Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar and natural phrasing, be concise and directly state your opinion with a brief reason or example. Avoid repetition and fix sentence structure (e.g. article use, verb forms). Use one topic sentence plus one supporting detail. Link ideas with a simple connector if needed.

예시: Yes, I really enjoy reading. In my free time I often read non-fiction and novels because they help me learn new things and relax.

제안: Use clear comparison language and correct grammar. Start with a clear preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'however'. Avoid fillers and repeated words.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because the texture and smell make it more immersive, and I find screens strain my eyes after a while.

제안: Organize your response: state general rule, then give contrasting examples with correct vocabulary (e.g. 'skim' not 'scheming'). Correct verb forms and articles, and avoid hesitations. Use linking words like 'whereas' or 'but' for contrast.

예시: I need to read carefully for exams or important documents because details matter, whereas I usually skim newspapers for general ideas and headlines.

제안: Be concise and correct common errors: use 'depends' not 'depend', and use 'scan' or 'skim' as verbs. Give a clear conditional sentence with linking words like 'if' and 'but'. Reduce hesitations and repetition.

예시: It depends on the situation: if I'm reading a newspaper I usually skim it quickly for main points, but for exam materials I read in detail and take notes.

× Yes, definitely, I actually have big fan of books.

✓ Yes, definitely, I am actually a big fan of books.

The original sentence omits the verb 'am' and the article 'a' before 'big fan'. Use the pronoun with the correct linking verb: 'I am'. Also include the indefinite article 'a' for singular count nouns. Suggestion: say 'I am a big fan of books.'

× You know that my in my free time I have fun reading some book that I will acquire my knowledge.

✓ You know that in my free time I enjoy reading books to gain knowledge.

Problems: extra word 'my' and wrong preposition/phrase 'have fun reading some book that I will acquire my knowledge.' Use 'in my free time' (correct placement), 'enjoy reading' is a natural verb collocation, 'books' should be plural for general meaning, and 'to gain knowledge' expresses purpose. Suggestion: simplify to 'in my free time I enjoy reading books to gain knowledge.'

× Well I think that the feeling of tucked in the papers is ma makes me feel more reality and relaxed than read on a screen that I am.

✓ Well, I think that the feeling of being surrounded by papers makes me feel more connected to reality and more relaxed than reading on a screen.

Multiple errors: wrong phrase 'tucked in the papers' should be 'being surrounded by papers' or 'holding paper books'; 'is ma makes' is ungrammatical—use single verb 'makes'; 'more reality' is incorrect — use 'more connected to reality'; 'than read on a screen that I am' is incorrect structure—use comparative 'than reading on a screen.' Suggestion: restructure sentence and use gerund 'reading' for comparison.

× Sometime I feel read on screen is make my eyes feel hurt.

✓ Sometimes I feel that reading on a screen makes my eyes hurt.

Errors: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb); 'I feel read on screen is make' mixes forms—need 'that' + clause and gerund 'reading'; verb agreement 'makes' (third-person singular) is required; use 'hurt' without 'feel' after 'makes my eyes'. Suggestion: 'Sometimes I feel that reading on a screen makes my eyes hurt.'

× Well, I think that I need to read carefully when I read a, a exam, you know that an exam for the competition and I might to read information as, uh, carefully.

✓ Well, I think that I need to read carefully when I take an exam, for example a competitive exam, and I might need to read the information carefully.

Problems: 'read a exam' — use 'take an exam' or 'sit an exam'; article 'an' before 'exam'; 'I might to read' incorrectly uses 'to' after 'might'—modal verbs are followed by base verb without 'to' and here 'might need to' is better. Use 'read the information carefully' to be clear. Suggestion: use 'take an exam' and 'might need to' construction.

× And in contrast, if I have to read a newspaper, I will scheming.

✓ In contrast, if I have to read a newspaper, I will skim it.

'scheming' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'skimming' or 'skim'. Use verb 'skim' and include object 'it' or use present participle 'skim quickly'. Also 'I will skim it' fits future intent. Suggestion: use 'skim' or 'scan' for quick reading.

× Well, I think that is depend on situation.

✓ Well, I think that it depends on the situation.

Missing subject 'it' and incorrect verb form 'depend' should be 'depends' for third-person singular. Also include article 'the' before 'situation'. Suggestion: 'It depends on the situation.'

× Umm, if it's the newspaper, I just want to watch uh, to read it for fun, I will scanning, uh, scheming quickly.

✓ If it's a newspaper and I'm reading it for fun, I will skim it quickly.

Errors: 'want to watch to read' is confused; remove 'watch' and use 'read'; 'I will scanning' uses wrong form—should be 'I will skim' or 'I will be scanning'; 'scheming' is wrong word. Use 'skim' or 'scan' + adverb 'quickly'. Suggestion: 'If it's a newspaper and I'm reading it for fun, I will skim it quickly.'

× But in contrast, if I have to read carefully because it's in an exam, for example.

✓ But in contrast, if I have to read carefully because it's for an exam, for example, I will read in detail.

Original is a sentence fragment lacking main clause after the conditional. Add result clause, e.g., 'I will read in detail.' Also correct preposition 'for an exam' instead of 'in an exam.' Suggestion: complete conditional with main clause to make a full sentence.