Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Votre réponse est bonne mais nécessite des améliorations sur la précision, la grammaire et la fluidité. Évitez les répétitions ("I really like reading" deux fois), corrigez les erreurs comme "informations" (informations -> information) et simplifiez les fillers (« uh »). Structurez une phrase principale claire puis 1–2 détails concrets (quels types de livres, combien d’heures). Utilisez des mots de liaison courts (because, so, for example).

예시: Yes, I do. Reading is one of my favourite hobbies because it broadens my knowledge and helps me relax after a busy week. For example, I usually spend Saturday mornings reading historical novels for two or three hours because they help me unwind and learn at the same time.

제안: La réponse est compréhensible mais contient des erreurs de temps, d’article et de formulation. Utilisez le présent simple (« I prefer »), corrigez « liked » en « like », retirez redondances (« so harmful for the our vision ») et précisez (par exemple, combien d’heures ou types de livres). Ajoutez une brève comparaison avec l’écran et un mot de liaison (« however ») pour la cohérence.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find physical books more pleasant and less tiring for my eyes. For instance, when I read for several hours, a paperback feels more comfortable, whereas screens often cause me eye strain after a long session.

제안: Bonne idée générale mais travaillez la précision lexicale et la grammaire. Remplacez « scheming » par « skimming », corrigez l’accord (« scientific articles »), et évitez les hésitations (« umm »). Donnez des exemples concrets de ce que vous lisez attentivement et pourquoi (p. ex. pour comprendre ou prendre des notes) et ajoutez un lien logique (« whereas »).

예시: I need to read carefully when I study scientific articles for my coursework because I must understand complex ideas and take notes. Whereas for fashion magazines, I usually skim the articles to get a quick sense of trends and look at the photos.

제안: La réponse est redondante et contient des hésitations. Répondez directement avec une phrase principale claire (« It depends... »), expliquez brièvement les critères qui déterminent votre choix (importance, purpose) et donnez un example précis. Réduisez les répétitions et utilisez des connecteurs (« if », « so »).

예시: It depends on the purpose: if the article is important for my studies or work, I read in detail to fully understand it and take notes. However, if it’s a light piece like a fashion article, I usually scan it quickly to pick out the main points.

× I really like reading because it expands the knowledge and even, uh, clears the mind of busy informations of all the week.

✓ I really like reading because it expands knowledge and even clears the mind of the week's busy information.

The word 'information' is an uncountable noun so it should not be pluralized as 'informations'. Use 'information' without 's'. Also 'the week' is better expressed as 'the week's' to indicate possession. Remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'knowledge' because 'knowledge' is uncountable and used in general sense. Suggestion: say 'expands knowledge' and 'the week's busy information' for idiomatic English.

× So I really like reading all the weekends to be more quiet and comfortable.

✓ So I really like reading on weekends to be quieter and more comfortable.

Use 'on weekends' rather than 'all the weekends'. Comparative/adverb form: 'quiet' should be the comparative/adverb 'quieter' or 'more quiet' often 'quieter' is natural; for adverb use 'more quietly' if describing how you read. 'Comfortable' as adjective refers to the person; 'more comfortable' is correct. Suggestion: 'reading on weekends' and 'to be quieter and more comfortable.'

× I really liked reading paper because I feel that it is aesthetic and also it is less harmful for the eyes because reading a book will take few hours so it would be so harmful for the our vision to sit on a laptop for all these hours.

✓ I really like reading on paper because I feel that it is aesthetic and also less harmful for the eyes because reading a book can take a few hours, so it would be harmful for our vision to sit at a laptop for all those hours.

Tense consistency: student used 'liked' then 'feel' (present); change to present 'like' to match. Use 'on paper' for medium. 'Aesthetic' is acceptable but 'aesthetically pleasing' may be clearer. 'Less harmful for the eyes' -> 'less harmful to the eyes'. Use 'can take a few hours' instead of 'will take few hours' and include 'a'. 'So it would be harmful for our vision' -> 'harmful to our vision'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'our vision'. 'Sit at a laptop' is idiomatic; use 'those hours' instead of 'these hours' to match past reference. Suggestion: maintain consistent present tense and correct prepositions and articles.

× I really need to read carefully when I'm reading like scientific article for my studies or an interesting book, but I'll go with scheming or scanning when I'm just reading a beauty magazine or umm, something for fashion.

✓ I really need to read carefully when I'm reading a scientific article for my studies or an interesting book, but I use skimming or scanning when I'm just reading a beauty magazine or something about fashion.

Use article 'a' before 'scientific article'. 'Scheming' is incorrect; the correct term is 'skimming'. 'I'll go with' expresses future; better use present 'I use' or 'I do skimming' for habitual action. 'Something for fashion' is better as 'something about fashion'. Suggestion: use correct gerund/noun 'skimming', include articles, and prefer present for habitual actions.

× As I said, it depends on the source of information or, uh, the thing that I'm reading when, uh, I should practice detailing reading.

✓ As I said, it depends on the source of information or the thing I'm reading when I should practice detailed reading.

'Detailing reading' is ungrammatical. Use adjective 'detailed' before 'reading' to describe the type of reading. Also remove unnecessary commas and 'uh'. Keep present tense 'depends' and 'should practice' consistent. Suggestion: say 'practice detailed reading' or 'practice reading in detail'.

× It depends on, uh, how important the article is and I'm, I just scan when it is a, a fashion, umm, article.

✓ It depends on how important the article is, and I just scan it when it is a fashion article.

Remove filler words and pause markers. Add object 'it' after 'scan' because 'scan' is transitive here. Remove redundant commas and article repetition 'a, a'. Suggestion: 'I just scan it when it is a fashion article' or 'when it is a fashion magazine article.'