Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Make the response more concise, correct grammar, and add a brief reason and example. Use one topic sentence and one or two supporting sentences with linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "because" twice).

예시: I don't read much these days because I have a hectic schedule. Therefore, I usually watch movies in my free time since they are quicker and more relaxing than reading a book.

제안: Clarify your meaning, fix grammar, and use coherent linking words. State your preference clearly, give one clear reason and a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases like "I part" and agree number (it/they).

예시: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. For example, I can carry an e-reader or phone everywhere, and I can quickly search for words or adjust the font size.

제안: Structure the answer with a clear topic sentence and contrasting details using linking words (e.g., "when"/"but"). Correct tense and preposition errors and give a specific example of situations requiring careful reading.

예시: I need to read carefully when I study English articles online because I want to understand vocabulary and grammar. But I don't read carefully when I browse social media posts, since they are usually short and informal.

제안: Make your preference clear, use correct vocabulary, and provide a concise reason and example. Avoid unclear terms like "debris storage"; instead explain what you mean (e.g., "details, explanations"). Keep it within two to three sentences.

예시: I prefer detailed reading because I need to understand facts and explanations deeply. For instance, when I study for exams I read textbook chapters slowly and take notes so I don't miss important information.

× No, I don't because I don't have enough time, because I'm I have hectic schedule and then I watch a movie.

✓ No, I don't because I don't have enough time; I have a hectic schedule and I usually watch a movie instead.

The original sentence has several structure problems: an extra 'because', an incorrect 'I'm I have', and a run-on with poor conjunctions. This fits 'Sentence structure errors'. Fix by removing redundant 'because', correcting 'I'm I have' to 'I have', and using a semicolon or conjunction to join clauses. Use 'usually' to indicate habitual action.

× I like to read on a screen because I part.

✓ I like to read on a screen because I participate?

The original 'I part' is unclear and likely a wrong or incomplete pronoun/verb use, so this is an incorrect use of words/pronouns. Clarify intended meaning; if the student meant 'I prefer', use 'I prefer'. If they meant 'I take part', use full verb. Ensure the correct verb form after 'I'.

× It's very convenient for me because they can move to anywhere and it's easier to move it.

✓ It's very convenient for me because I can carry it anywhere and it's easier to move.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'they' and 'it' inconsistently; pronouns must match the noun (a screen or device). Use 'I' as the subject for the action and 'it' for the device. 'Move to anywhere' is unidiomatic; use 'carry it anywhere'.

× In my case when I did a article on Internet because I am learning English so I don't like reading books in English so I have to practice every day.

✓ In my case, when I read an article on the Internet, because I am learning English, I don't like reading books in English, so I have to practice every day.

Multiple issues: 'did a article' is incorrect tense and article use—should be 'read an article'. Use the definite phrase 'the Internet' and commas to separate clauses. This fits 'Article errors' and 'Past/present tense' but per instructions only correct items in list: article and tense corrected to present simple 'read' to match habitual context.

× I prefer detailed reading records. I want to see debris storage and then I didn't have enough reading skill so I have to.

✓ I prefer detailed reading. I want to understand the details and improve my reading skills because I don't have enough ability yet, so I have to practice.

Original is unclear and contains fragments ('reading records', 'debris storage') and mismatched tenses ('didn't have' then 'so I have to'). This is sentence structure error. Clarify intended meaning: express preference, purpose (understand details), and need to practice; keep tenses consistent (present habitual and present need).