Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Correct pronunciation and word choice (e.g., "lie" → "like") and grammar (singular/plural, tense) are needed. Make the answer more natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, one or two brief supporting details, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because," "so").

예시: I like chatting with friends because it helps us strengthen our relationships. For example, I usually look for topics we both enjoy, and we share opinions or personal experiences so we get to know each other better.

제안: Improve vocabulary and clarity: say specific topics correctly (e.g., "marathon movies" unclear — perhaps "movies" or a specific genre) and correct grammar (plural/singular, word forms). Keep it coherent with linking words and one clear supporting detail. Avoid vague phrases like "my habits and my friend."

예시: We usually talk about films and sketching. For instance, we discuss recent movies we've watched and give each other feedback on sketches, which helps me improve my drawing skills.

제안: Fix grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and fluency. Give a clear topic sentence and one or two concise reasons using linking words (e.g., "because," "so"). Avoid fragmented endings. Use specific examples if possible.

예시: I prefer talking one-on-one because group conversations can be noisy and everyone speaks at once. For example, in a group I often miss parts of the conversation, so one-on-one talks feel more relaxed and clear.

제안: This answer is quite clear but needs better word choice ("facial cues," "read their emotions") and smoother phrasing. Use linking words to contrast options (e.g., "because... whereas"). Keep it concise and add a brief example to support your point.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial cues and better understand my friend's emotions, whereas social media makes it harder to notice tone and body language.

제안: Good content and structure; fix small grammar issues (plural forms, articles) and use more natural expressions (e.g., "disagree" instead of "contrary opinion"). Add a brief example of how you resolve disagreements to enrich the answer.

예시: No, I rarely argue with friends. When we disagree, we discuss calmly and try to reach a compromise — for example, we listen to each other's reasons and then agree on a solution that suits both of us.

× Yes, I always lie chatting with my friend because I think it's a good way to promote our relationship and I'll try my best to find our common topic.

✓ Yes, I always like chatting with my friends because I think it's a good way to strengthen our relationships and I try my best to find common topics.

Errors: 'lie' is wrong word; should be 'like' (vocabulary). 'friend' should be plural 'friends' to match general meaning (singular/plural). 'promote our relationship' is unnatural; use 'strengthen our relationships' or 'improve our relationship'. 'I'll try my best to find our common topic' mixes future tense unnecessarily and has article and number issues; use present 'I try my best to find common topics'. Suggestion: use correct verb 'like', match singular/plural, prefer 'strengthen' and use present simple for habitual actions.

× We'll share our own opinion or experience during the chatting.

✓ We share our own opinions or experiences while chatting.

Errors: 'We'll' (we will) implies future; context is habitual so use present simple 'we share'. 'opinion' and 'experience' should be plural to match 'our'. 'during the chatting' is awkward; use 'while chatting'. Suggestion: use present simple for habits, pluralize countable nouns, and use natural prepositional phrase.

× I usually chat marathon movies or sketch with friends because these are my habits and my friend.

✓ I usually chat about marathon movies or sketches with friends because these are my hobbies and my friends do too.

Errors: Missing preposition 'about' after 'chat'. 'sketch' should be plural 'sketches' or 'sketch shows'. 'habits' is awkward; 'hobbies' or 'interests' is better. 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' or 'my friends do too'. Suggestion: include 'about' after 'chat', make nouns plural when referring generally, and use appropriate collocations like 'hobbies'.

× Most of my friends also have these habits and they can always give me some advice or conduct my skills.

✓ Most of my friends also have these interests and they can always give me some advice or help me improve my skills.

Errors: 'habits' better replaced with 'interests'. 'conduct my skills' is incorrect collocation; use 'help me improve my skills'. Suggestion: choose correct collocations: 'give advice' and 'help improve skills'.

× Usually I like to chat with only one friend because I find when I chat with a group of friends everyone are talking about their own opinion.

✓ Usually I like to chat with only one friend because I find that when I chat with a group of friends, everyone is talking about their own opinions.

Errors: Missing 'that' after 'find' for clarity. Subject-verb agreement: 'everyone' is singular and requires 'is', not 'are'. 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' to match 'their'. Suggestion: use 'everyone is' and pluralize nouns referring to multiple opinions.

× It quite not noisy that I can't hear clearly who are talking about.

✓ It is quite noisy, so I can't clearly hear who is speaking.

Errors: Word order incorrect ('quite not noisy' -> 'quite noisy'). Missing verb 'is'. 'who are talking about' is ungrammatical; correct is 'who is speaking' or 'what they are talking about'. Adverb placement: 'can't clearly hear' is preferred. Suggestion: reorder to subject-verb-adverb and use 'who is speaking' for clarity.

× So I prefer chat only with.

✓ So I prefer to chat with only one person.

Errors: Missing object after 'with'. 'prefer chat' needs 'to' infinitive: 'prefer to chat'. 'only with' is incomplete; specify 'only one person' or 'only one friend'. Suggestion: include full object and correct verb form.

× I prefer to communicate face to face with my friend because I can notice my friend's facial cures clearly and I can guess his emotion in time, but that's not convenient via social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face with my friends because I can notice my friends' facial cues clearly and I can gauge their emotions in time, but that's not convenient via social media.

Errors: 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' for general statement. 'facial cures' is misspelling; correct 'facial cues'. Possessive plural 'friends'' needed. 'guess his emotion in time' is awkward; use 'gauge their emotions promptly' or 'in time'. Suggestion: use plural forms for general preferences, correct spelling, and use 'gauge' for perceiving emotions.

× No, I rarely argue with my friend when we have contrary opinion.

✓ No, I rarely argue with my friends when we have contrary opinions.

Errors: 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' for general situations. 'contrary opinion' should be plural 'contrary opinions' or 'a differing opinion'. Suggestion: pluralize to reflect general cases or use 'a differing opinion'.

× We always discuss calmly and we try our best to figure out the consensus.

✓ We always discuss things calmly and try our best to reach a consensus.

Errors: 'discuss calmly' is okay but adding 'things' clarifies. 'figure out the consensus' is incorrect collocation; use 'reach a consensus'. Also avoid repeating subject 'we' unnecessarily. Suggestion: use natural collocations 'reach a consensus' and concise sentence structure.