Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, sentence structure and specificity. Use correct verb forms (e.g., 'gives', 'download and read later'), and avoid redundancy. Keep answers to a maximum of 4–5 concise sentences: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Be specific about what you read (e.g., workout plans, nutrition studies) and correct collocations (e.g., 'balanced weight' → 'healthy weight', 'nutritionist diet' → 'nutritional advice' or 'diet plan').

예시: I enjoy reading about health and fitness. For example, I download workout plans and articles on nutrition to read later because they give practical tips on maintaining a healthy weight. As a result, I can plan my weekly exercise routine and try new healthy recipes.

제안: Clarify and correct grammar, reduce repetition, and use linking words. Replace vague phrases ('different amazing gadget') with specific ones ('various gadgets, especially my tablet'). Explain one or two reasons with connectors like 'because' or 'so' and provide a brief comparison with paper. Avoid fragmentary sentences—complete the thought about looking up words.

예시: I prefer reading on a tablet because it is easy to download and bookmark articles. Also, I can quickly search for unfamiliar words or highlight important passages, whereas paper is better for long novels because it feels more comfortable to read for hours.

제안: Work on clarity and coherence: remove hesitations and repetitions, and use clear linking words (e.g., 'when', 'but', 'however'). Be specific about what requires careful reading and why (e.g., treatment details, safety instructions). Explain when you skim and why (e.g., background info, not immediately relevant). Correct vocabulary and phrases ('feminine health' → 'women's health', 'save it for later').

예시: I read carefully when the topic is women's health because I want to understand treatments and safety recommendations accurately. However, I usually skim general background articles about diseases to get a quick overview and save detailed reports to read later.

제안: Eliminate fillers and correct mispronounced words ('depends' not 'repair on'). Provide a concise structure: state preference, give reasons using linking words, and finish the contrasting point. Be specific about what 'detailed reading' involves (e.g., following exercise steps or dosage information) and when you scan (e.g., for general news or long reports).

예시: It depends on the topic. I read in detail when an article covers women's health or exercise routines because I need to follow steps accurately. On the other hand, I scan long medical journals to pick out key points and save the full papers for later reading.

× I sometimes download articles and different sources from the Internet to read it letter.

✓ I sometimes download articles and different sources from the Internet to read later.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrect because it does not agree with the plural antecedent 'articles and different sources'. Also 'letter' is a spelling error for 'later'. Use 'later' to indicate time and avoid singular pronoun for plural nouns. Suggestion: use 'them' if referring back to plural items or rephrase as shown.

× It not only give me insights about how to stay healthy and maintain my balance weight but also guides me proper routine to exercise and add nutritionist diet.

✓ It not only gives me insights about how to stay healthy and maintain my balanced weight but also guides me to a proper exercise routine and a nutritious diet.

Subject 'It' requires third-person singular verb 'gives' (subject-verb agreement). 'Balance weight' is incorrect collocation; 'balanced weight' or 'healthy weight' is correct. Missing prepositions and articles: 'guides me proper routine' needs 'to a proper exercise routine' and 'add nutritionist diet' is incorrect; use 'a nutritious diet'. Suggestions: ensure verb agrees with subject, choose correct collocations, and include necessary articles and prepositions.

× Nowadays, with the availability of different amazing gadget, I now really like to read on my tablet because it's easy to bookmark it and download whatever article or resource you needed from the Internet.

✓ Nowadays, with the availability of different amazing gadgets, I really like to read on my tablet because it's easy to bookmark and download whatever articles or resources I need from the Internet.

The singular 'gadget' should be plural 'gadgets' to match 'different'. 'Bookmark it' is odd because the object is unspecified; omit 'it' or use 'them'. 'Whatever article or resource you needed' has wrong person and tense; use first person 'I need' and plural 'articles or resources'. Suggestions: match number, keep consistent person, and use present tense for habitual actions.

× But also sometimes I need to search a word.

✓ But sometimes I also need to search for a word.

The phrase 'search a word' is missing the preposition 'for' required with 'search' in this context. Word order 'also sometimes' is awkward; 'sometimes I also' or 'but sometimes I also' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'search for' when looking up a word.

× I need to read carefully whenever I'm reading about any topic related to feminine health and fitness, and sometimes I'm generally just going through about medical issues and diseases for which I can I I just superficially read the article and save it for a letter.

✓ I need to read carefully whenever I'm reading about any topic related to women's health and fitness, and sometimes I generally just skim medical articles about issues and diseases, which I briefly read and save for later.

'Feminine health' is unnatural; use 'women's health'. 'Going through about medical issues' misuses 'going through' with 'about'; use 'skim medical articles about'. Repetition 'I can I I' is an error and removed. 'Superficially read the article' better as 'briefly read' and 'letter' is a spelling error for 'later'. Also use 'which' to link clauses. Suggestions: use appropriate collocations ('skim', 'women's health'), remove repetitions, and correct spelling.

× Well, it's repair on the topic, uh, and when the topic is, uh, related to Women's Health and fitness, I really can, I really read it in detail so that it can help me for my personal well-being and I wanted to be accurately read and followed.

✓ Well, it depends on the topic, and when the topic is related to women's health and fitness, I really read it in detail so that it can help my personal well-being and so I can accurately follow it.

'Repair on the topic' is incorrect; correct phrase is 'depends on the topic'. 'Women's Health and fitness' should be 'women's health and fitness' (lowercase 'health' and 'fitness'). 'I really can, I really read it' is awkward; simplify to 'I really read it'. 'Help me for my personal well-being' should be 'help my personal well-being' and 'I wanted to be accurately read and followed' mixes tenses and is unclear; change to 'so I can accurately follow it'. Suggestions: use 'depends on', correct capitalization, streamline repetition, and maintain consistent tense.

× But when it's, uh, for journal diseases, I just.

✓ But when it's for journal articles about diseases, I just skim them.

The original is incomplete ('I just.') and unclear. 'For journal diseases' is incorrect phrase; use 'journal articles about diseases'. Add a complete verb phrase 'I just skim them' to finish the sentence. Suggestions: ensure sentences are complete and use correct noun phrases.