comforting'.

× For example, my grandfather often made their dinner after school or I ate too of rice from it was become my favorite.

✓ For example, my grandfather often made it for dinner after school, and I ate a lot of rice from it; it became my favorite.

Pronoun 'their' is incorrect for 'grandfather' (use 'he' or omit). 'Made it for dinner' clarifies object; 'a lot of rice' replaces 'too of rice'; change 'was become' to past 'became'. Ensure commas and conjunctions join clauses correctly.

× I still didn't know.

✓ I still didn't know why at the time.

The original is vague and incomplete. Adding 'why at the time' clarifies what was not known. Maintain past simple 'didn't know' for past context.

× The FYA different kind of food.

✓ I eat different kinds of food throughout the year.

Original contains 'FYA' (unclear) and wrong structure. Use present simple 'eat' to answer habitual question and plural 'kinds' with 'different' to indicate variety.

× It was different kind of the year.

✓ It changes depending on the time of year.

Original word order and article use are incorrect. Use 'changes' (present simple) and 'depending on the time of year' to express seasonal variation.

× In summer I asked for food and salad.

✓ In summer I ask for cold foods and salad.

Use present simple 'ask' to describe habitual preference. 'Cold foods' clarifies desire for cooler items in summer; 'asked' (past) is wrong for habitual statement.

× The garden was hot and I want something like and we went to her.

✓ When the weather was hot, I wanted something light, so we went to the garden.

Original mixes tenses and unclear references ('her'). Align past narrative: 'was hot', 'wanted', and clarify 'light' (not heavy). Specify destination 'garden' coherently.

× I prefer hot room and dryers because they were warm and sunny.

✓ I prefer hot rooms and dry weather because they are warm and sunny.

Use plural 'rooms' if general, and 'dry weather' fits 'dryers' error. Match present preference 'prefer' with present reason 'are'.

× For example, I eat watermelon in.

✓ For example, I eat watermelon in summer.

Original sentence misses time expression. Add 'summer' to complete the sentence and match seasonal context.

× No, my favorite foot doesn't change that I was a child because I love my own.

✓ No, my favorite food hasn't changed since I was a child because I still love it.

Multiple issues: 'foot' should be 'food'; 'doesn't change that I was a child' is wrong tense and structure—use present perfect 'hasn't changed since I was a child'. 'I love my own' is unclear; use 'I still love it.'

× I love lip synthesis.

✓ I love my grandmother's cooking.

Original phrase 'lip synthesis' is unintelligible. Likely intended to express affection for grandmother's cooking. Use possessive 'grandmother's cooking' to be clear and grammatical.