Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to explain reasons. Correct grammar (e.g., 'seafood' without article, 'cheaper in Thailand because...'). Include one specific example of a seafood you like to add detail.

예시: My favourite food is seafood because it tastes fresh and is affordable in Thailand. For example, I often eat grilled prawns sold by local fishermen, and the meat is much fresher and cheaper than in supermarkets.

제안: Use past tense consistently and be concise. Start with a clear past-topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'for example'). Correct grammar and word choice ('noodles', 'near my home').

예시: When I was young, I loved noodles because I enjoyed hot pork soup. For example, a popular noodle shop near my home served it, so my parents bought it for me almost every day.

제안: Answer directly and clearly. Use correct phrases ('throughout the year', 'less often') and improve coherence with linking words. Give one clear example of when you try different foods and why.

예시: Not really — I usually eat the same foods throughout the year. However, I try different dishes occasionally when I travel for work; for example, I visit new seafood restaurants in other cities to try different sauces and recipes.

제안: Give a clear comparison between past and present using correct tenses and concise sentences. Explain reasons with linking words and one specific example of how your taste changed. Avoid unclear phrases and provide a short concluding sentence.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I didn't like seafood because the sauces were too spicy, but as I grew up I learned to enjoy the flavours. For example, I now eat spicy grilled squid with sweet chilli sauce, which I love because the spice is balanced and adds flavour.

× My favorite food is a seafood.

✓ My favorite food is seafood.

Use of the indefinite article 'a' before an uncountable noun 'seafood' is incorrect. 'Seafood' here is a general, uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. Use 'seafood' without an article. Suggestion: Remove 'a' when referring to uncountable food categories.

× This is because it's very delicious and cheaper in Thailand.

✓ This is because it is very delicious and cheaper in Thailand.

Contraction 'it's' is acceptable in speech, but for clarity keep 'it is'. The main issue is fine tense; retained present tense to state a general fact. No major grammatical change needed beyond avoiding contractions in formal correction. Suggestion: Keep present simple for general truths.

× This is because in Thailand there are many oceans and most of local fishermen often sell by themselves to directly to customers.

✓ This is because Thailand has many seas, and most local fishermen often sell directly to customers themselves.

Problems: 'many oceans' is incorrect—use 'seas' or 'coastlines'; word order 'sell by themselves to directly to customers' is awkward. Rearrange to 'sell directly to customers themselves'. Also remove unnecessary 'there are' and use concise subject 'Thailand has'. Suggestion: Use 'seas' for coastal areas and place adverbs like 'directly' next to the verb.

× That's why it's cheaper.

✓ That's why it is cheaper.

Contraction 'it's' can remain, but for consistency in corrections expand to 'it is'. No grammatical error beyond contraction preference. Suggestion: Maintain consistent formal style by using full forms.

× When I was a child, I love noodle because I love a hot soup with some pork and the popular shop is nearby my homes, so my parents often buy for me every day.

✓ When I was a child, I loved noodles because I liked hot soup with some pork, and the popular shop was near my home, so my parents often bought it for me every day.

Tense errors: narrative about childhood should use past tense ('love' -> 'loved', 'like' -> 'liked', 'buy' -> 'bought'). Number and article issues: 'noodle' should be plural 'noodles' for the food in general; 'a hot soup' -> 'hot soup' or 'a bowl of hot soup'; 'homes' -> singular 'home'; 'buy for me' -> 'bought it for me'. Suggestion: Use past simple for habits in the past and ensure correct noun number and articles.

× No, actually I eat the same type of the year.

✓ No, actually I eat the same type of food all year.

Incorrect phrase 'the same type of the year' is ungrammatical. Use 'all year' to indicate throughout the year, and specify 'type of food'. Keep present simple for habitual action. Suggestion: Use 'all year' or 'throughout the year' and include 'food' after 'type'.

× I often seek to the seafood less wrong.

✓ I often eat seafood less often.

Original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is 'I eat seafood less often.' 'Seek to the' is incorrect and 'less wrong' is meaningless here. Suggestion: Use 'eat seafood less often' to express reduced frequency.

× Sometime when I go work on site or travel in other city I love to try a new seafood restaurant because there are different sauce recipe.

✓ Sometimes when I go to work on site or travel to another city, I like to try a new seafood restaurant because they have different sauce recipes.

Multiple issues: 'Sometime' -> 'Sometimes'; need prepositions: 'go to work', 'travel to another city'; verb choice: 'love to try' -> 'like to try' (both ok but keep consistency); noun agreement: 'different sauce recipe' -> 'different sauce recipes'; subject-verb agreement 'there are' could be replaced with 'they have'. Also use present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: Use correct adverb form, include 'to' with destinations, and pluralize 'recipes'.

× Yes, my favorite food have shang.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed.

'Favorite food' is singular, so the verb must be 'has' not 'have'. 'Shang' appears to be a misspelling of 'changed'. Use past participle 'changed' with present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change up to now. Suggestion: Match singular subject with 'has' and use correct past participle 'changed'.

× When I grow up when I was a shy I don't like seafood because the sauce is very spicy.

✓ When I was young and shy, I didn't like seafood because the sauce was very spicy.

Mixed tenses and awkward phrasing: 'When I grow up' (present) conflicts with 'when I was a shy'. Use past: 'When I was young and shy'. For negative past habit use 'didn't like'. 'Was very spicy' matches past context. Suggestion: Keep time expressions and verbs in the same past tense and use correct adjectives ('shy' without article).

× So when I grow up I found it's very delicious and I love to eat it.

✓ So when I grew up, I found it very delicious and I loved eating it.

Tense mismatch: 'when I grow up' should be past 'when I grew up'. 'Found' is past, so follow with 'it' (not contraction 'it's') and past preference 'loved eating it' or present 'I love eating it' depending on intended meaning. Using past 'loved' keeps narrative consistent; could also say 'I found it very delicious and now I love eating it.' Suggestion: Use consistent past or present forms and avoid mixing 'found' (past) with 'it's' (present).

× I love to try a new recipe of salt.

✓ I like to try new seasoning recipes.

'Recipe of salt' is unnatural in English. Likely meaning: trying new seasoning or salt-based recipes. Use plural 'recipes' and 'seasoning' to be clear. Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'seasoning recipes' or 'salt-based recipes'.

× This is because.

✓ (Delete sentence)

'This is because.' is a sentence fragment with no reason following it. It is incomplete and should be removed or completed with the reason. Suggestion: Either finish the sentence with the reason or remove the fragment.