Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 発音と文法の誤りを直し、回答を簡潔で自然な形にまとめましょう。まず冒頭で直接質問に答え（短い主題文）、次に一つか二つの具体的な補足（例や年齢、理由）を付け、冗長な語や不明瞭な表現は避けてください。例えば「have a like the reading」「retro it」などの表現は不自然なので修正が必要です。また過去の体験を述べる際は時制と語順に注意し、5文以内に収めてください。

예시: Yes, I have liked reading since I was a child. When I was five, my mother gave me a biography of a famous scientist, and I read it every day. That book sparked my interest in learning about science.

제안: 表現を自然な形に整え、理由をもう少し具体的に述べてください。現在形の習慣を表す際は“used to”の使い方に注意（“I am used to reading”が正しい）。また「長時間読む」などの具体的な理由や一つの比較点（目の疲れ、記憶しやすさなど）を加えると説得力が増します。5文以内にまとめてください。

예시: I prefer reading on paper because I am used to reading printed books for long periods, and they are easier on my eyes. I also find it simpler to flip back and forth between pages when I need to review information.

제안: 語彙や表現の選び方を改善しましょう。「all scientific numbers」「all typical novels」は不自然です。代わりに“scientific texts”や“fiction/novels”と表現し、理由を明確にしてください。また対比を示す際には接続詞（e.g., whereas, but）を使って論理を整え、一例や簡単な理由を付け加えると良いです。

예시: I need to read scientific texts carefully because they contain technical terms and precise figures that I must understand. In contrast, when I read fiction, I usually skim more because I'm mainly following the story rather than checking facts.

제안: 表現を簡潔にして論理を明確にしましょう。“not only... but also”構文を正しく使い、理由を短く具体的に述べると良いです。冗長な語（"all details"など）を避け、代わりに具体的な例（描写や描写から得られる雰囲気など）を示すと印象が良くなります。

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy both the main plot and the vivid descriptions that create atmosphere, so I usually take my time to read carefully.

× Yes, I have a like the reading since I was a child.

✓ Yes, I have liked reading since I was a child.

The sentence uses an incorrect article and verb form. 'a like the reading' is ungrammatical; the intended meaning is a present perfect state that began in the past, so use 'have liked'. Remove the articles before 'reading'. Use 'have liked' to show a continuing preference from childhood to now. Suggestion: use 'have liked' + noun or 'have enjoyed' + gerund.

× When I was five years old, my mother gave me a famous scientist biographical novel.

✓ When I was five years old, my mother gave me a biographical novel about a famous scientist.

Word order and article use are awkward. 'a famous scientist biographical novel' misorders modifiers. Use 'a biographical novel about a famous scientist' to put 'biographical' with 'novel' and use 'about' to link 'famous scientist'. This produces natural English modifier order.

× After that I retro it every day step by step.

✓ After that I read it every day, step by step.

'retro' is not a correct verb here; likely intended 're-read' or 'read'. Use simple past or present habitual depending on meaning. Because context is past habit starting in childhood, 'read it every day' (read pronounced 'red') is appropriate. Add comma before 'step by step'.

× I prefer to read on paper because I am used to read through on paper for a long time, so I'm not familiar with reading on screen.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I am used to reading on paper for a long time, so I'm not familiar with reading on a screen.

After 'used to' when meaning accustomed to, use the gerund form 'reading', not the base verb 'read'. Also 'read through' is unnecessary; 'reading on paper' is sufficient. Add the article 'a' before 'screen' when speaking generally about a screen.

× When I read all scientific numbers, I need to read carefully because there are so many technical terms I don't know.

✓ When I read scientific papers or numbers, I need to read carefully because there are so many technical terms I don't know.

'All scientific numbers' is unnatural. Use 'scientific papers' or 'scientific texts' or simply 'scientific material'. Placement of 'all' is not appropriate. Clarify noun choice to match meaning. The rest of sentence is fine.

× On the other hand, when I read all typical novels, I don't need to read carefully.

✓ On the other hand, when I read typical novels, I don't need to read carefully.

Drop 'all' which is unnecessary and odd here. 'Typical novels' without 'all' sounds natural. The rest of sentence is grammatically correct.

× I prefer detailed reading because I like not only main stories of novels, but also descriptions of all details, so I usually read it carefully.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I like not only the main stories of novels but also the descriptions of details, so I usually read them carefully.

Pronoun disagreement and article use: 'main stories' should take the definite article 'the'. 'Descriptions of all details' is wordy; 'descriptions of details' or 'detailed descriptions' is better. 'Read it' refers to a singular object but 'novels' is plural, so use 'them'. Change 'it' to 'them' and ensure plural agreement: 'read them carefully'.