Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but can be improved by tightening sentences, avoiding redundancy (e.g., "actually"), and adding a brief reason or example to make it more specific. Keep the response to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "for example."

예시: Yes, I do. I read the news online every day because it helps me stay informed, and I also enjoy reading articles on topics like science and history to learn new things.

제안: Good structure and relevant details, but grammar and coherence need attention. Remove fragments, fix punctuation, and use linking phrases ("however," "for instance"). Be specific about why paper helps studying (e.g., retention, note-taking) and why screens suit news (e.g., convenience, updates). Keep to 3–4 concise sentences.

예시: It depends on the material. For studying, I prefer paper because I can underline and take notes, which helps me remember. However, for daily news I use a screen because it is faster and more convenient for up-to-date information.

제안: Content is relevant but grammar, word choice and fluency are weak. Use a clear topic sentence, then give two contrasting examples with linking words like "when" and "but." Correct phrases: "read carefully," "retain information," and avoid sentence fragments. Be concise and specific about types of text requiring careful reading.

예시: I need to read carefully when I must retain information, for example when studying for exams or reading technical instructions. But when I'm browsing social media or celebrity gossip, I usually skim because the details are not important.

제안: Your answer addresses both options but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases ("Every smile details"). Organize into a clear topic sentence and two supporting sentences using linking words like "for example" and "however." Correct verb forms ("scan" not "scanning") and adjective forms ("in detail").

예시: I use both scanning and detailed reading depending on the situation. For example, I scan when I need a specific fact or number, but I read in detail when the meaning matters, such as in academic texts or contracts.

× Yes I do. I usually follow news every day by reading them on the news website and actually I love learning new topics through reading.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually follow the news every day by reading it on news websites, and I actually love learning new topics through reading.

The sentence mixes count/uncount and article use with present tense habits. 'News' is treated as uncountable or a collective noun, so use 'the news' and refer to it with singular pronoun 'it'. 'News website' should be plural 'news websites' or 'a news website' for natural collocation. Add commas for clarity and keep present simple for habitual actions.

× I believe it really depends on the topic of reading.

✓ I believe it really depends on the topic I am reading about.

The phrase 'topic of reading' is unnatural. Use 'the topic I am reading about' or 'the subject'. Present continuous 'I am reading about' fits when referring to the current reading topic; present simple 'depends' remains for general truth.

× For example, when I'm studying, I prefer to underline some sentences or highlight some words, so it's really easier to. Reading and working on a paper,

✓ For example, when I'm studying, I prefer to underline some sentences or highlight some words, so it's really easier to read and work on paper.

The original has a broken sentence and incorrect punctuation splitting 'to.' from the rest. Use 'read and work on paper' to combine actions; remove the period and correct word order. Present continuous 'I'm studying' and present simple 'prefer' are appropriate.

× but on the other hand for some other topics like reading Daily News that you have to read them once it's work better on the screen.

✓ But on the other hand, for other topics like the daily news that you only need to read once, it's better on the screen.

Issues: article use ('Daily News' -> 'the daily news'), redundant pronouns ('read them'), and awkward clause order. Use 'you only need to read once' and 'it's better on the screen' for clarity and correct present simple.

× I can say when I have to keep those information in my mind and I obviously need to read it more careful,

✓ I would say when I have to keep that information in my mind, I obviously need to read it more carefully.

'Information' is uncountable, so use 'that information' not 'those information'. 'Careful' should be the adverb 'carefully'. Use 'would say' or 'can say' consistently; comma placement improved.

× but sometimes you just don't need so much concentration, such as when you're surfing on the Internet and reading some thoughts and rumors about. Celebrities.

✓ But sometimes you just don't need so much concentration, such as when you're surfing the Internet and reading thoughts and rumors about celebrities.

The original has a broken sentence with an isolated 'Celebrities.' Remove the unnecessary preposition 'on' before 'the Internet' is optional but 'surfing the Internet' is standard. Combine clauses and place 'about celebrities' together.

× It doesn't need really focused mind.

✓ It doesn't really require a focused mind.

'Need' with inanimate subject is awkward; 'require' is better. Use adverb 'really' before verb. 'A focused mind' needs an article. Maintain present simple.

× I can choose between them because they both are necessary and in some occasions, for example when I'm looking for a specific data or information, I have to scanning for it,

✓ I can choose between them because they are both necessary; on some occasions, for example when I'm looking for specific data or information, I have to scan for it.

'They both are' -> 'they are both'; 'on some occasions' is correct phrase. 'Data' can be uncountable or plural; drop 'a' before 'specific data'. 'Have to scanning' is incorrect: use base verb 'scan' after 'have to'.

× but sometimes. Every smile details are important, so you have to read very carefully and in detailed.

✓ But sometimes every small detail is important, so you have to read very carefully and in detail.

Many errors: 'Every smile details' should be 'every small detail' (singular). 'In detailed' should be 'in detail'. Keep 'very carefully' as the adverb phrase. Combine fragments into one sentence.