Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two specific examples and a brief reason. Avoid repetition (“depends on content” used twice) and correct noun forms (e.g., “mystery books,” “history books”).

예시: I enjoy reading, but it depends on the genre. For example, I like comic books because they are fun and fast to read, and I enjoy mystery novels because I like solving puzzles. However, I rarely read history books because I find them less engaging.

제안: Organize into a clear topic sentence plus specific supporting reasons. Fix grammar (e.g., “on paper,” “old-fashioned,” “devices,” “it disrupts my concentration”). Use linking words like “because” and “however.” Keep to 2–4 sentences.

예시: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because I find it easier to concentrate. Old-fashioned though it sounds, physical books help me focus, whereas electronic devices often distract me with notifications. Therefore I usually choose paper when I study.

제안: Clarify the contrast between skimming and careful reading with correct grammar and logical linking. State specific situations (e.g., exam tasks vs. casual reading) and use correct verb forms. Avoid garbled phrases like “user day.”

예시: I read carefully when preparing for exams, such as the IELTS reading test, because I need to understand details and avoid mistakes. For casual reading or news, I usually skim the text to get the main idea quickly.

제안: Provide a concise answer: state your preference then give a specific reason and one example. Remove repetition and correct errors (e.g., “as I mentioned before,” “usually,” “I prefer detailed reading because I don't miss important information”). Use a linking word like “because.”

예시: I usually prefer detailed reading because I don't want to miss important information or nuances. For example, when I read novels or study materials, I take my time to understand characters and facts rather than skimming.

× Yes, but it really depends on content.

✓ Yes, but it really depends on the content.

The noun 'content' in this context is a specific, countable concept (the content of what you read), so it requires the definite article 'the'. Omit or add articles based on specificity: use 'the content' when referring to specific content rather than content in general.

× I like reading comic books or mysterious book, but I don't really like historical books.

✓ I like reading comic books or mystery books, but I don't really like history books.

There is a mismatch between singular and plural and incorrect noun forms. 'Mysterious book' uses an adjective incorrectly; the genre is 'mystery' as a noun. Also 'historical books' refers to books about history but 'history books' is the usual phrase. Make number agreement consistent and use correct noun forms for genres.

× I absolutely prefer reading the paper because I'm quite old fashioned.

✓ I absolutely prefer reading on paper because I'm quite old-fashioned.

Use the idiomatic preposition 'on paper' rather than 'reading the paper' (which can mean a newspaper). Also 'old-fashioned' needs a hyphen when used as a compound adjective before the noun. Keep phrase consistent with intended meaning.

× I know the device is convenient for, but in my case it's sometimes disrupted my concentration.

✓ I know devices are convenient, but in my case they sometimes disrupt my concentration.

Preposition 'for' is incorrect and 'the device' is too specific; use plural 'devices' for general statement. Verb form 'disrupted' is past tense but sentence needs present simple 'disrupt' to match habitual action. Also subject-verb agreement: 'they disrupt' matches 'devices'.

× So I more prefer just reading a book rather than using device.

✓ So I prefer simply reading a book rather than using a device.

Word order and pronoun/article usage are incorrect. 'More prefer' is not correct; use 'prefer' and modify with 'simply' or 'just'. 'Device' needs the indefinite article 'a device' when singular. Ensure natural adverb placement before main verb.

× I usually tend to skim the sentence when I, especially when I reading and reading part reading task in or the IELTS.

✓ I usually tend to skim sentences, especially when I'm reading or doing the reading part of the IELTS.

Original has word order and missing auxiliary verbs. Use plural 'sentences' for general habit. Include contraction 'I'm' for 'I am' and gerund 'doing' for tasks. 'Reading part of the IELTS' is the correct phrase. Clean up repeated words and ensure verbs are present.

× But when I user day, on user day I usually just read detailed.

✓ But on a usual day, I usually just read in detail.

'user day' is a misuse; likely meant 'usual day'. Add article 'a' before 'usual day'. 'Read detailed' is incorrect collocation; use 'read in detail' to express careful reading. Maintain adverbial phrase order.

× Well, as I mentioned before it it depends on the situation, but usury day I unusual day.

✓ Well, as I mentioned before, it depends on the situation, but on a usual day I...

Original contains repetitions and typos ('it it', 'usury day I unusual day'). Insert comma after introductory clause. Use 'on a usual day' for time expression. Finish sentence appropriately. Correct typos and remove duplicated words.

× I prefer detailed reading because I don't miss anything in the book.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I don't miss anything in a book.

Use 'a book' for general statements about any book rather than 'the book', which refers to a specific book. This keeps the statement general and consistent with preference.

× I don't miss any information in the book, so I really prefer reading in detail.

✓ I don't miss any information in a book, so I really prefer reading in detail.

Same article issue: use 'a book' for general statements. Otherwise sentence is fine; 'reading in detail' is a natural phrase for careful reading.