Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer clear and grammatical: state directly whether you walk a lot, give one reason, and a specific routine detail. Use correct verb forms and concise sentences (max 3–4).

예시: Yes, I walk quite often. I find walking helps me stay fit and reduces stress, so I try to walk for about 30 minutes most days in the park near my house.

제안: Answer directly about the past, then contrast briefly with the present. Use past tense for childhood and correct vocabulary (walk/walking, not work). Keep it concise and specific.

예시: Not really. When I was a child I rarely went for walks because I preferred playing indoors. Now, however, I walk regularly in the park near my house to relax and exercise.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence stating reasons, then add two specific supporting points with linking words (for example, because/also). Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

예시: People often walk in parks because they offer fresh air and a peaceful atmosphere. In addition, parks are usually close to where people live, so it’s easy to go for a short walk after work or at the weekend.

제안: Answer the hypothetical clearly (e.g. I would like to walk...). Provide specific sensory details (trees, lake, quiet paths) and correct vocabulary; avoid unclear phrases like 'bus made me walked'.

예시: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the park near my house because the shady trees and quiet paths help me clear my mind. Walking around the lake is especially calming and leaves me feeling refreshed.

제안: Answer briefly and clearly in past tense for a recent action. State when and where, and add one specific detail about the walk. Keep it natural and fluent.

예시: I’m usually very busy, but I did go for a walk yesterday in the park near my home. I walked around the small lake to relax after work, and it helped me unwind.

× Yes, I work a lot walking have keep me fixed and reduce that, so I try to work for about 30 minutes mostly you usually in the park near my house.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot; walking helps me relax and reduce stress, so I try to walk for about 30 minutes, usually in the park near my house.

The original sentence has multiple structure problems: incorrect word order, incorrect verb forms, and unclear phrases. 'Work' was used instead of 'walk'; 'walking have keep me fixed and reduce that' is ungrammatical. I corrected verbs and order to convey the intended meaning: 'walking helps me relax and reduce stress.' Use a semicolon or commas to join related clauses, and place time/place phrases ('usually in the park near my house') at the end for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:26

× When I was a child, I didn't really appreciate the benefits of working, so I didn't go out for work often.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't really appreciate the benefits of walking, so I didn't go out for walks often.

The speaker used 'working' and 'go out for work' incorrectly; the correct activity is 'walking.' Use the noun 'walks' for plural occurrences. Past tense 'didn't' is correct, but the activity word needed correction to match meaning. Grammar problem type ID:5

× Now I'm an adult and I work a lot, so I usually take school in the park near my house to relax and get some exercise.

✓ Now I'm an adult and I walk a lot, so I usually go to the park near my house to relax and get some exercise.

'Work a lot' and 'take school in the park' are incorrect phrases. Replace 'work' with 'walk' and use 'go to the park' to indicate visiting a location. Maintain present simple for habitual actions ('I walk', 'I usually go'). Grammar problem type ID:26

× I think it depends but many people forgot for what Inspired to relax and get some fresh air.

✓ I think it depends, but many people forget what inspires them to relax and get some fresh air.

Tense and pronoun issues: 'forgot' (past) should be present 'forget' for general truth; 'for what Inspired' is ungrammatical—use 'what inspires them.' Add 'them' as the pronoun referring to people. Keep present simple for general statements. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Parks provide a tranquil environment and are conveniently located so it's easy for people to go for a short walk at the walk or on weekends.

✓ Parks provide a tranquil environment and are conveniently located, so it's easy for people to go for a short walk after work or on weekends.

'At the walk' is incorrect; likely intended 'after work.' Added a comma before 'so' to separate clauses, and used 'after work' to indicate timing. Maintained present simple for general facts. Grammar problem type ID:26

× I usually like to take a long walk in the park near my house because it lets me get fresh air and clear my mind.

✓ I usually like to take a long walk in the park near my house because it lets me get fresh air and clear my mind.

This sentence is correct; article use and structure are appropriate. No change needed. Grammar problem type ID:22

× The tree and bus made me walked made the walk peaceful and I always feel relaxed and refreshed afterward.

✓ The trees and bushes along the path make the walk peaceful, and I always feel relaxed and refreshed afterward.

Original has incorrect noun forms and verb agreement: 'The tree and bus' should be plural 'trees and bushes' (likely intended), and 'made me walked made' is ungrammatical. Use present simple 'make' to describe general truth. Also add 'along the path' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27

× Actually I'm very busy mostly, but I used to go for a walk in the park near my home.

✓ Actually I'm usually very busy, but I go for walks in the park near my home.

'Used to go' suggests a past habit; context suggests a current occasional habit. Replace 'used to' with present simple 'go' or 'go for walks' and adjust adverb placement: 'usually very busy.' Grammar problem type ID:6

× The last time I went for a walk was yesterday and I walked around the small lake to relax after work.

✓ The last time I went for a walk was yesterday; I walked around the small lake to relax after work.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; added a semicolon for clarity between related clauses. Past tense 'went' and 'walked' are correctly used to describe a past event. Grammar problem type ID:5