Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答直接但过于简单，语法和连贯性有不足。应在开头给出明确主题句，然后用一到两句具体原因或例子支持观点，避免重复并改进语法，例如时态和条件句的表达。可练习使用连接词如 'because', 'so', 'however' 来使答案更连贯。

예시: I don't enjoy reading much because I find films and video games more engaging. However, I will read when necessary, for example when I need information for work or school, and I usually focus on summaries rather than long texts.

제안: 回答表达有语法错误和多余词（如 'may' 与虚拟语气混用），句子可以更简洁明确。建议开头直接给出偏好，接着用具体理由支持（例如眼睛疲劳、记笔记方便等），并用连接词如 'because' 或 'since'。

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and makes it simpler to underline or take notes. For long study sessions, paper helps me concentrate better than a screen.

제안: 回答结构清晰但语法需改进（如否定结构和时态），可以用更自然的表达并加上具体例子说明何为“重要文件”。用连接词如 'whereas' 或 'but' 增强对比。

예시: I don't usually read carefully when I see advertisements or subtitles in films because they are brief and informal. But I read carefully when dealing with important documents, such as contracts or official emails, because mistakes could have serious consequences.

제안: 回答直接且内容相关，但语言有些重复并需改进语法和流畅度。建议给出开头主题句，随后用具体对比和例子支持，并使用连接词（e.g., 'for example', 'while'）使表达更自然。

예시: I prefer detailed reading for important materials, such as legal documents or academic articles, because I need to understand every detail. For less important content, like film summaries or ads, I usually scan to get the main idea quickly.

× If I were to make a choice, I prefer to may read on paper.

✓ If I were to make a choice, I would prefer to read on paper.

句中同时使用了情态动词 may 和一般现在时的 prefer，且在虚拟语气（If I were to...）的从句后，主句应使用与虚拟语气一致的情态形式（would prefer）。建议去掉 may 并把 prefer 改为 would prefer，构成与虚拟语气相匹配的结构。

× I think reading on paper is suitable for people to protect their eyes.

✓ I think reading on paper is better for protecting people's eyes.

原句中使用了 suitable for people to protect their eyes 的结构不自然。英文更常用的表达是 'better for protecting people's eyes' 或 'is better for people's eyes'。此外 'people to protect their eyes' 的不定式结构不符合意义。建议改用更地道的介词短语或动名词结构。

× When I'm reading advertisements or watching films, I think I need not to be careful.

✓ When I'm reading advertisements or watching films, I think I don't need to be careful.

need 作情态用法时后面接动词原形（need do），但在现代英语里更常见且自然的表达是使用助动词 do： don't need to。原句中的 need not to 混合了两种用法，因此应改为 don't need to be careful。

× When I'm reading important documents, I think I will be careful.

✓ When I'm reading important documents, I am careful.

此句描述的是习惯性或一般情况，不是将来事件，因此不应使用将来时 will be。用一般现在时或现在进行时更合适：'I am careful' 或 'I try to be careful'。建议根据语境改为一般现在时以表达经常性的行为。

× If I need read unimportant things like films, advertisements, I prefer scanning.

✓ If I need to read unimportant things like film blurbs or advertisements, I prefer scanning.

need 后面缺少不定式 to，正确结构为 need to read。此外 'films' 与 'unimportant things' 搭配不太自然，建议使用 'film blurbs' 或直接说 'films' 的上下文改为 'movie descriptions'。总体修正为加上 to 并调整名词以更自然表达。