Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct pronunciation/word choice errors, grammar and sentence structure. Be concise: directly state habit, reason, locations, and frequency. Use linking words for clarity. Replace incorrect words (e.g., 'leash' → 'reach', 'tips' → 'steps', 'allow' → 'around', 'It's help' → 'It helps'). Keep maximum 3–4 short sentences.

예시: Yes, I walk a lot. I try to reach 10,000 steps per day because walking helps me stay healthy and fit. I usually walk in the park or around my neighborhood after work.

제안: Tense and word choice errors: use past tense consistently ('preferred', 'felt'). Avoid unclear words ('Visually', 'shed'). Structure: start with a topic sentence, then give clear supporting details and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

예시: Yes, I often went for walks with my friends after school. I preferred walking because it was a fun way to stay fit and relax, and we usually walked around the neighborhood park which felt refreshing.

제안: Improve grammar and plural/singular agreement and add linking words. Use precise vocabulary: 'surroundings', 'nature' → 'natural surroundings'. Make sentences concise and show cause and effect with words like 'so' or 'therefore'.

예시: People like walking in parks because they can get fresh air and enjoy peaceful surroundings, so it helps them relax. Also, being in nature clears the mind and often makes people feel more creative and focused.

제안: Fix grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Be specific about location and reasons. Remove confusing fragments ('capital cooler help'). Use conditional + reason and linking words ('because', 'so').

예시: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk near the little shop in my village because it has lovely scenery. I think walking there would help my fitness and be good for my heart because regular walking improves cardiovascular health.

제안: Correct word choice and tense: use past simple or present perfect consistently. Remove extraneous words ('They sadly'). Use a clear topic sentence then supporting reasons. Keep concise and natural.

예시: Lately I have been walking in a local park because it's only about a 15-minute walk from my home. I go there to get fresh air, enjoy the scenery, and have some time to myself after a long day.

× I walk a lot because I aim to leash 10,000 tips a day.

✓ I walk a lot because I aim to reach 10,000 steps a day.

The original uses incorrect words 'leash' and 'tips' which are likely misspellings. 'Aim to reach' is correct verb + base form after 'aim to'. Use 'steps' (noun) for walking count. Suggestion: practice correct collocations like 'aim to reach 10,000 steps'.

× It's help keep me healthy and fit during the week and I usually walk in the park or allow my neighborhood after work.

✓ It helps keep me healthy and fit during the week and I usually walk in the park or around my neighborhood after work.

Subject 'It' requires third person singular verb 'helps' (rule: add -s for he/she/it). 'Allow my neighborhood' is incorrect; correct preposition is 'around' to express moving within an area. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with subjects and use correct prepositions for location.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

Question form 'Did you' requires base verb 'go' (already correct) but the phrase 'to have a walk' is unnatural; 'for a walk' is the idiomatic past context. Suggestion: prefer 'go for a walk' in both present and past contexts.

× When I was a child, I prefer going for a walk with my friends after school because I feel it was a good way to stay fit and look after my heart.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred going for a walk with my friends after school because I felt it was a good way to stay fit and look after my heart.

The sentence refers to past time 'When I was a child' so verbs should be in past tense: 'prefer' -> 'preferred' and 'feel' -> 'felt'. Maintain consistent tense. Suggestion: match verb tense to the time frame indicated.

× Visually walked around the neighborhood park, which was both refreshing and a nice chance to shed and relax.

✓ We usually walked around the neighborhood park, which was both refreshing and a nice chance to rest and relax.

Sentence lacks a subject ('Visually' is irrelevant). 'Shed' is incorrect in this context; likely intended 'rest' or 'chat'. I added subject 'We' and corrected verb 'walked' to past to match earlier clause, and replaced 'shed' with 'rest' to make meaning clear. Suggestion: include clear subject and choose verbs that match intended meaning.

× People like walking in park because they can get fresh air and enjoy peaceful surrounding which help them relax.

✓ People like walking in parks because they can get fresh air and enjoy the peaceful surroundings which help them relax.

Use plural 'parks' or 'the park'; 'park' without article is incorrect. 'Surrounding' should be plural 'surroundings' and 'peaceful' needs 'the' to specify environment. Also 'help' agrees with plural 'surroundings'. Suggestion: check articles and count nouns; use plural for general statements.

× Walking in the nature also clear the mind and can make people feel more creative and focus.

✓ Walking in nature also clears the mind and can make people feel more creative and focused.

Do not use 'the' before 'nature' in general statements: 'in nature'. Subject 'Walking' (singular gerund) requires 'clears' (third person singular). 'Focus' should be adjective 'focused' to describe people. Suggestion: ensure verb agreement with gerunds and use correct adjective forms.

× If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk near the small shop in my village.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk near the small shop in my village.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable as a second conditional expressing hypothetical desire, so no change is needed. Note: keep structure 'If I had..., I would...'.

× It's a lovely place to enjoy the scenery and walking there help me keep fits especially for my heart because I heard regular walking is good for capital cooler help.

✓ It's a lovely place to enjoy the scenery, and walking there helps me keep fit, especially for my heart, because I heard regular walking is good for cardiovascular health.

'Walking' (gerund) requires third person singular verb 'helps'. 'Keep fits' is incorrect; use 'keep fit' (adjective). The phrase 'capital cooler help' is garbled; replace with 'cardiovascular health' to express heart benefit. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use correct medical collocations.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

The word 'lately' is acceptable but in questions about specific past actions 'recently' is more natural. This is a stylistic suggestion rather than strict grammar.

× They sadly I have been working in a local park because it's only about a 15 minute walk from my home.

✓ Sadly, I have been walking in a local park because it's only about a 15-minute walk from my home.

Original begins with 'They sadly' which is incorrect. 'I have been working' contradicts context; likely 'walking'. Added comma after 'Sadly' and hyphenated '15-minute'. Suggestion: ensure adverbs are placed correctly and use correct main verb matching context.

× I go there to get fresh air, enjoy the scenery and have some time to myself after a long day.

✓ I go there to get fresh air, enjoy the scenery, and have some time to myself after a long day.

This sentence is grammatically correct; only added a serial comma for clarity. No tense change required. Suggestion: keep parallel verb forms in lists.