Keys— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct grammar and vocabulary (keys, not kids). Give a clear topic sentence, then one or two concise supporting details using linking words. Keep within 3–4 sentences and avoid irrelevant phrases like “secret room.” Be specific about where you keep keys and why.

예시: Not really. I usually only carry one or two keys because having many is inconvenient. For example, I keep my spare keys in a small pouch in my bag and the rest on a key rack at home so I don’t have to carry them around.

제안: Fix word choice and tense: say ‘lost my scooter keys’ and use past tense consistently. Provide a brief description of what happened, how you dealt with it, and a consequence or lesson. Use linking words like ‘so’ or ‘therefore’.

예시: Yes, I lost my scooter keys last month when I left them at a café. As a result, I had to get a replacement key cut, which was expensive, so now I always keep a photo of important keys and a spare at home.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity: use ‘keys’ and correct verb forms. Start with a clear direct answer, then add a brief supporting detail and a linking word (e.g., ‘however’, ‘sometimes’). Be specific about how you prevent it or what happens when it occurs.

예시: Not really. I usually keep my keys in my bag, however sometimes I forget them on the kitchen table and end up locked out. When that happens I call a family member or a locksmith, so now I always hang my keys on a hook by the door.

제안: Use correct expressions and simpler sentence structure. Start with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons and a linking word like ‘because’ or ‘however’. Avoid double negatives and word errors (‘never’→‘neighbour’ confusion).

예시: I don’t think it’s a good idea to leave keys with a neighbour because you can’t be sure how responsible they are. Instead, I prefer to leave a spare with a close family member or use a secure lockbox so I don’t rely on someone I don’t fully trust.

× Not really, I usually not bring a lot of kids with me because it is quite irritating for me.

✓ Not really. I usually do not bring a lot of keys with me because it is quite irritating for me.

The sentence misuses 'not' placement and has 'kids' instead of 'keys' (likely a typo). 'Usually not bring' is incorrect; with adverb 'usually' the correct negative form uses auxiliary 'do not' + base verb: 'I usually do not bring' or 'I don't usually bring'. Also commas and run-on structure are fixed by splitting into two sentences. Suggestion: use 'I don't usually bring many keys with me' for more natural phrasing.

× I usually keep them in my secret room.

✓ I usually keep them in my secret room.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable if 'secret room' is intended. No change required. If you mean a 'safe' or 'secret place', consider 'in my secret place' or 'in a safe place'. The word 'them' correctly refers to plural 'keys'.

× Yes, I lost my scooter kids last month.

✓ Yes, I lost my scooter keys last month.

The main issue is a typo 'kids' instead of 'keys'. The past tense 'lost' is correctly used for an event that happened last month. Ensure correct noun: 'scooter keys' refers to keys for the scooter.

× It was quite. Difficult moment for me and I have to bring new keys.

✓ It was quite a difficult moment for me and I had to get new keys.

The original has an erroneous period splitting 'quite' and 'Difficult', and tense inconsistency: describing a past event should use past tense 'had to' or 'I had to get new keys'. 'Bring new keys' is unnatural; use 'get' or 'buy new keys' or 'get replacements'. Suggestion: 'It was quite a difficult moment for me, and I had to get new keys.'

× Not really, I usually keep my kids safely but sometimes accidentally it happened and it leads to quite a stressful moment for me.

✓ Not really. I usually keep my keys safe, but sometimes accidents happen and it leads to quite a stressful moment for me.

Problems: 'kids' should be 'keys'; 'keep my keys safely' -> 'keep my keys safe' (adjective use); 'sometimes accidentally it happened' is ungrammatical — use 'sometimes accidents happen' or 'sometimes it happens accidentally'. Tense consistency: 'leads' can stay present for habitual result, but 'it leads' is acceptable; alternatively 'and it is quite stressful' works. Suggestion: 'I usually keep my keys safe, but sometimes accidents happen, which is quite stressful.'

× To be very friendly, it's not good idea to leave our keys with never, because we can't judge any person's personality and can't trust fully trusted them.

✓ To be honest, it's not a good idea to leave our keys with a neighbour, because we can't judge a person's character and cannot fully trust them.

Multiple errors: 'To be very friendly' is incorrect phrase for expressing opinion—use 'To be honest' or 'Frankly'. 'Not good idea' needs article: 'not a good idea'. 'Never' is incorrect; should be 'neighbour'. 'Any person's personality' is awkward; use 'a person's character'. 'Can't trust fully trusted them' has redundancy and wrong word order; use 'cannot fully trust them'. Suggestion: 'Frankly, it's not a good idea to leave our keys with a neighbour, because we cannot fully trust someone we don't know well.'