Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, fix tenses and verb forms, and add one specific detail to support your interest. Aim for 2–4 sentences and use linking phrases if needed.

예시: Yes, I love reading; it has been my favorite hobby since childhood. I enjoy non-fiction books most because they help me learn about history and science, and I often read to satisfy my curiosity.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, correct repetition and grammar, and provide a specific reason with clearer wording. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use a linking word to connect cause and effect.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes. Also, reading a physical book feels more relaxing and helps me concentrate better.

제안: Organize your answer: give a direct statement about when you read carefully, then contrast when you skim, with specific examples. Correct word choice (journals, captions) and reduce hesitation words.

예시: I usually read carefully when I study or read journal articles because I need to understand details. In contrast, I skim social media captions or news headlines when I just want a quick update.

제안: Begin with a clear preference or balanced view, remove filler words, correct grammar, and give specific situations for each reading mode. Use a linking phrase to contrast the two modes.

예시: I prefer both depending on the situation: I read in detail when I study or enjoy a novel, but I scan texts when I'm short on time or preparing for an exam.

× 'Reading is my favorite hobby, my favorite things to do.'

✓ 'Reading is my favorite hobby, my favorite thing to do.'

'Things' is plural while the subject refers to a single activity (reading). This is a subject–noun number mismatch. Use the singular 'thing' to match 'hobby' and the singular concept. Suggestion: use singular nouns that refer to the same single activity.'

× 'I love reading since I was a kid.'

✓ 'I have loved reading since I was a kid.'

'Since' requires a present perfect tense to connect a past starting point with a continuing situation. Using simple present ('love') is incorrect for a habit that began in the past. Use present perfect 'have loved' to show the action started in the past and continues now.'

× 'Reading is always intrigue me because I always want to know about everything, especially about.'

✓ 'Reading always intrigues me because I always want to learn about everything.'

'Intrigue' must agree with the singular subject 'reading' and take the third person singular form 'intrigues' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'know about everything, especially about' is incomplete and ungrammatical; replace with 'learn about everything' to finish the idea.'

× 'I do prefer it on a paper because because when I read on a screen it's actually hurt my eyes and when I read on paper I have a feeling like meditations where I can't feel.'

✓ 'I prefer reading on paper because when I read on a screen it actually hurts my eyes, and when I read on paper I have a feeling like meditation where I don't feel strain.'

'On a paper' is incorrect article/preposition use; say 'on paper' or 'on a page.' 'It's actually hurt my eyes' mixes contraction with bare verb; third person singular requires 'hurts' and must include correct auxiliary if using perfect. Also 'meditations' should be singular 'meditation' as an uncountable feeling, and 'I can't feel' is unclear—use 'I don't feel strain.' Fixed subject-verb agreement and article usage.'

× 'I love reading since I was a kid.'

✓ 'I have loved reading since I was a kid.'

'Since I was a kid' describes a past starting point, so present perfect ('have loved') is required rather than simple past or simple present. This avoids tense mismatch and correctly shows continuity.'

× 'Actually I often read carefully, but it depends.'

✓ 'Actually, I often read carefully, but it depends on the material.'

The original sentence is grammatically acceptable but incomplete: 'it depends' is vague. Adding 'on the material' completes the sentence structure and clarifies what 'it' refers to.'

× 'I read carefully almost every single time, like on the books when articles journal, but when I'm not it's actually like I read caption.'

✓ 'I read carefully almost every time, for example when reading books, articles, or journals, but when I'm not, I usually just read captions.'

There are word order and pluralization errors: 'on the books when articles journal' is ungrammatical. Use parallel nouns 'books, articles, or journals.' Also 'read caption' needs plural 'captions' and an adverb 'usually' for natural phrasing. This fixes sentence structure and noun usage.'

× 'I actually prefer both because.'

✓ 'I actually prefer both.'

The fragment 'because' creates an incomplete sentence (sentence structure error). Remove the dangling 'because' or add a clause to complete the reason. Here simply removing it yields a complete statement.'

× 'Because I love reading and so I often reading in detail but when it comes to scanning it because time or exam.'

✓ 'Because I love reading, I often read in detail, but when it comes to scanning, it is usually because of time constraints or exams.'

'I often reading' incorrectly uses the -ing form instead of the base verb after 'often' (use 'read'). The clause 'it because time or exam' is ungrammatical; use 'because of time constraints or exams' to express cause. Also add commas for clarity and correct verb forms.'