Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Give a present-tense, direct topic sentence, then add one or two clear specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler words and grammar mistakes (e.g., "I really love" not "I really loved"). Use correct collocations ("a wide range of tastes", "many kinds of food").

예시: I really love Thai food because it offers a wide range of tastes, from sweet and sour to spicy. For example, I often enjoy pad Thai and mango sticky rice, which balance different flavours and textures.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence about the past (use past tense) and follow with linked, specific reasons. Avoid sentence fragments and explain briefly why the expense made it special. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

예시: When I was young, I liked international food because it was a rare treat. Since it was expensive, my family only ate out occasionally, so I always enjoyed the special experience when we did.

제안: Answer directly, then explain with clear reasons and correct word choices (e.g., "fixed schedule", "types of food"). Use linking words to connect ideas and correct tense/form ("I can't eat Thai food every weekday"). Keep it concise and natural (max 5 sentences).

예시: No, I don't follow a fixed schedule for different types of food. For instance, I might eat Thai food several times a week, but if I get bored I switch to international dishes for variety.

제안: Answer directly and correct vocabulary and grammar ("my favourite dish is my mum's dishes" or "my mum's cooking"). Provide one specific example and a reason, using linking words like "because" or "so". Avoid vague phrases.

예시: No, it hasn't changed; my favourite food is still my mum's cooking because she makes Chinese dishes full of flavour. For example, her kung pao chicken has perfect seasoning and reminds me of home.

× I really loved Thai food because it has many a wide range of taste and many kind of food like desserts and umm. ****.

✓ I really love Thai food because it has a wide range of tastes and many kinds of dishes, like desserts.

The original mixes past and present ('loved' vs general statement) and misuses quantifiers. "many a wide range" is incorrect; use 'a wide range of' to describe variety. "taste" should be plural when referring to different flavors ('tastes'). "many kind of food" should be 'many kinds of food' or 'many kinds of dishes' to match plural noun. Also use present simple 'love' for a general preference. Suggestion: Use 'I really love Thai food because it has a wide range of tastes and many kinds of dishes, like desserts.' to convey general preference and correct quantifiers.

× Well, I really enjoyed international food because.

✓ Well, I really enjoyed international food when I was young.

The original sentence ends abruptly and uses past tense 'enjoyed' appropriately but needs a complete clause. Adding 'when I was young' completes the idea and matches the question asking about childhood. Ensure sentences are complete and provide the time reference if using past tense. Suggestion: 'I really enjoyed international food when I was young.'

× They were very expensive at that time so I barely went to the restaurants and I enjoyed every time.

✓ They were very expensive at that time, so I rarely went to restaurants, but I enjoyed it every time.

Pronoun reference and adverb choice are incorrect. 'They' is vague; referring to 'restaurants' or 'meals' is better. 'Barely went to the restaurants' is awkward; use 'rarely went to restaurants'. 'I enjoyed every time' is ungrammatical; use 'I enjoyed it every time' or 'I enjoyed every visit'. Also add a comma before 'so' for clarity and use 'but' to contrast rarity with enjoyment. Suggestion: 'They were very expensive at that time, so I rarely went to restaurants, but I enjoyed it every time.'

× No, because I don't have a fake schedule for different type of food.

✓ No, because I don't have a fixed schedule for different types of food.

'Fake schedule' is wrong in this context; 'fixed schedule' or 'set schedule' is appropriate. 'Different type of food' should be plural: 'different types of food'. Ensure noun number matches quantifier. Suggestion: 'I don't have a fixed schedule for different types of food.'

× For example I can't eat Thai food or all over the week days.

✓ For example, I can't eat Thai food every weekday.

'Or all over the week days' is incorrect phrasing. Use 'every weekday' or 'all week' depending on meaning. Also add a comma after 'For example'. Suggestion: 'For example, I can't eat Thai food every weekday.'

× And when I am bored with it I switch to international.

✓ And when I get bored with it, I switch to international food.

Verb phrase 'am bored' is acceptable but 'get bored' is more natural. Also 'international' as a noun is informal; say 'international food'. Add a comma after the subordinate clause. Suggestion: 'And when I get bored with it, I switch to international food.'

× No, my most favorite dish is my mom ditches.

✓ No, my favorite dishes are my mom's dishes.

'Most favorite' is redundant; 'favorite' suffices. 'My mom ditches' is a typo/incorrect word; should be 'my mom's dishes' (possessive). Also match singular/plural: if referring to multiple dishes, use plural 'dishes'. Suggestion: 'No, my favorite dishes are my mom's dishes.'

× She loves to cook Chinese meal for me and it is very delicious.

✓ She loves to cook Chinese meals for me, and they are very delicious.

'Chinese meal' should be plural if referring to meals in general: 'Chinese meals'. Pronoun 'it' doesn't agree in number with 'meals'; use 'they'. Also plural verb 'are' needed. Add a comma before 'and' to join clauses. Suggestion: 'She loves to cook Chinese meals for me, and they are very delicious.'

× Her cuisine is full of flavors.

✓ Her cuisine is full of flavor.

Both 'full of flavors' and 'full of flavor' can be used, but 'full of flavor' is the more natural idiomatic expression in English. Use singular 'flavor' to describe overall tastiness. Suggestion: 'Her cuisine is full of flavor.'