Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no + brief reason), then add one specific supporting detail and a brief example. Avoid redundancy and tighten phrasing. Also correct small grammar points (e.g. “from them I find” -> “I can find” or “I learn”).

예시: I don't read much these days because I can get information quickly online. For example, I often watch short YouTube videos or ask an AI to find recipes or answers to questions. Therefore, books feel less necessary for my daily needs.

제안: Start with a clear topic sentence and then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (“because”, “for example”). Fix small wording issues (e.g. “on papers” -> “on paper”; “the screen has the strong light” -> “screens emit strong light”). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because paper is easier on my eyes during long study sessions. For example, when I read articles and books for my major, printed pages feel more comfortable and help me concentrate better.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence addressing both parts, then support each with a specific reason or example. Avoid vague phrasing and repetition (e.g. remove duplicate “on”). Clarify “small tricks” (e.g. “tricky questions or details”). Keep sentences complete.

예시: I need to read very carefully during exams because questions often include tricky wording and small details that change the meaning. In contrast, I skim casual online content like social media posts or news summaries because I only need the general idea.

제안: Begin with a clear statement that you use both strategies depending on purpose, then give one specific example for scanning and one for detailed reading. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g. “I just scan” not “scanned”). Use linking words (“for example”, “however”).

예시: I use both scanning and detailed reading depending on the situation. For example, I scan friends' blogs and social media posts to get the main idea quickly; however, when studying for exams I read in detail and take notes to remember important points.

× So from them I find some recipes or I can find out what I'm curious about and that's why I feel like the books are a bit less.

✓ From them I find some recipes or I can find out what I'm curious about, and that's why I feel books are a bit less important.

The pronoun 'them' is vague; better to start with 'From them' referring to 'quick and convenient ways'. Also 'the books are a bit less' is incomplete and uses an unnecessary definite article. Replace with 'books are a bit less important' to clarify meaning and correct article use. Suggestion: replace vague pronouns with clear references and complete the comparative phrase.

× I prefer to read on papers, especially when I have to read for a long period like articles or books for my major and the screen has the strong light and that makes my eyes feel strange.

✓ I prefer to read on paper, especially when I have to read for long periods, such as articles or books for my major, because the screen has strong light and that makes my eyes feel strained.

Use 'paper' (uncountable) rather than 'papers' for the medium. 'A long period' should be plural 'long periods' or rephrased. 'Such as' is better than 'like' when giving examples. 'The strong light' incorrectly uses 'the'; use 'strong light' or 'a strong light'. 'Feel strange' is awkward; use 'feel strained' or 'hurt' to describe eye discomfort. Suggestion: use uncountable nouns for media, pluralize duration when general, and avoid unnecessary definite articles.

× So I prefer just paper based materials rather than the digital ones.

✓ So I prefer just paper-based materials rather than digital ones.

Use the hyphenated compound adjective 'paper-based' before 'materials'. Omit 'the' before 'digital ones' because it's a general comparison. Also 'just' can be omitted or kept for emphasis. Suggestion: hyphenate compound adjectives and avoid unnecessary definite articles in general comparisons.

× I have to read very carefully when I take exams because there are lots of small tricks that I should never miss together.

✓ I have to read very carefully when I take exams because there are lots of small tricks that I should never miss.

The adverb 'together' is incorrect here; it creates confusion and is unnecessary. The tense 'have to' with 'take exams' is fine (present habitual). Remove 'together' to make the sentence natural. Suggestion: avoid adding unrelated adverbs; use concise phrasing for obligation and caution.

× And on the other hand, I don't need to be so careful when I read some casual contents on on the Internet like information or.

✓ On the other hand, I don't need to be so careful when I read casual content on the Internet, such as general information.

Reduce redundancy: 'and on the other hand' should be 'on the other hand'. 'Casual contents' is ungrammatical; use 'casual content' (uncountable). Remove the duplicated 'on'. The phrase 'like information or' is incomplete; use 'such as general information' to complete the thought. Suggestion: remove redundancies, use uncountable 'content', fix duplicated prepositions, and complete example phrases.

× Well, it goes from time to time like when I read something online casual content like my friends blogs or social media posts, I just scanned them.

✓ Well, it varies from time to time; when I read casual online content, like my friends' blogs or social media posts, I just scan them.

'Goes' is vague—'varies' fits better. 'Casual content' should be before 'online' or phrased 'casual online content'. 'My friends blogs' needs an apostrophe: 'friends' blogs'. 'I just scanned them' mixes past tense with present habitual; use present 'scan' to match 'varies' (habitual). Suggestion: match verb tenses for habitual actions, place adjectives correctly, use possessive forms for 'friends' blogs' and use present tense for general habits.

× But on the other hand I have to read and remember the details when I'm studying.

✓ But on the other hand, I have to read carefully and remember the details when I'm studying.

Add 'carefully' to clarify how the reading is done. The original is mostly correct, but adding an adverb improves clarity. Keep present progressive 'I'm studying' to indicate a current activity. Suggestion: include adverbs where needed to clarify manner of action.