Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and natural with a clear topic sentence, use a linking phrase for examples, and correct minor grammar (e.g., "peas" plural). Add one brief reason and avoid repetition. Keep to <=5 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is peas. I enjoy them because they are sweet and versatile, and I often cook them with carrots, potatoes, or chicken. For example, I like a pea-and-carrot stew or peas mixed into chicken fried rice.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct item names (e.g., 'manti' not 'months'), reduce filler words, and give a concise description with linking words. Correct tense and avoid informal interjections like 'uh'.

예시: When I was young, my favourite food was a Turkish dumpling called manti. It is usually served with yogurt and a spiced tomato sauce, and I loved its rich flavour and soft texture. I often ate it with family on weekends.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'I prefer to eat soup'), avoid hesitation, and use linking words to contrast seasons. Provide one specific example for each season.

예시: Yes, I change my diet with the seasons. In winter I prefer to eat warm soups like lentil soup because they soothe my throat and keep me warm, whereas in summer I choose lighter foods such as salads and fresh fruit to feel refreshed.

제안: Answer directly, give clear reasons for the change using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so'), fix grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'peas' plural, 'healthier' without 'more'), and avoid filler phrases like 'I don't know'.

예시: Yes, it has changed. As a child I loved Turkish dumplings called manti, but now I prefer peas because I find them healthier and more versatile, so I eat them in many dishes.

× my favorite food is pea.

✓ my favorite food is peas.

The noun 'pea' is countable and when referring to it in general as a food, the plural 'peas' or the uncountable form 'pea soup' is appropriate. Use 'peas' to indicate the food in general. Suggestion: use 'peas' or rephrase to 'pea soup' if referring to a dish.

× I was finding it very delicious.

✓ I found it very delicious.

The past continuous 'was finding' implies an ongoing action in the past, but taste is a state and is normally expressed with the simple past 'found'. Suggestion: use simple past for past states: 'I found it very delicious.'

× It has also yogurt and some kind of, uh, tomato sauce on the top of it and I think it tastes really good.

✓ It also has yogurt and some kind of tomato sauce on top, and I think it tastes really good.

Word order and choice of pronouns/phrases: 'It has also yogurt' is unnatural in English; 'also' should come before the main verb or after the subject: 'It also has yogurt.' 'On the top of it' is wordy; 'on top' or 'on top of it' is sufficient. Remove filler 'uh' in formal speech. Suggestion: 'It also has yogurt and some kind of tomato sauce on top.'

× my favorite food was dumpling in Turkey.

✓ my favorite food was dumplings in Turkey.

Use plural 'dumplings' when referring to the dish in general. Also no article needed when speaking generally about a food item. 'Dumpling' singular would require an article: 'a dumpling'. Suggestion: 'my favorite food was dumplings in Turkey.'

× dumplings called months in Turkey

✓ dumplings called mant
31 in Turkey.

Probably the student meant the Turkish dish 'mant
31' (pronounced 'manti' or 'mantı'). Writing 'months' is an incorrect word choice. Also keep plural 'dumplings'. Suggestion: use correct name 'mant
31' or 'manti' and say 'dumplings called mant
31 in Turkey.'

× We say months, and I was finding it very delicious.

✓ We call them mant
31, and I found them very delicious.

'We say months' is incorrect structure and word choice. Use 'we call them' to explain the name, and keep consistent plural 'them' and simple past 'found' for a past state. Suggestion: 'We call them mant
31, and I found them very delicious.'

× Of course in winter I usually prefer it eat soup because it's warmer and it it's good to stomach and throat.

✓ Of course in winter I usually prefer to eat soup because it's warmer and it's good for the stomach and throat.

'Prefer it eat soup' is ungrammatical: after 'prefer' use 'to' + verb ('prefer to eat') or 'prefer eating'. 'it it's' contains duplication. Also add preposition 'for' with 'good' to indicate benefit: 'good for the stomach and throat.' Suggestion: 'I usually prefer to eat soup' or 'I usually prefer eating soup.'

× I think in summer I prefer more like umm lighter foods like salads or fruits maybe?

✓ I think in summer I prefer lighter foods, like salads or fruit.

Reduce filler 'umm', and use 'prefer lighter foods' without 'more like'. 'Fruits' is usually 'fruit' when speaking about types generally. Keep present simple 'prefer' as a habitual action. Suggestion: 'I prefer lighter foods, like salads or fruit.'

× Pi think it's more healthier and taste better.

✓ I think it's healthier and tastes better.

'Pi' is a typo for 'I'. 'more healthier' is a double comparative; use either 'healthier' or 'more healthy' (prefer 'healthier'). Also subject-verb agreement: 'it tastes' not 'taste'. Suggestion: 'I think it's healthier and tastes better.'