Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use gerunds and articles), and avoid repetition. Add one specific example to support your point. Keep to max 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'however' or 'because'.

예시: I enjoy reading, but I rarely read books nowadays because I prefer playing games on my smartphone. However, I recognise that reading is useful because it improves vocabulary and boosts critical thinking; for example, reading mystery novels helps me practise making inferences.

제안: Avoid repetition and fix small errors. Give a concise topic sentence, one or two specific reasons linked logically, and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate and is less tiring for my eyes. For instance, when I read textbooks on paper I can focus for longer and make notes in the margins.

제안: Be direct and answer both parts: when you need to read carefully and when you don't. Use clear linking words and correct articles. Provide a specific situation as an example and contrast with a casual case.

예시: I need to read carefully when I'm studying in the library because it is quiet and I can concentrate and take detailed notes. In contrast, I don't read carefully when browsing social media on my phone because the information is usually brief and I just scan it.

제안: Clarify vocabulary and correct phrasing ('scan' vs 'grossly' and 'notice subtle details'). Start with a clear statement, give concise reasons, and include a short example of how you use detailed reading. Keep sentences natural and avoid redundancy.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the author's ideas. For example, when studying articles for class I read paragraphs slowly and often read them twice to notice subtle details and understand the argument.

× I don't dislike reading, but I hardly read the book because I often use a smartphone and I prefer playing game.

✓ I don't dislike reading, but I hardly read books because I often use a smartphone and I prefer playing games.

'the book' is incorrect when speaking generally; use plural 'books'. 'playing game' needs plural 'games' to be natural. This is a quantifier/number issue: use plural for general countable nouns.

× But I know reading is useful not only improve my vocabulary but also improve critical thinking skills.

✓ But I know reading is useful not only for improving my vocabulary but also for improving my critical thinking skills.

Missing preposition 'for' and incorrect verb form after 'not only... but also'. Use the gerund 'improving' after 'for' and parallel structure 'not only for ... but also for ...'. This corrects conjunction/structure and ensures parallelism.

× I prefer to read on paper because it's easier for me to concentrate and also I feel I feel less tiring for my eyes.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it's easier for me to concentrate and I feel less strain on my eyes.

'I feel less tiring for my eyes' is ungrammatical: 'tiring' describes something that causes tiredness; use 'I feel less strain on my eyes' or 'my eyes feel less tired.' This fixes incorrect adjective/adverb usage and subject-experience phrasing.

× So I I like I prefer read on paper.

✓ So I prefer to read on paper.

Repeated words and wrong verb pattern: use 'prefer to read' (infinitive), and remove duplicate words. This corrects sentence structure and verb form.

× I need to read carefully when I'm in the library because it's quiet and beautiful place where I can concentrate and take a note.

✓ I need to read carefully when I'm in the library because it's a quiet and beautiful place where I can concentrate and take notes.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'quiet and beautiful place' (there be/article issue). Also 'take a note' is unnatural; the plural 'take notes' is preferred for general note-taking.

× I take a note without distraction.

✓ I take notes without distraction.

'Take a note' is odd for habitual action; use 'take notes'. This corrects verb + -ing/form and noun form for habitual activity.

× I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the author's ideas and the book more fully.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the author's ideas and the book more fully.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable. No correction needed. (Kept for completeness.)

× I usually read the passage grossly and sometimes read them several times to grasp the meaning and the notice subtle detail.

✓ I usually read the passage quickly and sometimes read it several times to grasp the meaning and notice subtle details.

'Grossly' is the wrong adverb; likely intended 'quickly' or 'briefly'. Use singular 'it' to match 'the passage'. Remove extra 'the' before 'notice' and use plural 'subtle details'. This corrects adverb choice, pronoun agreement, article use, and pluralization.