Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct tense and plurality, and add one specific example. Use linking words for coherence.

예시: Yes, I do. I usually chat with my close friends every evening, sometimes late into the night. For example, last night we spent an hour catching up about a colleague's promotion, which was really enjoyable.

제안: Provide a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, and give specific details using linking words. Avoid vague phrases and use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'plans', 'career goals').

예시: We mainly exchange funny anecdotes from our day and discuss our future work plans. For instance, we recently talked about applying for a training course to improve our career prospects.

제안: Begin with a clear preference sentence, use correct collocations and grammar ('hanging out' not 'of hanging out', 'relaxed'), and add a brief reason with a linking word.

예시: I prefer chatting in a group because we can plan outings and outdoor activities together. For example, last weekend we organised a hike after deciding on a group chat.

제안: State your preference directly, use natural phrasing ('I'm an introvert' or 'I'm introverted'), and give a concise reason with a supporting example. Keep within 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer communicating via social media because I'm introverted and find online chats less stressful. For example, I often message friends instead of meeting them in person because it's easier to express myself.

제안: Clarify frequency and nature of arguments, correct grammar ('we have light-hearted arguments' not 'funny argue'), and give a specific example or consequence. Use linking words to connect ideas.

예시: We sometimes have light-hearted arguments, usually about small things, but we always make up afterwards. For example, we recently disagreed over where to eat, but we laughed about it and chose a restaurant together.

× Yes, I usually chat with my friends on a daily basis and we chat over the night.

✓ Yes, I usually chat with my friends on a daily basis and we chat during the night.

The phrase 'over the night' is incorrect; the correct prepositional phrase is 'during the night' when referring to time span. This is a preposition and idiomatic usage issue: use 'during' to indicate an activity happening throughout the night. Suggestion: replace 'over the night' with 'during the night' or say 'at night' depending on meaning.

× Also we can call together and discuss many story about our life.

✓ Also we can call each other and discuss many stories about our lives.

Pronoun and noun form errors: 'call together' is unnatural—use 'call each other' for mutual action. 'story' should be plural 'stories' when referring to many, and 'our life' should be plural 'our lives' since it refers to multiple people. Suggestion: use reciprocal pronoun 'each other' and plural nouns for multiple items and people.

× We also share funny stories about the day and also discover the future plans about our work and we very enjoyable about it.

✓ We also share funny stories about the day and discuss our future work plans; we find it very enjoyable.

Multiple issues: 'discover the future plans' is unnatural—use 'discuss our future work plans'. 'we very enjoyable about it' is ungrammatical: 'enjoyable' describes something, not feelings; use 'we find it very enjoyable' or 'we enjoy it'. This involves verb choice and sentence structure. Suggestion: use verbs that match meaning ('discuss', 'find') and restructure the clause to 'we find it very enjoyable'.

× I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can make many plans of hanging out or many outdoor activities.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because we can make many plans to hang out or do outdoor activities.

The phrase 'plans of hanging out' is incorrect; use 'plans to hang out' or 'plans for hanging out'. Also 'many outdoor activities' after 'make many plans' should be framed as 'do outdoor activities'. This is a preposition/verb pattern and quantifier usage issue. Suggestion: use 'plans to' + verb or 'plans for' + noun, and parallel verbs: 'hang out or do outdoor activities'.

× It's also funny and relax.

✓ It's also fun and relaxing.

'funny' means causing laughter, not appropriate for 'enjoyable' context; 'relax' is a verb, while an adjective is needed: 'relaxing'. Use 'fun' and 'relaxing' to describe the experience. Suggestion: replace 'funny and relax' with 'fun and relaxing'.

× I'm an introvert person so I cannot communicate face to face very well, so I think I prefer chatting with them on social media.

✓ I'm an introverted person so I cannot communicate face to face very well, so I prefer chatting with people on social media.

Adjective form: 'introvert person' should be 'introverted person' or 'an introvert'. 'I think I prefer' is redundant with 'I prefer'—use one. 'them' is vague; use 'people' or 'others'. This involves adjective form and pronoun choice. Suggestion: say 'I'm an introvert' or 'I'm an introverted person' and 'I prefer chatting with people on social media'.

× I argue with them every day but either funny argue we still stay together and talk after.

✓ I argue with them sometimes, but even when we have silly arguments we still stay together and talk afterwards.

'Either funny argue' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'silly arguments' or 'funny arguments'. 'after' should be 'afterwards' here. Also 'every day' may be inaccurate; if intended to mean occasionally, use 'sometimes'. This is sentence structure and tense/adverb choice. Suggestion: use 'silly arguments' or 'funny arguments' and 'afterwards', and choose adverb reflecting frequency ('sometimes' or 'every day') consistently.