Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve clarity, grammar and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct noun phrases (e.g., "self-help books"), and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details (what you like about the books and a brief example) and keep to 2–4 sentences. Also correct titles and pronunciation (e.g., The Power of Your Subconscious Mind).

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially self-help books. For example, I'm currently reading The Power of Your Subconscious Mind, which explains techniques to change habits and improve confidence. I like these books because they give practical exercises I can try in daily life.

제안: Make a direct statement first, then provide one or two clear reasons using linking words (because/so/therefore). Fix grammar ("I prefer paper because I have read on it since childhood"), avoid filler words, and be concise. Mention a brief contrast with screens if helpful.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I have done so since childhood and it helps me focus. For instance, paper books don’t show notifications, so I can read without distractions, whereas reading on a screen often interrupts my concentration.

제안: Provide a clear contrast with linking words (e.g., "When... but when..."). Remove fillers and use precise vocabulary ("revising" instead of "revisioning"). Give a concrete example of each situation to show understanding. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

예시: You should read carefully when you are learning something new because you need to understand concepts and details. However, when you are revising familiar material, you can read more quickly to refresh your memory, for example skimming notes before an exam.

제안: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons with linking words (for example/because). Correct phrasing ("detailed reading" not "details reading") and avoid repetition. Offer a short example of when you use detailed reading.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand each sentence and the meaning of the text. For example, when I study articles for a presentation I read carefully to note important facts and wording rather than just scanning.

× I enjoy reading especially self help in type of book.

✓ I enjoy reading, especially self-help books.

The phrase 'self help in type of book' is unnatural and ungrammatical. Use the adjective 'self-help' with a plural noun 'books' to express the general category. Also add a comma after 'reading' for clarity.

× At that moment I am reading that power of subconscious mind.

✓ At the moment I am reading The Power of the Subconscious Mind.

Use 'at the moment' (not 'at that moment') to indicate current continuous action. Capitalize the book title and include the definite article 'the' as part of the title. The present continuous 'am reading' is correct for current action.

× It's telling about how I I can use my power supply as mind and.

✓ It explains how I can use the power of my subconscious mind.

Original has repetition ('I I'), incorrect noun phrase 'power supply as mind', and an unfinished ending. Rephrase to 'the power of my subconscious mind' and use 'explains' which suits describing what a book does.

× Actually I love to read to on paper because it from childhood I used to read on paper and it so I can read properly no distraction or no notification skin because in skin I am getting notification and those things and I.

✓ Actually I love to read on paper because since childhood I have read on paper, so I can concentrate better without distractions or notifications from my screen.

Multiple preposition and wording errors: 'read to on paper' should be 'read on paper'; 'from childhood' should be 'since childhood' for continuous habit; use present perfect 'have read' to indicate habit up to now; 'no distraction or no notification skin' is incorrect—use 'without distractions or notifications from my screen'; 'in skin' likely meant 'in screen' -> 'screen'. Also remove trailing 'and I' to complete the sentence.

× When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

✓ When do you need to read carefully, and when do you not?

The question as asked by the examiner is acceptable, but 'and when not?' is informal; make it parallel by using 'and when do you not?' to match the auxiliary 'do' and maintain correct question structure.

× Yeah, every time you have to umm, read carefully, OK, uh, when you are learning something new.

✓ Yes, you usually need to read carefully, for example when you are learning something new.

Use 'you usually need' or 'you have to' consistently; 'every time you have to' is awkward. Clarify with 'for example' and keep present progressive 'are learning' for an ongoing activity.

× And so at that time you have to read carefully, uh, and you can umm, when you are revisioning something or some more example is there, you can umm, umm, less carefully, you can read.

✓ At those times you must read carefully, but when you are reviewing something familiar or looking at more examples, you can read less carefully.

'Revisioning' is not idiomatic; use 'reviewing'. 'At that time' vs 'at those times' — use plural for general situations. 'Some more example is there' should be 'more examples'. Use 'read less carefully' rather than the repeated 'you can umm'. Also replace 'have to' with 'must' or 'should' for clarity depending on strength.

× Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

✓ Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

The sentence is grammatical; no preposition error. No change necessary. (Included for completeness: no correction needed.)

× I prefer do uh, details reading because uh, I uh, from details reading I get to know each uh, sentences and what, what I want to talk about anything.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because from detailed reading I can understand each sentence and know what I want to say about a topic.

Original has incorrect verb form 'prefer do', wrong noun form 'details reading' should be 'detailed reading', and plural agreement issues 'each sentences' should be 'each sentence'. Rephrase to make meaning clear: 'understand each sentence' and 'know what I want to say about a topic'.