Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be direct and use correct tense and article usage. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add one brief supporting detail. Avoid unnecessary words like “simple” if you mean “only.” Correct grammar: use present simple for habitual actions and correct noun forms.

예시: No, I don't carry many keys. I usually take only the key for my front door because I keep other keys at home for safety.

제안: Use correct past tense and complete sentences. Answer the question first, then give a specific past example using past tense. Clarify consequences and what you did next. Use linking words like “but” or “so.”

예시: No, I have never lost my keys, but two years ago I broke one of my keys. Because I didn’t have a spare, I had to call a locksmith, which was expensive and inconvenient.

제안: Keep answers clear and grammatical. Start by answering frequency (e.g. rarely, sometimes). Use correct subject-verb agreement and clear vocabulary (e.g. spare key, unlock). Provide a concise example with linking words (“for example”, “once”).

예시: Rarely. Once after breaking a key I locked myself out, but my sister had a spare key and came to open the door for me.

제안: Answer directly and give a clear reason. Use correct vocabulary (neighbour, spare key, security issues) and grammar. Avoid confusing phrases. Offer a brief alternative if you disagree (e.g. use a trusted friend or lockbox).

예시: I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour because of security concerns. Instead, I prefer leaving a spare key with a trusted family member or using a secure lockbox.

× I always bring a simple key with me.

✓ I always bring a single key with me.

The student used 'simple key' which is unnatural and likely intended 'single key' (meaning one key). This is a word choice/number meaning issue; 'single' correctly conveys singular quantity. Suggestion: use 'single' or 'one' for indicating one item.

× It was the main door of my home.

✓ It is the main door of my home.

The examiner's question asks about habitual possession; present tense 'is' should be used instead of past 'was'. Use present tense for general facts. Suggestion: use 'is' when stating a fact that remains true.

× No, I don't lost my keys, but I remember two years ago I broke a key.

✓ No, I haven't lost my keys, but I remember that two years ago I broke a key.

'Don't lost' is incorrect: present perfect 'haven't lost' is appropriate for life experience up to now. Also a time expression 'two years ago' with 'remember' requires past tense 'broke' which is correct; add 'that' for clarity. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences and correct auxiliary: 'have/has + past participle'.

× It was very dangerous because of it.

✓ It was very inconvenient because of that.

The phrase 'because of it' is awkward and 'dangerous' doesn't fit breaking a key. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Replace with 'because of that' or 'because of it' tied to a clear noun, and choose accurate adjective such as 'inconvenient' or 'problematic'. Suggestion: refer clearly to the cause and use an appropriate adjective.

× Don't have alternate key.

✓ I didn't have an alternate key.

'Don't have' is present negative; context is past (two years ago), so use past simple 'didn't have' and include subject 'I'. Suggestion: ensure tense and subject are present in the sentence.

× Is Fujitsu echo?

✓ (Unclear sentence - possible intended meaning: 'It was a funny story' or 'It was because of the echo')

The sentence 'Is Fujitsu echo?' is ungrammatical and unclear. It may be a mispronunciation or irrelevant phrase. Suggestion: clarify intended meaning and then form a complete sentence with subject and verb.

× I locked my door without keys after the incidents.

✓ I locked my door and was without keys after the incident.

'After the incidents' is plural and vague; likely one incident so use singular 'incident'. Also 'locked my door without keys' is understandable but better as 'locked my door and was without keys' to show result. Suggestion: match singular/plural and make the sequence of events clear.

× My sister have a alternate game.

✓ My sister has an alternate key.

'Have' should agree with singular subject 'sister' -> 'has'. Also 'a alternate game' is wrong word choice; likely 'alternate key'. Use 'an' before vowel sound. Suggestion: ensure verb matches subject number and choose correct noun.

× She comes to me and open the door.

✓ She comes to me and opens the door.

With compound verbs joined by 'and' the second verb must agree with the singular subject: 'opens'. Use third person singular present 'opens'. Suggestion: for he/she/it use verb+s in present simple.

× It's helpful but I don't prefer this because of it had a security issues so I don't think it's a good idea to leave our kids with a never.

✓ It can be helpful, but I don't prefer it because it has security issues, so I don't think it's a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour.

Multiple errors: pronouns 'this'/'it' used inconsistently; 'because of it had' is ungrammatical—use 'because it has' (present) to express general truth. 'a security issues' mixes article and plural; use 'security issues' or 'a security issue'. 'our kids with a never' is incorrect: probably meant 'keys with a neighbour'. Suggestion: keep pronouns consistent, match verb tense, correct articles and choose correct nouns ('neighbour').