Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be clearer and more concise. Begin with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), avoid repetition, and give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep to 2–4 sentences total.

예시: No, I usually only carry one key for the front door because the other doors in my house are not locked. Therefore, I don’t need to bring many keys with me when I go out.

제안: Clarify the event and use correct vocabulary (keys vs. kids). Start with a clear statement, give a specific past example with a time reference, explain the result using a linking word, and avoid unrelated fragments. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I lost my keys once when I was a child at school about fifteen years ago. Since then I have become much more careful, so I always keep my keys in my pocket to avoid losing them again.

제안: Be concise and eliminate hesitations. Give a direct negative response, then one clear reason using a linking word, and a brief habit to support it. Keep sentences fluent and grammatical.

예시: No, I have never locked myself out. I always check that I have my keys before leaving the house, so I rarely forget them.

제안: State your opinion clearly, give specific reasons and an alternative solution. Use linking words (because, so) and correct verb forms. Avoid trailing off and finish the answer in 2–3 sentences.

예시: I don't think it is a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour because I am new to the area and I don't know them well. Instead, I keep a spare key at my parents' house so I can get in if I ever lose mine.

× I always have one front doors front door key with myself because any other door in my house is not locked to.

✓ I always have one front door key with me because no other door in my house is locked.

The error mixes singular and plural ('front doors' vs 'front door') and uses incorrect preposition and pronoun forms ('with myself', 'not locked to'). Use singular 'front door key' and 'with me'. Also express 'no other door is locked' rather than 'not locked to' for correct English.

× I have to bring the keys with with my with my.

✓ I have to bring the keys with me.

The sentence repeats words and uses the wrong pronoun form 'my' instead of the object pronoun 'me'. Use 'bring the keys with me' as the correct object pronoun after a preposition.

× Yes, maybe I'll have.

✓ Yes, maybe I have.

'I'll have' implies future possession and is incorrect here. The student intends to say they possibly have lost keys before; better is 'maybe I have' or more naturally 'Yes, maybe I have before.' However context (past event) suggests 'Yes, I have.'

× Many years ago, when I was a child, I lost my kids in my school and now there is no I'm more conscious about my kids and always I put them in my pocket.

✓ Many years ago, when I was a child, I lost my keys at my school, and now I am more conscious about my keys and always put them in my pocket.

The student used 'kids' instead of 'keys' (word choice) and mixed tenses and word order. Use simple past 'lost' for the past event and present simple 'I am more conscious' for current state. Also correct preposition 'at school' and pronoun/word order: 'always put them in my pocket.'

× And finally.

✓ (Omit or complete the sentence)

'And finally.' is a sentence fragment without a verb or object. Either delete it or complete the thought, for example: 'And finally, I learned to be more careful.'

× It's never happened to me, uh, because I my, my door and lock is standard and I always carry my keys with myself before I leave my house.

✓ It has never happened to me because my door and lock are standard, and I always carry my keys with me before I leave the house.

Use present perfect 'has never happened' for experiences up to now. 'My door and lock' is a plural subject so use 'are'. Use object pronoun 'me' not 'myself' and avoid repeated fillers. 'Before I leave the house' is the correct time clause.

× I'm really careful about it and check my keys before I leave the house. Uh, when?

✓ I'm really careful about it and check my keys before I leave the house.

The addition 'Uh, when?' is an incomplete fragment that does not belong; remove it. The main sentence is correct after prior fixes.

× I've never leave my keys uh with a neighbor because I'm new to the area and I don't know anyone.

✓ I've never left my keys with a neighbor because I'm new to the area and I don't know anyone.

Use present perfect 'I've never left' for experiences up to now. 'Leave' is base form; past participle 'left' is required with 'have'.

× I can't trust them but I always leave a backup key with my parents home, in my parents home and whenever I.

✓ I can't trust anyone, but I always leave a backup key at my parents' home.

Use 'anyone' instead of 'them' when generalizing. Use preposition 'at' with 'home' and possessive form 'parents'' for ownership. The sentence fragment 'and whenever I.' is incomplete and should be removed or completed. Keep concise: 'I always leave a backup key at my parents' home.'