Walking— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: まず文法と語彙の誤りを直し、意味を明確にしてください。現在の回答には主語と動詞の一致のミス（"It's makes"）、不自然な語（"little locks"）と時制の曖昧さがあります。また、情報が散らばっているので、トピックセンテンス→理由→具体例の順で最大3文〜4文にまとめると自然です。つなぎ言葉（"because", "for example", "so" など）を適切に使って論理的につなげてください。

예시: Yes, I do. I usually walk to the station and sometimes take a walk in the park because it helps me feel refreshed. For example, I walk for about 30 minutes almost every day, which clears my mind and gives me some light exercise.

제안: 文法（"went outside"、過去形の一致、動名詞/不定詞の使い方）を正しくし、語順を自然にして下さい。追加情報は具体的に述べ、接続詞でつなぐと良いです。また、動詞はすべて過去形で統一します。回答は2〜3文で簡潔に。

예시: Yes, I often went outside when I was a child. For example, I usually walked to the park with my parents and we played catch together, or sometimes we just strolled around the playground.

제안: 主語と動詞の一致（"walking... has"または"walks... are"）、語彙選択（"relax"→"relaxed"や"relaxation"）を直してください。理由を1つか2つに絞り、具体例を短く付け加え、接続語（"because", "for example", "also"）でつなぐと論理的になります。

예시: I think people like walking in parks because they enjoy being in nature and it helps reduce stress. For example, many people walk with friends or take their dogs, which makes the experience more enjoyable.

제안: 語彙の誤用（"deluxe"は不適切）や不自然な表現を改善してください。理由は簡潔にし、具体的な状況（時間帯、誰と、どのくらい）を自然な表現で述べます。文法と語順（"with friends"、過去/仮定法の一致）にも注意してください。

예시: I'd like to take a long walk along the coast because I love the sea, fresh air and open views, which help me relax and clear my mind. For example, I would go there in the morning with some friends and walk for two hours while talking.

제안: 意味が不明瞭な箇所（"I went to your work"、"the locks"）を直し、過去形を正確に使ってください。また、理由や詳細を文の順序で整理し、繰り返しを避けてください。2〜3文で事実→理由→活動の順に述べると効果的です。

예시: I went for a walk in the local park with my friends yesterday because the weather was nice. We played catch and football, and spent about two hours enjoying the sunshine.

× It's makes me refresh and little locks.

✓ It makes me feel refreshed and a little relaxed.

The original sentence has unnecessary 's' with 'makes' after 'It' and uses incorrect word forms 'refresh' and 'locks'. Use 'make someone feel' + adjective: 'It makes me feel refreshed'. Also 'little locks' is nonsensical; context suggests 'a little relaxed'. Improve by using appropriate adjectives and the expression 'feel refreshed'. Grammar problem type IDs applicable: 6 (Present tense issue) and 26 (Sentence structure errors).

× For example, almost every day I work about 30 minutes.

✓ For example, almost every day I walk for about 30 minutes.

The student used 'work' but context is walking. Also duration expressions with verbs of movement use 'walk for 30 minutes'. Maintain present simple for habitual actions: 'I walk for about 30 minutes almost every day.' Grammar problem type ID: 6.

× Yes, I often went to outside to have a walk when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to have a walk when I was a child.

Do not use 'to' before 'outside' in this context. 'Go outside' is the correct verb+adverb structure. The sentence otherwise uses past simple correctly for a past habit. Grammar problem type ID: 11.

× For example I usually walked to the park with my parents and play catch and sometimes just walking.

✓ For example, I usually walked to the park with my parents and played catch, and sometimes we just walked.

Mix of past and non-finite forms causes inconsistency. Maintain past simple ('walked', 'played') for past habits. 'play catch' should be 'played catch' and 'just walking' should be 'we just walked' to form a complete clause. Grammar problem type IDs: 5 (Past tense issue) and 27 (Subject-verb agreement/consistency).

× Well, I think the main reason is that people enjoy being in nature because walking in the park have some relax and reduce stress.

✓ Well, I think the main reason is that people enjoy being in nature because walking in the park is relaxing and reduces stress.

'Walking in the park have' is incorrect: 'walking' as a noun requires singular verb 'is' and a gerund/adjective 'relaxing' is appropriate. Also use 'reduces' for singular subject 'walking' or 'it'. Maintain subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type IDs: 6 and 27.

× For example people, many people work with friends or take their dog and they looks really enjoy.

✓ For example, many people go with friends or take their dog, and they look really happy enjoying it.

'Work with friends' is wrong in this context; use 'go with friends' or 'walk with friends'. 'They looks' should be 'they look' (subject-verb agreement). 'Really enjoy' needs an object or '-ing' form; rephrase to 'really happy enjoying it' or 'seem to enjoy it'. Grammar problem type IDs: 27 and 26.

× Well, I would like to take a long walk along the coast.

✓ Well, I would like to take a long walk along the coast.

This sentence is grammatically correct for the hypothetical question. No correction needed. Grammar problem type ID: 7.

× I love the sea, air and the open view because it helps me deluxe and clear my mind.

✓ I love the sea, the fresh air, and the open view because it helps me relax and clear my mind.

'Deluxe' is an incorrect word choice; use 'relax'. Add 'the' before 'fresh air' for parallel structure and clarity. 'Helps me relax and clear my mind' is the correct collocation. Grammar problem type IDs: 13 (Incorrect use of adjectives) and 26.

× For example, I could go there in the morning with the friends and work for two hours while we talk.

✓ For example, I could go there in the morning with friends and walk for two hours while we talk.

'The friends' implies specific friends; idiomatic expression is 'with friends' unless specifying which friends. 'Work for two hours' conflicts with walking context; use 'walk for two hours'. Maintain present conditional structure 'could'. Grammar problem type IDs: 22 (Article errors) and 26.

× Well I went to your work in the local park with my friends because last day was so nice weather, so good weather.

✓ Well, I went to the local park with my friends recently because the weather was so nice.

'Went to your work in the local park' is unclear and likely wrong; replace with 'went to the local park'. Use 'recently' or 'the other day' for 'lately'. 'Last day' is incorrect; use 'the weather was so nice'. Drop redundancy 'so nice, so good'. Grammar problem type IDs: 11 and 22.

× So we played catch and football as well, which makes me the locks.

✓ So we played catch and football as well, which made me feel refreshed.

Use past simple 'made' to match 'played'. 'Makes me the locks' is ungrammatical and unclear; likely meaning is 'made me feel refreshed' or 'relaxed'. Ensure tense consistency and use correct collocations: 'feel refreshed'. Grammar problem type IDs: 5 and 26.