Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the food, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words, repetition and informal interjections (e.g., “lah”, “MMM”).

예시: My favourite food is ramen. I often eat it when I need comfort because the hot broth and noodles are soothing. For example, when I feel stressed from studying, a bowl of ramen helps me relax and feel more at ease.

제안: Use correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and avoid over-repetition. Give a clear topic sentence about past preference, then a specific reason or short example. Use one linking word to connect ideas.

예시: When I was young, I liked sweet foods such as banana bread and cookies because they reminded me of my mother’s baking. For example, the smell of banana bread always made me feel safe and happy.

제안: This answer is clear and relevant but needs minor grammar fixes and smoother linking. Use correct verb forms and cleaner linking phrases (e.g., “in winter” not “in some in winter”), and keep sentences concise.

예시: Yes, I eat different foods throughout the year. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups because they make me feel warm, while in summer I enjoy lemonade to stay refreshed.

제안: Provide a clear contrast between past and present preferences with correct tense and reduced hesitation. Use linking words such as “however” or “but” and give a brief reason for the change.

예시: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. When I was a child I loved sweets like candy and chocolate, but as I grew older I developed a taste for spicier foods, such as ramen, because I enjoy stronger flavours.

× My favorite food is to ramen.

✓ My favorite food is ramen.

The verb + -ing form category includes incorrect use of verbs as nouns. Here 'to ramen' is incorrect because 'ramen' is a noun and should not be used with the infinitive marker 'to'. Use the noun alone: 'My favorite food is ramen.' This fits the copular 'be' structure where a noun follows 'is'.

× I often eat it when I want comfort and the taste bring me back to my comfort zone lah.

✓ I often eat it when I want comfort and the taste brings me back to my comfort zone.

The subject 'the taste' is singular, so the verb must be 'brings' (third person singular). Also remove colloquial filler 'lah' for standard grammar. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with singular or plural subjects.

× For example if I feel so stressed during study so I eat eat after that to feel very comfort MMM.

✓ For example, if I feel very stressed while studying, I eat it afterwards to feel comforted.

This sentence has structural problems: missing commas, incorrect preposition 'during study', repeated word 'eat eat', and wrong adjective 'comfort' used instead of past participle 'comforted'. Use 'while studying' or 'during my studies', 'afterwards' for sequence, and 'comforted' to describe a feeling. Break into clearer clauses and add punctuation.

× When I were young, I would like something sweet like banana bread or cookie because it remind me to my mother.

✓ When I was young, I liked sweet things like banana bread or cookies because they reminded me of my mother.

Use past tense: 'were' -> 'was' for singular 'I'. 'Would like' is inappropriate for past habitual; use 'liked'. Count nouns need plural 'cookies' or 'a cookie'. Verb 'remind' should be past 'reminded'. Preposition is 'reminded me of my mother'. Ensure tense consistency.

× That used to be big for me during my childhood, so it feels very, very, very comfort.

✓ That used to be a big deal for me during my childhood, so it felt very, very, very comforting.

'Big' alone is vague; native speakers say 'a big deal'. Maintain past tense 'felt' to match 'used to be'. 'Comfort' is a noun; use adjective 'comforting' to describe the feeling. Avoid repetitive filler; one or two repetitions are enough for emphasis.

× Yes, I do eat different food at different time of the year.

✓ Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year.

Countable nouns need plural when referring to different kinds: 'different foods'. 'Time' should be plural 'times' to indicate multiple periods in the year. Keep subject-verb structure unchanged.

× For example in some in winter I prefer to eat soup because it make me feel warm, while during summer I like to drink lemonade to keep refreshed.

✓ For example, in winter I prefer to eat soup because it makes me feel warm, while during summer I like to drink lemonade to stay refreshed.

Remove redundant 'in some in'. Use comma after introductory phrase. 'Make' needs third person singular 'makes' to match 'it'. 'Keep refreshed' is awkward; use 'stay refreshed'.

× Yes, my favorite food has changed since childhood.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since childhood.

This sentence is correct as written. The present perfect 'has changed' properly expresses change from the past to the present. No correction needed.

× When I was child I love to eat something sweet like candy or chocolate, but as I grew older I prefer umm, something spicy itself like ramen.

✓ When I was a child I loved to eat sweets like candy or chocolate, but as I grew older I preferred spicier things, such as ramen.

Add article 'a' before 'child'. Maintain past tense: 'love' -> 'loved' and 'prefer' -> 'preferred'. 'Something sweet' becomes plural 'sweets' or 'sweet things'. 'Itself' is unnecessary and incorrect here; use 'spicier things' or 'spicy food'. Provide an example with 'such as ramen'.