Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct names and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid hesitation and filler words. Also correct vocabulary (‘Capsa’ → likely ‘Kabsa’ or ‘kabsah’; ‘dish’ not ‘disk’).

예시: My favourite food is Kabsa, a traditional Saudi/Kuwaiti rice dish. It consists of spiced rice with chicken and vegetables such as tomatoes and cucumbers, and I usually eat it on Fridays because my family gathers then.

제안: Use past tense correctly and avoid incorrect words. Begin with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then add a brief specific example and a reason. Replace wrong words (e.g. ‘flies’ → ‘rice’) and reduce repetition.

예시: When I was young, I liked Kabsa and biryani. My mother often cooked them for me because the whole family enjoyed their rich flavours and they were easy to share at family gatherings.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and organise supporting details with linking words (for example, 'for example', 'also'). Use correct country names and natural phrasing, avoid repetition. Mention seasons or occasions if relevant.

예시: Yes. For example, when I travel to Turkey I often eat grilled chicken dishes, and when I visit China I like to try sushi and other local specialities. At home, however, I usually eat rice with chicken, meat or fish depending on the season.

제안: Clarify the idea and speak in full simple sentences. State clearly whether your favourite food has changed and give a specific reason using linking words. Avoid unclear references (e.g. 'company', 'bus') and ask rhetorical questions only if necessary.

예시: Yes, my favourite dish has changed a little. For instance, the taste is different now because the restaurant changed its suppliers and the rice and chicken come from different farms, so the flavour is not the same as it was when I was a child.

× My favorite food is Capsa, that's traditional disk, uh, food in the Kuwait.

✓ My favourite food is Capsa; it's a traditional dish in Kuwait.

The definite article 'the' is not used before country names like Kuwait; 'the Kuwait' is incorrect. 'Disk' is a misspelling of 'dish'. Use 'a' before 'traditional dish' because it is a singular, countable noun introduced for the first time. Use a semicolon or full stop to separate independent clauses. Also use British spelling 'favourite' if preferred.

× It's, uh, maintained of, uh, rice and chicken and some vegetable like, uh, cucumber and, uh, uh, tomato.

✓ It is made of rice, chicken and some vegetables such as cucumber and tomato.

'Maintained of' is incorrect; the correct passive expression for ingredients is 'made of'. 'Vegetable' should be plural when referring to more than one type: 'vegetables'. Use 'such as' or 'like' to introduce examples, and list items with commas.

× I usually eat it and, uh, eating this, uh, desk on the Friday.

✓ I usually eat it and have this dish on Fridays.

The sentence mixes simple present with a gerund incorrectly ('eat it and eating this'). Use consistent verb forms: 'I usually eat it' and 'have this dish' are both simple present. 'On the Friday' is wrong; use 'on Fridays' for habitual actions or 'on Friday' for a specific day.

× When I was young, I usually like uh, kepsa and biryani, that's all, uh, made of flies and chicken and sometimes meat.

✓ When I was young, I usually liked kapsa and biryani; they were both made of rice, chicken and sometimes meat.

For past habitual actions use past simple 'liked' not present 'like'. 'Kepsa' likely should be 'kapsa' (spelling). 'That's all' is informal and unclear; better to say 'they were both'. 'Flies' is a misspelling of 'rice' — this changes meaning and must be corrected.

× Uh, my mother usually do do it to me when I was child.

✓ My mother usually made it for me when I was a child.

'Do do' is incorrect repetition; use the past simple 'made' for past habitual action. 'Do it to me' should be 'made it for me'. Also include the article 'a' before 'child'.

× Yes I do. When I travel to Turkey I I eat grilled chicken and when I go to the China I eat some sushi.

✓ Yes. When I travel to Turkey I eat grilled chicken, and when I go to China I eat sushi.

Avoid repeating 'I'. 'The China' is incorrect; country names do not take 'the'. Use simple present to describe habitual actions while travelling. 'Some sushi' is acceptable but 'sushi' without 'some' is more natural.

× That's dependent on where the place I go to to it but in my country usually rice with chicken or meat or fish also.

✓ It depends on where I go, but in my country people usually eat rice with chicken, meat or fish.

'That's dependent on where the place I go to to it' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'It depends on where I go'. Add the subject 'people' or 'we' for clarity when describing general habits. List options clearly with commas.

× Yes, because that's because the company changed the supplier from the company they take from the Indian, but in the bus they take from the United Arab Emirate.

✓ Yes, because the company changed its supplier: previously they sourced from India, but now they source from the United Arab Emirates.

The original sentence is repetitive and unclear. Use 'its' for the company's supplier. 'They take from the Indian' is incorrect; say 'they sourced from India'. 'The United Arab Emirate' should be plural 'the United Arab Emirates'. Clarify sequence with 'previously' and 'now'.

× The flavor and the rice, also the chicken dependent, Where is that collected from? From the Almarkuza farms or in Sharm Farms?

✓ The flavour of the rice and the chicken also depends on where they are sourced from: from Almarkuza farms or Sharm farms?

'Dependent' needs an agent: 'depends on'. Use 'sourced' or 'collected' with 'from'. Match plural pronoun 'they' with 'rice and chicken' collectively. Use consistent preposition 'from' and correct capitalization for farm names. British spelling 'flavour' suggested.