Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (ingredients, when you eat it, or why you like it). Use linking words (for example, because, and) and avoid repeating words. Correct noun capitalization and word order (e.g., “chicken curry”).

예시: My favourite food is milk rice, a traditional Sri Lankan dish made with coconut milk. I especially enjoy it with chicken curry because the rich coconut flavour balances the spicy sauce, and I often eat this combination at family gatherings.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence about your childhood preferences and then support it with specific examples. Avoid vague lists and repetition. Use linking words (for example, and, but, however) to connect ideas, and correct pluralization and word order (e.g., “rice and curry,” “junk food”).

예시: When I was young, I enjoyed a wide range of foods, but I especially liked traditional dishes such as rice and curry. However, I also loved occasional treats like sweets and fast food when my parents allowed them.

제안: Provide clear, relevant examples and avoid unclear or incorrect words (e.g., “Nivea” is a brand of skin cream and not a food). Mention seasonal dishes or festivals and describe one example with brief detail. Use linking words such as for example or during to make answers coherent.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during Christmas I enjoy special sweets and roasted dishes, and in the rainy season we often eat warm, spiced soups and steamed rice cakes.

제안: Answer directly whether your preference has changed, then explain clearly why with specific details. Correct grammar (tense and articles) and word choice (e.g., “I liked sweets as a child” or “My favourite food has changed”). Use linking words (because, so) to connect reason and result.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I preferred sweets like chocolate and toffees because they were fun treats, but now I prefer traditional savory dishes such as milk rice with chicken curry because I like stronger flavours.

× My favorite food is milk rice.

✓ My favourite food is milk rice.

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable, but 'favorite' should match the regional spelling used elsewhere (Examiner uses 'favourite'). This is a spelling/consistency issue rather than a grammar error; choose either British or American spelling and remain consistent.

× It is a traditional food in Sri Lanka and milk rice is made with real coconut milk.

✓ It is a traditional Sri Lankan dish and is made with real coconut milk.

The original repeats the subject awkwardly and uses 'food' twice. Rewriting to 'traditional Sri Lankan dish' avoids repetition and 'is made with' correctly describes the preparation. Keep subject concise and avoid redundancy.

× I personally like to eat meat rice with chicken Curry.

✓ I personally like to eat meat rice with chicken curry.

Capitalization of 'Curry' is incorrect — common nouns should be lowercase. Also 'personally' is acceptable but not necessary; the structure 'like to eat X with Y' is correct. Use lowercase for common nouns.

× It is amazing and delicious combination.

✓ It is an amazing and delicious combination.

The phrase is missing the indefinite article 'an' before a noun phrase starting with a vowel sound. Adding 'an' makes the noun phrase grammatically correct.

× Actually I like every food.

✓ Actually, I like every kind of food.

The sentence is understandable but sounds unnatural. Adding 'kind of' clarifies meaning. A comma after 'Actually' improves flow.

× Not one especially.

✓ Not really, not especially one in particular.

The fragment 'Not one especially' is incomplete. Converting it to a fuller response avoids sentence fragments and clarifies meaning.

× I like traditional food like rice and Curry, milk, rice, junk, junk food like.

✓ I like traditional foods like rice and curry, and also junk food.

The original repeats words and has awkward ordering. Use plural 'foods' when listing types, lowercase 'curry', and avoid repeating 'rice'. Combine items with 'and' for clarity.

× Yes, definitely. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

✓ Yes, definitely. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

This sentence is correct and matches the question about habitual actions, so no grammatical change is needed.

× Sometimes I eat Christmas food, sometimes I eat Nivea.

✓ Sometimes I eat Christmas food; other times I eat snacks like Nivea cream biscuits.

'Nivea' is a brand of skin cream and unclear in this context. If the student meant a Nivea-branded snack, specify it; otherwise say 'snacks' or the correct item. Use a semicolon or conjunction to connect related clauses.

× So it's like cookies Caro like that.

✓ So it's things like cookies and Caro biscuits.

The original is ungrammatical and vague. Rephrase to 'things like' followed by clear items. If 'Caro' refers to a biscuit brand, name it as 'Caro biscuits' for clarity.

× Yes, my favorite food is sweet for the child because I like chocolate Toffees.

✓ Yes, my favourite food as a child was sweets because I liked chocolate toffees.

The question asks about change since childhood, so use past tense 'was' and 'as a child'. Use plural 'sweets' for general category and lowercase 'toffees'. Adjust word order to 'because I liked...' to match past tense.