Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the answer more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details (why you like reading and an example), and avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words (for example, because, when) and correct verb forms (I really like reading; I buy books often).

예시: I really like reading because it relaxes me and helps me learn new things. For example, my mother used to read cartoons and history stories to me when I was small, and that made me enjoy books from an early age.

제안: Give a clear preference sentence, then provide two specific reasons using linking words (because, and). Correct grammar (I prefer reading on paper), avoid fillers and repetition, and use precise vocabulary (strain my eyes, easier to concentrate).

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and it doesn’t strain my eyes. For example, screens often give me headaches, whereas paper books feel more comfortable to hold and read for a long time.

제안: Answer directly with a clear contrast: say when you read carefully and when you don’t, then give specific reasons for each. Use linking words (when, because, whereas) and correct tense and verbs (I read carefully for exams because I need to understand details). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

예시: I read carefully when I study for exams because I need to understand every detail and remember facts. In contrast, I don’t read carefully when I read comics or light stories, because I read them mainly for fun and relaxation.

제안: State your preference clearly (I prefer detailed reading), then explain two specific reasons and give a short example. Use linking words (because, for example) and remove hesitation and repeated words. Use correct phrases (detailed reading, understand the meaning).

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I like to fully understand the meaning and notice small details. For example, when I read a novel I pay attention to the characters’ actions and the author’s language so I can understand the story better.

× Yes, I very like reading and in my home I a lot of my book I buy there every time.

✓ Yes, I really like reading and I buy many books at home all the time.

The student used 'very like' which is ungrammatical; 'like' is a verb and needs an adverb such as 'really' (problem type 13). 'a lot of my book' is incorrect: 'a lot of' requires a plural noun or 'many books' is appropriate (problem type 14 quantifier) and word order was incorrect. 'I buy there every time' should be 'I buy [them] at home all the time' to use correct preposition and adverb placement (problem types 11 and 20). Suggestion: use 'really like' for emphasis, 'many books' for quantity, use 'at home' for location and 'all the time' for frequency.

× Umm why I like reading because when I shy my mother like uh, my mother read about cartoon and about history for me before I go to.

✓ I like reading because when I was shy, my mother used to read cartoons and history books to me before I went to bed.

The original sentence has tense and structure issues: missing past tense for childhood actions (problem type 5), incorrect clause order and conjunction usage (problem type 16), and wrong verb forms like 'read' which should be 'used to read' for habitual past. 'Before I go to' is incomplete; context suggests 'before I went to bed' (sentence structure issue, type 26). Suggestion: use past tense or 'used to' for past habits, put time clause at end and complete phrases.

× I prefer read on the paper than screen because in the paper is I, I like to touchpad and, but in the screen, uh, make me bad, bad eye.

✓ I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I like the feel of paper, and screens strain my eyes.

'Prefer read' should be 'prefer reading' (verb+ing, type 8). Articles are used incorrectly: 'on the paper' should be 'on paper' or 'on a screen' (article errors, type 22 and 17). 'I like to touchpad' is unclear; corrected to 'the feel of paper' (word choice/adjective issue, type 13). 'make me bad, bad eye' is ungrammatical; correct is 'screens strain my eyes' (sentence structure and collocation, types 26 and 13). Suggestion: use 'prefer + -ing', correct articles, and use natural collocations like 'strain my eyes'.

× And in the paper is very easy and I like it.

✓ Reading on paper is very easy and I like it.

The phrase lacked a clear subject and verb form: 'in the paper is very easy' is incorrect. Use gerund 'Reading on paper' as the subject (verb + -ing form, type 8) and proper word order. Suggestion: make the activity the subject with -ing form for clarity.

× And I don't like, uh, read on the screen.

✓ And I don't like reading on screens.

After 'don't like' the verb should be in -ing form (type 8). Also 'the screen' is better as 'screens' or 'a screen' depending on meaning (article/number, types 22 and 1). Suggestion: use 'don't like reading on screens' for general preference.

× Uh, when I I read carefully when I most ex exam because I want to knows all the all the all the person.

✓ I read carefully when I take important exams because I want to know everything about each person/topic.

Tense and noun issues: 'most ex exam' is unclear; corrected to 'important exams' (word choice, type 26). 'I want to knows' uses incorrect verb form; 'know' is correct (third person singular issue? here subject is I so present tense 'know' is correct — problem type 6). Repetition 'all the all the' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use clear noun phrases like 'important exams' and correct verb forms.

× But when, uh, I did not carefully be uh, when I want to I read be I read cartoon.

✓ But I do not read carefully when I am reading cartoons.

Original has incorrect auxiliary and verb forms: 'did not carefully be' is ungrammatical (tense and verb form, types 5 and 26). Use present simple for habitual actions: 'I do not read carefully' and use 'reading cartoons' (verb + -ing, type 8). Suggestion: use correct auxiliary 'do' for negatives and -ing form for activities.

× I want to read like I read back umm.

✓ I like to read them quickly or skim them.

The sentence is unclear and ungrammatical (sentence structure issue, type 26). 'I want to read like I read back' is vague; intended meaning likely 'I skim them' or 'I read them quickly' when reading comics. Suggestion: use clear verbs like 'skim' or 'read quickly' to express reduced attention.

× I, I prefer detail because, uh, when I read, I want to wow, what is detail about this?

✓ I prefer detailed reading because when I read, I want to know the details about it.

'Prefer detail' should be 'prefer detailed reading' or 'prefer details' (adjective/adverb usage, types 13 and 18). 'I want to wow, what is detail about this?' is ungrammatical and unclear; correct is 'I want to know the details about it' (sentence structure, type 26). Suggestion: use 'detailed' as adjective or 'details' as noun and a clear verb 'know'.

× I, I, I won't understand. And I really, I really, I love, I love to know what about the, uh, for example, I read a signed book and I know about detail. What this mean? What this?

✓ I won't understand otherwise. I really love to know what something means; for example, when I read a novel, I want to know the details and what they mean.

Multiple issues: contraction 'won't' suggests future but context is conditional; 'won't understand otherwise' clarifies. 'I read a signed book' likely 'a novel' or 'a specific book' (word choice, type 13). 'I know about detail' should be 'I want to know the details' (noun/adjective use, types 13 and 18). 'What this mean? What this?' are incorrect question forms; correct is 'What does this mean?' (subject-verb inversion for questions, type 26). Suggestion: use clear nouns, correct question form 'What does this mean?' and align tense/modal usage.