Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more organized and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., ‘Yes, I enjoy reading.’), then give 1–2 specific examples with correct titles and brief reasons. Avoid filler words (uh, um) and unclear phrases. Use linking words (for example, because) to make your answer coherent.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, I often read Japanese manga such as Attack on Titan and Chainsaw Man because I like their complex stories and characters. I also read other genres sometimes, but manga is my favorite.

제안: Give a clear direct answer then explain briefly with one linking word (because/so). Correct tense and avoid repetition. Be specific about situations and preferences.

예시: It depends on the situation. At home I usually read on a screen because I use my laptop, but when I am outside or in class I prefer paper books because they are easier to carry and do not need power.

제안: Answer directly and give specific criteria for careful reading. Use linking words (when, because, therefore) and avoid repeating the same phrase. Provide a concise example of a situation that requires careful reading.

예시: I read carefully when the material is complex or when I need to remember details, for example, reading a novel with a complicated plot or studying class notes. For light reading, like short news or comics with simple plots, I skim instead.

제안: Start with a clear statement and give a brief reason with a linking phrase (because/so). Reduce hesitations and fix grammar (e.g., ‘detailed reading’). Add a short example to illustrate.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I like to fully understand the meaning and notice details. For instance, when I read a story I pay attention to word choice and plot development so I do not miss important clues.

× Yes, of course, uh mostly I like reading manga uh like by afters of Japanese uh like attack on sites and chainsaw man JJK.

✓ Yes, of course. Mostly I like reading Japanese manga, like Attack on Titan, Chainsaw Man, and JJK.

The speaker used incorrect prepositions and word order ('by afters of Japanese') and misspelled titles. Replace 'by afters of Japanese' with 'Japanese' to correctly modify 'manga'. Capitalize and correct proper nouns and separate items with commas. This fixes preposition and modifier misuse and clarifies meaning.

× I love them uh actually the story uh so yeah, but actually it's this nothing at N.

✓ I love them, actually, because of the story. So yeah, it's nothing serious.

The original sentence is disfluent and unclear ('it's this nothing at N'). Rephrase to a clear sentence sequence: state reason ('because of the story') and a succinct comment ('it's nothing serious'). This fixes sentence fragmentation and unclear phrasing.

× Uh, mostly it's, uh, depends on the condition.

✓ Uh, mostly it depends on the situation.

Use simple present 'it depends' rather than 'it's depends'. 'Condition' is correct but 'situation' is more natural here. Removing the contraction 'it's' before 'depends' corrects tense and verb structure.

× If I was home, uh, mostly I read any screen on the screen because I have a, because I have a laptop.

✓ If I am at home, I mostly read on a screen because I have a laptop.

Use present real conditional 'If I am' for habitual situations instead of 'If I was'. 'Read on a screen' is the correct prepositional phrase; remove redundant words. Also 'at home' is the idiomatic expression.

× Uh, but if I was like in a classroom, maybe in a outside, I prefer paper, like with a book.

✓ But if I am in a classroom or outside, I prefer paper books.

Use 'if I am' for habitual situations. 'In a outside' is incorrect; use 'outside' without 'a'. 'Paper books' is more natural than 'paper, like with a book'. This fixes preposition and article misuse.

× Umm, it's uh, depends on uh, conditions and uh, uh, the book or a manga I read if the storytelling is great, like I need to read carefully and try to understand what, what's going on.

✓ Umm, it depends on the conditions and the book or manga I am reading. If the storytelling is great, I need to read carefully and try to understand what is going on.

Use 'it depends' not 'it's depends'. For ongoing action, use present continuous 'I am reading'. Use 'what is going on' instead of colloquial 'what's going on' for clarity. This corrects present tense and present participle usage and improves sentence flow.

× Umm, yeah, it's actually, it depends on the conditions and the story.

✓ Umm, yeah, it actually depends on the conditions and the story.

Remove the extra 'it's' to use correct simple present 'it depends'. This corrects redundant wording and tense consistency.

× Uh, I prefer detailed reading.

✓ Uh, I prefer detailed reading.

The original is acceptable, but 'detailed reading' is more natural with no article. No grammatical change needed; keep as is. (Included to indicate review of article use.)

× Uh, it's 'cause I don't know, I actually love when I try to understand, uh, all the information, all the, uh, these words to what's the meaning.

✓ It's because I love trying to understand all the information and the meanings of the words.

Replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because' and restructure the clause: use gerund 'trying' for preference statements and 'meanings of the words' for clear noun phrase. This corrects informal conjunction and awkward phrasing.

× So Yep, I actually prefer to detail reading.

✓ So yes, I actually prefer detailed reading.

Use 'detailed reading' (adjective + noun) rather than 'to detail reading', which is ungrammatical. Replace 'Yep' with 'yes' for formality and correct word order. This fixes sentence structure and collocation errors.