Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and accurate; start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy, and use precise vocabulary (e.g., specify dishes correctly and avoid mixing regional terms). Add one specific reason and a brief example. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: My favourite food is my mother's homemade North Indian dishes because I grew up eating them. For example, she often makes dosa and parathas, which I love for their comforting flavors and variety.

제안: Organize your answer: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific examples and a short reason. Correct vocabulary and grammar (avoid filler words and errors like 'an pizza' and unclear phrases such as 'having a lot of ice').

예시: As a child I preferred junk food, especially pizza and instant noodles. For instance, when we ate out I would always choose pizza because it felt fun and tasty.

제안: Good content and specificity—make it more concise and use linking words for coherence. Use one or two linking words (e.g., 'in summer'/'in winter') and avoid repeating 'seasonal' twice. Keep within 3 sentences.

예시: Yes. In summer I eat seasonal fruits such as mangoes and light salads, while in winter I prefer heartier vegetables like cauliflower, mustard greens and carrots because they are more filling.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence about the change, then one specific reason and an example of what you eat now. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., 'I tended' not 'I tend', 'for the long run' instead of 'in a longer run'). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, it has changed. I used to eat a lot of junk food, but now I choose healthier meals—such as grilled vegetables, whole grains and lean proteins—to stay fit and maintain my energy levels.

× Honestly speaking, my favorite food is homemade meals prepared by my mother of Indian cuisines because I'm born in India.

✓ Honestly speaking, my favorite food is homemade meals prepared by my mother from Indian cuisine because I was born in India.

Use of 'of Indian cuisines' is incorrect adjective/noun choice; 'Indian cuisine' (singular) or 'from Indian cuisine' is natural. Also 'I'm born' is present tense form incorrectly used for past event; change to 'I was born' to indicate past. Suggest using 'from Indian cuisine' and past simple for birth.

× Especially North Indian food like dosa and all that stuff.

✓ Especially South Indian food like dosa and similar dishes.

Dosa is a South Indian dish, so 'North Indian food like dosa' is factually and adjectivally incorrect. 'All that stuff' is informal; replace with 'similar dishes' for clarity and register.

× I like that a lot and I've been eating them since I was a child.

✓ I like them a lot, and I have been eating them since I was a child.

Pronoun reference and agreement: 'that' is singular while referring to multiple 'meals' or 'dishes', so use 'them'. Also expanded contraction and comma improves flow. Tense 'have been eating' is correct continuous past-to-present.

× When I was young I particularly liked junk food, especially pizzas and processed food like instant noodles and many other food stuff like that.

✓ When I was young, I particularly liked junk food, especially pizza and processed foods like instant noodles and many other food items.

Pluralization and count noun forms: 'pizzas' can be 'pizza' when speaking generally; 'processed food' should be plural 'processed foods' and 'food stuff' is nonstandard—use 'food items'. Also add comma after introductory clause.

× Whenever I go out for dinner with my family I would definitely order an pizza and and the dinner party by having a lot of ice.

✓ Whenever I went out for dinner with my family, I would definitely order a pizza and enjoy the dinner party with a lot of ice cream.

Tense consistency: context is past habitual so use 'went'. Article error: 'an pizza' should be 'a pizza'. Repetition 'and and' removed. The phrase 'by having a lot of ice' is unclear; likely 'ice cream' fits. Overall restructure for clarity.

× Certainly, like in summers, I like to eat seasonal fruits like mango and seasonal vegetables.

✓ Certainly. In summer, I like to eat seasonal fruits like mangoes and seasonal vegetables.

Preposition/use of plural: 'in summers' is nonstandard; use 'in summer' or 'in the summer'. 'Mango' as a count noun should be plural 'mangoes' when speaking generally.

× But in winters, as the season changes, the variety of vegetables in the market also changes.

✓ But in winter, as the season changes, the variety of vegetables at the market also changes.

Use 'in winter' rather than 'in winters' for general seasonal statement. Both 'in the market' and 'at the market' are possible; 'at the market' is more natural here.

× So I prefer to eat cauliflower, mustard leaves and carrots, apples and many other vegetables and fruits.

✓ So I prefer to eat cauliflower, mustard greens, carrots, apples, and many other vegetables and fruits.

Use 'mustard greens' (common collocation) rather than 'mustard leaves'. Add Oxford commas for clarity and ensure parallel list structure.

× Definitely, when I was a child I tend to indulge in eating junk food and processed food, but nowadays I've been more health conscious and I've been eating healthy meals in order to maintain my physical conditions in a longer run.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child, I tended to indulge in eating junk food and processed foods, but nowadays I am more health-conscious and I have been eating healthy meals to maintain my physical condition in the long run.

Tense agreement: 'tend' should be past 'tended' to match 'When I was a child'. Pluralize 'processed foods'. 'I've been more health conscious' is awkward—use 'I am more health-conscious' for current state. 'physical conditions' should be singular 'physical condition'. 'in a longer run' is incorrect phrase; use 'in the long run'. Hyphenate 'health-conscious'.