Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail and a brief reason. Avoid vague claims like “brings you a lot of energy” unless you explain why. Use linking words (for example, because) and reduce repetition.

예시: I love sushi because it combines fresh ingredients and varied textures. For example, salmon with avocado provides healthy fats and a creamy contrast to the rice, which makes it both satisfying and light.

제안: Begin with a direct topic sentence and correct grammatical errors. Be specific about which dishes you liked and give a short reason or memory. Use linking words like “for example” or “because” and avoid fillers that make the response unclear.

예시: When I was young I liked American food, especially burgers and French fries. For example, my father used to make homemade burgers for birthdays, and I always looked forward to that tradition because it felt special.

제안: Answer clearly and directly. If you don’t change your diet by season say so, then briefly explain why and give a concrete example. Avoid odd or unclear phrases like “a mix of flakes” and incorrect pairings (Italian cuisine with Japanese wine is odd unless you explain).

예시: Not really — I tend to eat similar foods year-round because I prefer a consistent routine. For example, I often eat Italian dishes like pasta throughout the year and sometimes pair them with a lighter white wine when I want something special.

제안: Use a concise topic sentence, explain how and why your tastes changed, and give a clear example. Avoid fillers like “uh” and odd terms such as “glucose seeds” (use ‘seeds’ or ‘whole grains’). Keep it to two or three sentences maximum.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed. As I’ve grown older I prefer more complex meals with balanced components — for example, I now enjoy plates that combine lean protein, a variety of vegetables, and whole grains or seeds for texture and nutrition.

× My favorite food is definitely sushi because there is a mix of flavor in one piece.

✓ My favorite food is definitely sushi because there is a mix of flavors in one piece.

The noun 'flavor' should be plural ('flavors') because 'a mix of' indicates multiple types; use plural after 'of' when referring to more than one item. Suggestion: Use plural nouns after 'a mix of' whenever more than one item is implied (e.g., 'a mix of flavors').

× For example, you can mix salmon with avocado and it brings you a lot of energy for your day and it is delicious.

✓ For example, you can mix salmon with avocado and it gives you a lot of energy throughout the day, and it is delicious.

Pronoun 'it' was used ambiguously; 'gives you energy throughout the day' is clearer and more natural. Also replace 'brings you a lot of energy for your day' with 'gives you a lot of energy throughout the day' for idiomatic usage. Suggestion: Use specific verbs ('give') and clearer time expressions ('throughout the day') to avoid ambiguity.

× If my memory suits me right, when I was young I preferred American cuisine with for instance burgers with French fries.

✓ If my memory serves me right, when I was young I preferred American cuisine, for instance burgers with French fries.

Phrase 'suits me right' is incorrect; idiomatic expression is 'serves me right' (though here correct is 'serves my memory right' -> 'If my memory serves me right'). Also add comma before the example for clarity. Suggestion: Use common idiomatic expressions and punctuation to improve clarity.

× I remember that it it is a specific dishes that my father cooked for us for any birthday or service.

✓ I remember that there were specific dishes my father cooked for us for every birthday or special occasion.

Sentence had redundancy ('it it'), incorrect article usage and number agreement ('a specific dishes'). 'There were' is appropriate for past existence and 'every birthday or special occasion' is clearer than 'any birthday or service'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb and article-noun agreement and remove duplicated words.

× I don't think I eat different foods related to different time of the year, but I definitely can say that I ate a variety of food in my daily routine.

✓ I don't think I eat different foods at different times of the year, but I can definitely say that I eat a variety of foods in my daily routine.

Mixing present and past tenses is inconsistent. Use present tense 'eat' to match 'I don't think' and plural 'foods' for variety; 'related to different time of the year' should be 'at different times of the year'. Suggestion: Keep verb tenses consistent within a sentence and use plural for countable nouns when referring to a variety.

× For example, I appreciate Italian cuisine with Japanese wine.

✓ For example, I enjoy Italian cuisine with Japanese wine.

'Appreciate' is not incorrect but sounds awkward here; 'enjoy' is a more natural verb for tastes in food. No grammatical rule violation but stylistic improvement. Suggestion: Use more natural collocations ('enjoy cuisine') in spoken answers.

× It's a mix of flakes.

✓ It's a mix of flavors.

'Flakes' is incorrect word choice in context; likely intended 'flavors' to describe taste combinations. This is a lexical error affecting meaning. Suggestion: Choose vocabulary that matches the intended meaning (flavors not flakes).

× Yeah, definitely my favorite food changed over the time.

✓ Yeah, definitely my favorite food has changed over time.

Use present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change from past to now. Also 'over the time' is incorrect; use 'over time' without 'the'. Suggestion: Use present perfect for changes that started in the past and continue to the present and correct time expressions.

× When I get older, I get also more specific and complex.

✓ As I got older, I became more selective and my tastes more complex.

Tense was inconsistent: discussion refers to past change, so use past simple ('got older', 'became'). 'More specific' is odd for taste; 'more selective' is better collocation. Also move adverb placement for natural order. Suggestion: Match tense to the timeline and use natural collocations ('selective', 'tastes more complex').

× I want a variety of flavor in one plate.

✓ I want a variety of flavors on one plate.

Use plural 'flavors' for variety and preposition 'on' for placement on a plate. 'One plate' is fine but 'on one plate' is idiomatic. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions for location and pluralize countable nouns when referring to variety.

× For example, a dish with protein, uh, vegetables and glucose seeds.

✓ For example, a dish with protein, vegetables, and grains rich in carbohydrates.

'Glucose seeds' is not a natural English phrase; likely intended to refer to seeds or grains that provide carbohydrates. Replace with clearer, commonly used terms like 'grains rich in carbohydrates' or 'seeds'. Suggestion: Use established food vocabulary; avoid literal translations that result in nonstandard phrases.