Food— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., "My favorite food is seafood"), avoid repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Mention specific dishes or reasons concisely.

예시: My favorite food is seafood. For example, I often eat grilled fish and sardines because they are rich in vitamins and zinc, which help boost my immune system. Because of this, I feel healthier and more energetic.

제안: Provide a clear past-tense topic sentence and organised supporting details. Use correct grammar (past simple), avoid unclear phrases, and give a specific example of a favourite dish or memory. Use a linking word to connect ideas.

예시: When I was young, I liked eating fruit, especially avocado and blueberries. For instance, my mother often sliced strawberries and blueberries and mixed them into a small cake or yogurt, which I loved because it tasted fresh and sweet.

제안: Answer directly and clearly using present simple for habitual actions. Organise ideas with linking words (e.g., "sometimes", "however"). Be specific about seasonal changes or habits and correct grammar ("I eat", "once a week").

예시: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I eat more salads and fruits, but in winter I prefer warm dishes like soups. However, I also treat myself to fast food such as burgers or pizza about once a week.

제안: Give a clear past-to-present comparison using correct tense and concise language. State how tastes have changed, explain reasons, and give a concrete example of what you eat now versus before. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to show cause.

예시: Yes, my tastes have changed a lot. When I was a child I used to eat many sugary snacks, but as I grew older I focused more on healthy foods because I wanted to improve my fitness. For example, I now prefer grilled fish and vegetables instead of candy.

× My favorite food mainly is seafood.

✓ My favorite food is mainly seafood.

Word order: the adverb 'mainly' should come after the verb 'is' to modify the clause correctly. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I like to eat fish, sardine and some of tuna sometimes.

✓ I like to eat fish, sardines and some tuna sometimes.

Countable nouns need correct pluralization and 'some of' is not used before a bare noun here. Use plural 'sardines' and 'some tuna' for correct quantity expression. Grammar problem type ID:1

× It's contains a lot of vitamins and zinc, something that improve my health a lot and makes me feel better.

✓ It contains a lot of vitamins and zinc, which improve my health a lot and make me feel better.

Use correct subject-verb agreement: 'It contains' (singular) is fine, but 'vitamins and zinc' is plural so verbs should be 'improve' and 'make'. Replace 'something that' with 'which' for a proper relative clause. Grammar problem type ID:27

× I like to eat some fruits and avocado and blueberries.

✓ I liked to eat some fruit, avocados and blueberries when I was young.

Question asks about past preferences ('when you were young'), so use past tense 'liked' and adjust countable nouns: 'fruit' as uncountable or plural 'avocados'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× It's make me the fruits.

✓ They made me like fruit.

Pronoun 'It' is unclear; refer to the fruits with 'they' (plural). Verb tense should match past context: 'made'. Structure 'made me like' expresses cause. Grammar problem type ID:12

× My mom was cut the strawberries and the blueberries and mix it with some cake and yeah, I like the food.

✓ My mom used to cut the strawberries and blueberries and mix them with some cake, and I liked that food.

Use appropriate past habitual form 'used to cut' or simple past 'cut'. Match plurals with pronoun 'them'. End clause should be past 'liked' to match time frame. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Yes, I ate a different different multiple food.

✓ Yes, I ate many different kinds of food.

Use 'many different kinds of food' for natural English. 'Ate' is past tense and correct; remove duplicated 'different' and fix quantifier and noun phrase. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I ate fast food and healthy food a lot.

✓ I ate fast food and healthy food a lot.

This sentence is acceptable; no article needed before uncountable nouns 'fast food' and 'healthy food'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I mix between the burger and the pizza at least one times a week.

✓ I alternate between burgers and pizza at least once a week.

Use 'alternate between' or 'mix' without 'between' + 'the'. Use plural 'burgers' and singular 'once' for frequency 'once a week'. Grammar problem type ID:14

× I'm often eating a healthy food improving my health because personal trainer.

✓ I often eat healthy food to improve my health because I have a personal trainer.

Use simple present 'I often eat' for habitual action. 'Healthy food' is uncountable so no 'a'. Add 'to' + verb for purpose and include subject 'I' before 'have a personal trainer'. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, uh, my taste is food is that change a lot.

✓ Yes, my taste in food has changed a lot.

Correct idiom is 'taste in food'. Use present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change from past to present. Remove redundant words. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Uh, when I was a child, I used to eat a lot of sugar and sweet and so on.

✓ When I was a child, I used to eat a lot of sugar and sweets, and so on.

Use 'sweets' plural for countable candies. 'Used to' correctly indicates past habit; add comma for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:5

× But when I grow up, uh, I started to improve my health habit by eating uh, a healthy food and uh, improve my umm.

✓ But when I grew up, I started improving my health habits by eating healthy food and improving my lifestyle.

Use past 'grew up' to match 'started'. 'Started improving' or 'started to improve' is correct. 'Health habits' plural, 'healthy food' without 'a', and complete last phrase 'improving my lifestyle' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6