Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it is a little wordy and has some grammatical inaccuracies. Make your topic sentence concise, correct verb forms, and add one specific example to make it more natural. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends to catch up. For example, last week we talked about a friend’s new job and how she adjusted to moving to a different city.

제안: Good direct response and appropriate content. To improve, add a linking phrase and a specific detail to make the answer more vivid. Use one extra sentence with an example or brief explanation.

예시: We usually talk about our personal lives and careers, and sometimes we share problems. For instance, we recently discussed strategies for balancing work and study.

제안: Your idea is fine but grammar and clarity need work. Use consistent verb forms, correct singular/plural, and improve coherence with linking words. Also avoid informal slips like 'chat with you' — clarify who you mean.

예시: It depends. If a friend has a personal problem, I prefer a one-on-one conversation so they can speak freely. However, for casual topics I enjoy chatting in a group because it feels livelier.

제안: Content is relevant but the answer is repetitive and has grammatical errors. Make a concise comparison using linking words (however, because) and correct verb agreement. Give one specific reason for each mode of communication.

예시: I prefer both, but for different reasons. Face-to-face is better because you can read body language, while social media is convenient for keeping in touch with friends who live far away.

제안: Good short answer that directly addresses the question. To improve, use plural or article with 'opinion', and add a brief explanation of how you handle disagreements to show maturity and language range.

예시: Sometimes, especially when we have different opinions on a topic. Usually we resolve it by listening to each other and finding a compromise.

× I like talking to my friends to catch up things, to know how they are and what have they been doing for the past few years or past months.

✓ I like talking to my friends to catch up on things, to find out how they are and what they have been doing for the past few months or years.

Errors: missing preposition 'on' after 'catch up'; incorrect word order for indirect question 'what they have been doing' (auxiliary before subject is wrong in a subordinate clause); awkward time phrase order 'past few years or past months' should be 'past few months or years'. Suggestion: use 'catch up on' for the phrase, keep normal statement word order in indirect questions (subject before auxiliary), and use a natural order for time expressions.

× It actually varies, sometimes when a friend has a problem I think it needs to be talked about one-on-one and sometime if it's a gathering it's best to chat with you.

✓ It actually varies. Sometimes when a friend has a problem, I think it needs to be talked about one-on-one, and sometimes if it's a gathering, it's best to chat with a group.

Errors: 'sometime' should be the adverb 'sometimes' (plural/frequency meaning); sentence run-on and unclear pronoun 'you' used incorrectly to refer to a group. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for frequency, add punctuation to separate ideas, and replace 'you' with 'a group' to match the context and number.

× You know, if it's face to face communication, it is much better since you get to see how a person really act and whatever it's in social media, it's also it's also OK because you get to have that conversation with your friend from a very far destination.

✓ You know, if it's face-to-face communication, it is much better since you get to see how a person really acts, and when it's on social media, it's also OK because you can have that conversation with a friend from far away.

Errors: subject-verb agreement 'a person really act' should be 'acts' (third-person singular); missing hyphens in 'face-to-face'; awkward phrase 'whatever it's in social media' corrected to 'when it's on social media'; redundant 'it's also it's also'; awkward 'from a very far destination' changed to natural 'from far away'. Suggestion: ensure third-person verbs take -s, use natural prepositions ('on social media'), remove redundancies, and choose idiomatic phrases.

× Sometimes I do, especially when we both have different opinion on the topic.

✓ Sometimes I do, especially when we both have different opinions on the topic.

Error: count noun 'opinion' should be plural 'opinions' when referring to both people having differing views; also could add article 'an' if singular ('have a different opinion'). Suggestion: use plural 'opinions' for two people or use 'a different opinion' with singular subject. Punctuation was kept.