Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and long awkward phrases. Also correct frequency phrasing (e.g. "several times a month" or "not often").

예시: My favourite food is sushi. We eat it several times a month, although the restaurant we like is about 30 minutes away by car, so we only go there on weekends.

제안: Remove filler words and give a clearer topic sentence. If you mention a specific dish, briefly describe it and explain why you liked it using linking words like "because" or "so". Pronounce proper nouns clearly or replace them with a short description if the name is unfamiliar.

예시: When I was young, I often ate Pianguru Kapurama, a cheap and tasty street snack. I liked it because it was affordable and convenient for students.

제안: Answer directly then expand with a clear reason. Correct pronunciation and wording ("year", "on special occasions"). Use linking words like "however" or "sometimes" and give a specific example of seasonal change.

예시: Not usually — I mostly eat the same foods throughout the year. However, sometimes I change ingredients depending on the season; for example, I eat certain fish or fatty meats when they are in season.

제안: Give a clear, single-sentence answer, then support it with concise examples and correct verb forms. Avoid repetition and fragmented sentences. Use linking words like "for example" or "in particular" and ensure subject-verb agreement ("are my favourite foods").

예시: No, my favourite foods haven't changed much. For example, sushi, yakiniku and yakitori have been my favourites since childhood because I enjoy grilled flavours and fresh fish.

× My favorite food is sushi and me and my family don't eat sushi several times a month.

✓ My favorite food is sushi, and my family and I don't eat sushi several times a month.

This sentence has a singular/plural and word order issue: 'me and my family' is incorrect subject order and case; use 'my family and I' as the subject. Also add a comma before the conjunction for clarity. Keep 'sushi' singular as an uncountable noun, which is correct here.

× The place nearby is a little bit far from home, so we would take the car and drive for about 30 minutes to go there.

✓ The place nearby is a little bit far from home, so we would take the car and drive for about 30 minutes to get there.

Use 'get there' instead of 'go there' after 'drive' to express arrival; 'drive to go there' is redundant. 'Take the car and drive to get there' is concise and natural.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> I used to eat uh, Pianguru Kapurama when I was in, uh, university.

✓ I used to eat Pianguru Kapurama when I was at university.

Use 'at university' (correct preposition) and remove filler sounds. 'Used to' correctly expresses past habitual action; ensure the correct preposition 'at' for attending university.

× It is very cheap and delicious in uh, in a way that young people like.

✓ It is very cheap and delicious in a way that young people like.

Remove the repeated filler 'in uh,' and keep 'in a way that young people like' which correctly modifies how the food appeals. The error was unnecessary filler, not grammar of adjectives.

× No, most of the time I eat the same thing all around the ear but sometimes some.

✓ No, most of the time I eat the same thing all year round, but sometimes I change it.

Multiple issues: 'ear' is a misspelling of 'year', 'all around the year' is unnatural; use 'all year round'. 'But sometimes some' is incomplete; replace with 'but sometimes I change it' to complete the thought and match present habitual tense.

× In some occasions I would change the ingredients and such as fish and meat which would be on season.

✓ On some occasions I would change the ingredients, such as using fish and meat that are in season.

Use 'on some occasions' not 'in some occasions'. Place 'such as' before examples and use 'in season' rather than 'on season'. The corrected phrasing is natural and grammatically correct.

× No, most of the things I I love ha haven't much changed. Throughout my whole life.

✓ No, most of the things I love haven't changed much throughout my whole life.

Combine fragments into one sentence and correct word order: 'haven't changed much' is the correct placement of 'much'. Remove repeated fillers 'I I love ha' and place 'throughout my whole life' at the end for a natural flow.

× For example, sushi and yakiniku and yakitori is my favorite food which I loved since I was a child.

✓ For example, sushi, yakiniku, and yakitori are my favorite foods, which I have loved since I was a child.

Use plural verb 'are' to agree with the compound subject 'sushi, yakiniku, and yakitori'. Use plural 'foods' or keep singular with 'favorite food' but then structure differently; also use present perfect 'have loved since I was a child' to connect past to present. Add commas for clarity.