Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Start with a clear subject-verb agreement and a concise topic sentence. Avoid repetition (e.g., "like" and "chat" repeated) and reduce filler words such as "like" and "that". Keep it to 1–2 sentences and add a brief relevant detail using a linking word (e.g., "because").

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially over a cup of coffee or tea because it helps us relax and catch up on each other's lives.

제안: Give a direct topic sentence and list specific topics using linking words (e.g., "for example", "such as"). Remove filler sounds like "uh" and avoid vague catchalls like "everything"; instead name 2–3 concrete topics and briefly explain one.

예시: We usually talk about our daily lives and personal experiences; for example, we discuss work, fashion choices, and recent events that affected us.

제안: State your preference clearly and support it with specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "also"). Avoid vague phrases like "other thing" and repeated fillers. Limit to 2–3 concise sentences with clearer vocabulary (e.g., "learn different perspectives", "meet new people").

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because it is more fun and I can learn different perspectives from several people. Also, it’s a good way to meet new friends.

제안: Answer directly ("I prefer face-to-face communication") and give two clear reasons, linked by conjunctions. Improve grammar (use correct verb forms and articles) and reduce redundancy (don’t repeat "communicate").

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because I feel more comfortable and it reduces the chance of misunderstandings.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence about whether you argue, then explain why and how you resolve conflicts. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "however", "afterwards") and correct grammar ("sometimes", "our opinions differ", "we talk to each other"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, sometimes we argue because our opinions differ, but we usually calm down and talk things through afterwards to resolve the disagreement.

× Yes they do. I like chatting with my friend when I'm like drinking something like coffee or tea that I might chat with my friend I enjoy while drinking tea.

✓ Yes, I do. I like chatting with my friend when I'm drinking something like coffee or tea; I enjoy chatting while drinking tea.

The student used 'they' instead of 'I' causing a pronoun error (use singular first person). There are also awkward repetitions and filler words ('like') and run-on sentence structure. Suggest using correct pronoun 'I', remove unnecessary 'like' fillers, and separate ideas with punctuation to improve clarity. (Grammar problem type ID 12)

× Mostly I chat about with my friend, like daily lives, uh, we share uh, other ideas, personal experience, clothing, everything.

✓ Mostly I chat with my friend about daily life; we share ideas, personal experiences, clothing, and so on.

The phrase 'chat about with' is incorrect—'chat with' or 'chat about' should be used, not both. Also 'daily lives' should be singular 'daily life' when referring to general topics, and 'personal experience' should be plural in this list. Remove filler words. (Grammar problem type ID 11)

× Yes, I prefer to chat with a group of people. Uh, it's so fun. Uh, I also gain more knowledge and experience about the other thing and I have a best thing to make a new friend as well in the group of people.

✓ Yes, I prefer to chat with a group of people. It's fun. I also gain more knowledge and experience, and it's a good way to make new friends in a group.

Phrases like 'the other thing' and 'I have a best thing to make a new friend' are unclear and misuse pronouns and noun phrases. Use 'it's' or 'a good way' to generalize, and 'new friends' (plural) fits better. Remove fillers and simplify the structure. (Grammar problem type ID 12)

× Yes, I mostly prefer communicate face to face because when I am communicate with the person face to face, I am so comfortable that time and I also avoid misunderstanding.

✓ Yes, I mostly prefer to communicate face to face because when I communicate with a person face to face, I feel comfortable and can avoid misunderstandings.

Missing infinitive 'to' after 'prefer' and incorrect verb forms 'am communicate' are present tense errors. Use 'to communicate' and 'when I communicate' (simple present) for habitual actions. 'I feel comfortable' is the correct stative verb form and 'misunderstandings' should be plural. (Grammar problem type ID 6)

× Yes, sometime we are good. I argue with my friend because uh our thought is not matching with my friend and that time we are good. But after some time and we talk each other.

✓ Sometimes we disagree. I argue with my friend because our thoughts do not match, but after a while we talk to each other and make up.

Multiple issues: 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb), 'we are good' is vague—use 'we disagree' or 'we get along'. 'Our thought is not matching with my friend' has subject-verb and preposition problems; use 'our thoughts do not match.' 'We talk each other' should be 'we talk to each other'. Use simple present or present simple for habitual actions. (Grammar problem type ID 6)