Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be careful about tone and redundancy. Begin with a direct topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases like "first of all/second of all" if unnecessary, and offer a brief reason or example to expand. Use one linking word and keep to 2–3 sentences.

예시: No, I don't usually like chatting with friends because I'm quite introverted. For example, I prefer one-on-one conversations to large social gatherings because they feel less stressful.

제안: Avoid contradictions and unclear phrasing. Start by acknowledging the situation, then give a clear hypothetical topic. Use concise vocabulary and correct repetitions (e.g., "plant-related things").

예시: I don't have close friends at the moment, but if I did I would talk about indoor plants. For instance, we might discuss plant care tips, favorite species, and how to deal with pests.

제안: Make the answer more fluent and remove repetition. Use one clear reason and a linking phrase to add a short example or consequence. Correct small grammar mistakes ("because of I'm introverted" → "because I'm an introverted person").

예시: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it's easier to follow the conversation and I feel more comfortable. For example, in a one-on-one chat I can speak freely without feeling pressured by a crowd.

제안: Good concise response. To improve, add a brief specific reason or example showing why face-to-face feels more natural, and use a linking word for coherence.

예시: Although I'm introverted, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and respond more naturally. For example, meeting a friend for coffee helps me understand their feelings better than texting.

제안: Clear and direct. To enhance, give a short reason or an example of how you handle disagreements, and use a linking word to connect the ideas.

예시: No, I usually avoid arguing with friends because it feels stressful and rarely solves anything. Instead, I try to stay calm and discuss the issue privately to find a solution.

× I do not have any friends but if I had I would chat with them about indoor plants and other plenty things plant related things.

✓ I do not have any friends but if I had any, I would chat with them about indoor plants and other plenty of plant-related things.

The original sentence has pluralization and word order issues: 'plenty things' is incorrect; correct form is 'plenty of things' or 'plenty of plant-related things.' Also 'plant related' needs a hyphen when used as a compound adjective before a noun: 'plant-related things.' Add 'any' after 'if I had' for natural conditional phrasing. Suggestion: Use 'plenty of' with a noun and hyphenate compound adjectives before nouns. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because it's easier for me to interact with only one person rather than a large group of people. It's also I think it's also because of I'm introverted person.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it's easier for me to interact with a single person rather than a large group. I think it's also because I'm an introverted person.

The original contains awkward adjective/adverb use and redundancy: 'It's also I think it's also' repeats; remove redundancy and reorder. 'Rather than a large group of people' is wordy; 'a large group' suffices. 'I'm introverted person' misses the article 'an' before 'introverted person.' Suggestion: Avoid repetition, use articles correctly ('an introverted person'), and prefer concise phrasing. Grammar_problem_type_id: 13

× Although I'm introverted, I prefer to communicate face to face because it's more natural and easy for me.

✓ Although I'm introverted, I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it's more natural and easier for me.

'Face to face' used as an adjective before a verb should be hyphenated: 'face-to-face.' Also 'easy' should be comparative or modified with 'easier' when comparing to other methods. Use 'easier' to show comparison with social media. Suggestion: Hyphenate compound adverbs/adjectives used before verbs and use comparative 'easier' for comparisons. Grammar_problem_type_id: 11

× No, first of all I do not have any friends and second of all I don't like chatting at all because I'm quite introverted.

✓ No. First of all, I do not have any friends, and second, I don't like chatting at all because I'm quite introverted.

The original sentence runs clauses together without correct punctuation and repeats 'of all' unnecessarily. Adding commas and splitting into clearer clauses improves subject-verb flow. Though not a strict agreement error, this aligns with subject-verb clarity and sentence-structure conventions. Suggestion: Use commas to separate clauses and avoid redundant phrases like 'second of all.' Grammar_problem_type_id: 26

× No, I don't argue with friends because I feel like it's quite stressful and it's not necessary.

✓ No, I don't argue with friends because I find it quite stressful and unnecessary.

'I feel like it's quite stressful and it's not necessary' is awkward; use 'find' plus adjectives to describe experiences: 'I find it quite stressful and unnecessary.' This makes the sentence more concise and idiomatic. Also removing repeated 'it's' tightens the sentence. Suggestion: Use 'find' with adjectives to express opinions and avoid repetition. Grammar_problem_type_id: 8