Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make your answer more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler sounds, and use linking words to add a brief reason and example. Correct verb forms and article use (e.g., "a romance genre" → "romance novels" or simply "romance").

예시: I don't read very often; as a student I mainly read textbooks for my courses. However, when I choose leisure reading, I prefer romance novels because they are engaging and help me relax after studying.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence, then add two specific reasons using linking words like "because" and "so". Fix tense and phrasing ("I've been growing up" → "I've grown up"). Avoid vague phrasing like "I feel lost or on the track."

예시: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I've grown up with paper books and they are easier on my eyes. Also, I find it easier to concentrate on printed pages, so I don't get distracted as I sometimes do when reading on a device.

제안: Provide a clearer structure: state the general rule, then give specific examples. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases ("Once You know once attend"). Use linking words like "when" and "but" and give concrete situations (e.g., studying complex theory vs. skimming familiar material).

예시: It depends on the material. I read carefully when the content is complex or new to me, for example when studying difficult theory, so I reread sentences to understand them. But if the subject is familiar, I usually skim and focus only on new information.

제안: Give a concise topic sentence followed by two clear reasons using linking words like "because" and "however." Reduce redundancy ("topics which I..." can be "topics I"). Provide a short example to illustrate.

예시: It depends on the topic. I usually scan material I already know because I'm looking for specific information, but I read in detail when the topic is new to me, for example when learning about a new scientific concept for a class.

× No, I don't like reading and I don't read books on a regular basis.

✓ No, I don't like reading and I don't read books on a regular basis.

No change needed for subject-verb agreement. The subject 'I' correctly pairs with 'don't' and 'don't read'. This sentence is grammatically correct.

× Umm as of now I have to read different subjects as I'm currently a student but if I have to I would rather read or romance genre rather than a school related topics.

✓ As of now I have to read different subjects because I'm a student, but if I had a choice I would rather read romance novels than school-related texts.

Errors: sentence structure and word choice. 'As I'm currently a student' fits better as a reason and should be joined with 'because'. 'If I have to' is unclear; conditional preference uses past tense 'if I had a choice' with 'would'. 'Read or romance genre' is wrong; use 'read romance novels'. 'a school related topics' mixes singular and plural and misses a hyphen: 'school-related texts'. Suggest breaking long sentence, use proper conditional form and correct nouns and hyphenation.

× I prefer to read on paper rather than on screen because since childhood I've been growing up reading on paper and reading on screen makes my eyes hurt a bit and I feel lost or on the track.

✓ I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because since childhood I've read on paper, and reading on a screen makes my eyes hurt a bit and makes me feel lost or off track.

Errors: tense and phrasing. 'I've been growing up reading' is awkward; use 'I've read' or 'I've grown up reading'. 'On screen' needs article 'a screen'. 'I feel lost or on the track' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'feel lost' or 'off track'. Use parallel structure: 'makes my eyes hurt and makes me feel...'.

× It usually depends.

✓ It usually depends.

No change needed. This short answer correctly uses present tense and is appropriate to the question.

× I tend to read carefully whenever I don't understand a simple sentence, and I read them repeatedly.

✓ I tend to read carefully whenever I don't understand a sentence, and I read it repeatedly.

Errors: pronoun reference and plurality. 'A simple sentence' is fine but inconsistent with 'them repeatedly' which is plural. Use singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'a sentence'. Also 'simple' is unnecessary; keep consistent number. Suggest matching noun and pronoun number.

× And when I understand a sentence in Once You know once attend, then I don't read it carefully.

✓ When I understand a sentence at a glance, I don't read it carefully.

Original contains unintelligible phrase 'in Once You know once attend'. Replace with idiomatic 'at a glance' to convey quick understanding. Remove redundant 'and' and 'then'. Ensure concise structure.

× It usually depends on the topic that I'm reading.

✓ It usually depends on the topic I'm reading.

Minor redundancy: 'that' is unnecessary here. Sentence structure is simplified; tense remains present and appropriate.

× I tend to scan for the topics which I already have a little bit of knowledge, but I do detailed reading on the topics which are very new to me and I'm not aware of the topics.

✓ I tend to scan topics I already know a little about, but I do detailed reading on topics that are new to me.

Errors: quantifier and phrasing. 'Have a little bit of knowledge' is wordy; use 'know a little about'. Remove redundant 'the topics' and 'I'm not aware of the topics'. Use 'that' to introduce relative clause and keep plural consistency. Simplify for clarity.