Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific supporting detail with a short example. Avoid redundancy and correct mistakes (e.g. "get information", "I always read history books"). Use linking words like "for example" sparingly and ensure subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. It helps me learn new facts quickly and improves my communication skills. For example, I often read history books, which deepen my understanding of different cultures and make me more curious about the world.

제안: Provide a clear direct answer and two concise reasons, using natural phrasing and correct grammar. Remove unclear words (e.g. "UMM", "I am"). Use linking words like "because" to connect reasons and include one brief example or result.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and helps me concentrate. For example, when I study from printed textbooks I remember information better and I don’t get distracted by notifications on my phone.

제안: Give a clearer structure: state when you read carefully, give specific reasons, then state when you read casually. Fix tense and word order errors and avoid unrelated personal emotional details without explanation. Use linking words like "when" and "but" to contrast.

예시: I read carefully when I am studying or preparing for exams because I need to understand and remember details. But when I read for pleasure, I read more casually and focus on enjoying the story rather than memorizing facts.

제안: Answer directly and give two concise, specific reasons. Correct collocations (e.g. "detailed reading", "become more educated", "social interactions"). Avoid vague terms like "UMM" and explain how detailed reading helps you with a concrete example.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas and remember important points. For instance, when I read academic articles in detail, I can discuss topics more confidently in class and improve my social interactions with peers.

× Absolutely yes. Reading helps me to get an information in a fast way and it's helped me to communicate with the others in a good way.

✓ Absolutely. Reading helps me get information quickly, and it has helped me communicate with others effectively.

Errors: unnecessary 'an' before uncountable 'information' (Article errors, ID 22), awkward phrase 'in a fast way' should be 'quickly' (Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs, ID 13), incorrect use of 'the others' — use 'others' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12), and tense/auxiliary 'it's helped me' is acceptable but 'it has helped' is more natural. Suggestions: remove 'an' before uncountable nouns, use adverbs (quickly, effectively) instead of noun phrases, and use 'others' without 'the'. Use present perfect 'has helped' for past effect continuing now.

× For example, I read always a history books that make me so interested about the world.

✓ For example, I always read history books that make me very interested in the world.

Errors: 'a history books' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'books' (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Word order 'I read always' should be 'I always read' (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). 'so interested about' should be 'very interested in' (Incorrect use of prepositions/adjectives, IDs 11 and 13). Suggestions: match articles with noun number, place adverbs like 'always' before main verb, and use 'interested in'.

× Actually, I love UMM and I prefer the old version.

✓ Actually, I love reading on paper and I prefer the old version.

Error: 'I love UMM' is unclear relative to the question about paper or screen (Sentence structure errors, ID 26). Suggestion: clarify the subject 'reading on paper' to match the question context.

× I prefer, I like and I'm obsessed with the papers always.

✓ I prefer paper; I like it and I'm always obsessed with it.

Errors: awkward repetition and wrong placement of 'always' (Sentence structure, ID 26) and 'the papers' should be 'paper' or 'it' (Incorrect use of pronouns/articles, IDs 12 and 22). Suggestions: use concise phrasing, place 'always' before the verb, and use 'paper' as an uncountable noun or refer with 'it'.

× I'm not with the modern versions because I am.

✓ I'm not into modern versions because I prefer paper.

Errors: 'I'm not with the modern versions' is unidiomatic and 'because I am' is incomplete (Incorrect conjunction/structure, IDs 16 and 26). Suggestion: use 'into' or 'a fan of' and complete the reason after 'because'.

× The paper is helpful and good for my eyes and I don't like the highlights.

✓ Paper is better for my eyes, and I don't like highlights.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'The paper' (Article errors, ID 22), awkward 'helpful and good for my eyes' — 'better for my eyes' is concise (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs, ID 13). Suggestions: omit 'the' when speaking generally and use comparative 'better'.

× That's a good question. When I want to need to read carefully when I study or when I was so sad and I have a bad situation in my life, I like to be carefully when I be reading and when I not I am be reading for fun only.

✓ That's a good question. I need to read carefully when I study or when I'm sad or going through a difficult time in my life. In those cases I read carefully; otherwise I read just for fun.

Errors: redundant/incorrect 'want to need' (Sentence structure, ID 26), incorrect past 'was' mixed with present 'have' (Tense issues, IDs 5 and 6), incorrect adverb/adjective 'be carefully' and 'I am be reading' (Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and incorrect verb forms, IDs 13 and 10), and awkward negation 'when I not' (Incorrect sentence structure, ID 26). Suggestions: use present simple/continuous appropriately, remove extra auxiliaries, use adverb 'carefully', and separate clauses for clarity.

× Actually, I prefer a detailed read reading because I can obtain a lot of information and make me educated that help me to communicate with the other sociality and be more UMM.

✓ Actually, I prefer detailed reading because I can obtain a lot of information, which makes me more educated and helps me communicate with others socially and be more informed.

Errors: 'a detailed read reading' incorrect repetition and article misuse (Article and noun form errors, IDs 22 and 1). 'make me educated' should be 'makes me more educated' (Subject-verb agreement and adjective use, IDs 27 and 13). 'help me to communicate' needs 'helps me communicate' (Subject-verb agreement, ID 27). 'the other sociality' is incorrect; use 'others socially' (Incorrect use of nouns/pronouns, IDs 12 and 11). 'be more UMM' is unclear—interpreted as 'informed' (Sentence clarity, ID 26). Suggestions: use gerund 'reading', ensure subject-verb agreement, use 'which' to link clauses, and choose clear, common words like 'informed'.