Reading— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Improve grammar, sentence variety and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct singular/plural and tense errors, and avoid redundancy. Add a brief reason or a specific example to enrich the answer and keep within 3–4 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially comics. I’m passionate about manga and have read over 4,000 volumes, which I collect and re-read for the artwork and stories. For example, I recently finished a series that changed how I think about character development.

제안: Clarify your preference and give coherent reasons. Use linking words (however, because, so) correctly. Avoid unclear phrases and filler words. Form two concise sentences: one stating preference and one explaining why with a specific reason or example.

예시: I prefer reading on paper because it feels more comfortable and I retain information better. However, since paper books take up a lot of space at home, I sometimes buy digital versions for convenience.

제안: Provide a clear contrast using linking words and correct grammar. Start with a direct statement about when careful reading is necessary, then contrast with when you can read casually and give a reason or example for each case.

예시: I need to read carefully when I’m dealing with work documents because accuracy is important for my tasks. In contrast, I read comic books more casually for entertainment, so I usually skim them or enjoy the visuals instead of focusing on every detail.

제안: This answer is fairly clear but can be more natural and concise. Start with a topic sentence, use linking words to contrast personal habit and professional requirement, and correct phrasing (e.g., 'I prefer scanning' → 'I prefer skimming' or 'scanning through'). Limit to 2–3 sentences and give a brief example of each mode.

예시: I prefer skimming texts because I’m impatient and usually want to get the main idea quickly. However, for work-related documents I read in detail to avoid mistakes, for example when checking reports or contracts.

× Yes, I like reading article.

✓ Yes, I like reading articles.

The noun 'article' should be plural when speaking generally about reading such items; use 'articles' to indicate more than one. Suggestion: use plural nouns when referring to general habits or multiple items.

× I read comic books.

✓ I read comic books.

This sentence is correct. 'Comic books' is properly plural to indicate the types of reading materials. No change needed.

× Since I have been passionate about manga, I have read more than 4000 comic books so far.

✓ Because I have been passionate about manga, I have read more than 4,000 comic books so far.

The original meaning is clear but 'since' at the start suggests a time point; 'because' better expresses reason. Also include comma and use standard digit grouping '4,000'. This relates to present perfect continuation (present tense issue) and wording precision. Suggestion: use 'because' for reasons and 'since' for time points; keep present perfect for experiences continuing to now.

× I prefer reading paper to screen, however pepper bugs place a lot of uh take a lot of places so currently I would try to buy.

✓ I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen; however, paper books take up a lot of space, so currently I try to buy digital versions.

There are multiple issues: 'reading paper to screen' needs prepositions and parallel structure: 'reading on paper to reading on a screen'. 'Pepper bugs place a lot of uh take a lot of places' is unintelligible; likely meant 'paper books take up a lot of space'. 'Would try to buy' should be present 'try to buy' for current habit. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('on paper', 'on a screen'), maintain parallel structure, and use clear vocabulary ('take up space').

× Well, while I read documents involving in my work, I carefully read these materials.

✓ Well, when I read documents related to my work, I read them carefully.

Use 'when' instead of 'while' for habitual actions; 'involving in my work' is ungrammatical — use 'related to my work' or 'for my work'. Also replace the repeated noun with pronoun 'them' for natural flow. Suggestion: use 'related to' for connection and 'when' for habitual timing.

× I read comic books.

✓ I read comic books.

Sentence is grammatically correct and appropriate here as a contrast to work documents. No change required.

× I'm an impatient person, so I'd like to grasp overall rather than detailed information.

✓ I'm an impatient person, so I'd like to grasp the overall picture rather than detailed information.

Add definite article 'the' and noun 'picture' to make 'grasp overall' natural; 'grasp' is a verb followed by noun, not an -ing form issue strictly but fits category 8 for verb constructions. Also 'detailed information' is fine. Suggestion: use fixed expressions like 'grasp the overall picture' or 'get an overview.'

× However, when I read documents for my work, I'm trying to read precisely.

✓ However, when I read documents for my work, I try to read them precisely.

Use simple present 'try' for habitual action instead of present continuous 'I'm trying'. Also include object 'them' to refer to documents. Suggestion: use simple present to describe regular habits and include pronouns for clarity.