Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Be more concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word order. Also correct basic grammar (e.g. "I always chat with my friends when I have free time") and limit to 2–3 sentences.

예시: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time. For example, I often tell them about my day or ask for advice, which helps me feel supported and connected.

제안: Give a clear topic sentence and then specific examples. Use linking words like "for example" or "usually" and avoid filler words. Keep to 2–3 sentences and include concrete topics (work, studies, hobbies).

예시: Usually I chat about my work and studies. For example, I tell them about interesting tasks at work or ask for study tips, and sometimes we discuss movies or hobbies.

제안: State a clear preference and explain why with a linking word (e.g., "however", "because"). Give one specific situation for each option to sound organized and natural. Avoid repetition and filler words.

예시: I like both, but I usually prefer chatting in a group when I want to have fun and share news with several friends. However, I talk one-on-one when I need personal advice or a deeper conversation.

제안: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific reasons with linking words. Correct grammar (e.g., "It makes me happy because I can see and interact with them in person"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

예시: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and I can read facial expressions. For instance, seeing a friend's reaction makes conversations more enjoyable and meaningful.

제안: Answer directly and clarify the frequency and reason for arguments. Use one clear sentence for frequency and one for an explanation with a linking word like "because" or "when". Avoid unclear pronouns and run-on phrases.

예시: Sometimes I argue with friends, but not often. Usually disagreements happen when we have different opinions about plans or when someone insists they are always right.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I have free time I chat always my friends which I talk, we talk each other and whole day what I do, whole day what I do I can share my friends and that's why I like chatting.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because when I have free time I always chat with my friends; we talk to each other and I can share what I do all day, so I enjoy chatting.

This sentence has multiple word order and preposition errors (adverb placement and incorrect use of prepositions). 'Chat always my friends' should be 'always chat with my friends' (adverb before main verb and correct preposition 'with'). 'We talk each other' should be 'we talk to each other'. 'Whole day what I do' is awkward; 'what I do all day' is correct word order. Combine clauses with punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: place adverbs before the main verb, use 'with' after 'chat', and use 'talk to each other'.

× Well, uh, I do usually know when I, uh, the whole day I, uh, work or study or anything I do, uh, I can, I share my friend with my friends. Uh, that's basically I share anything with my friends. That's why I like it and it is, uh.

✓ Well, usually when I work or study all day, I share things with my friends. Basically I share anything with them, so I like it.

Issues include incorrect adverb placement ('do usually know' should be 'usually'), redundant fillers, and incorrect pronoun use ('my friend with my friends' is wrong; use 'share things with my friends' or 'share things with them'). Also streamline repeated phrases. Suggestion: place adverbs before the verb, remove unnecessary words, and use correct pronouns.

× I like both uh, prefer uh, to chat with a group of people or with only one friend umm, when I need to enjoy or many things, share many for many friends at that time. I prefer group of people chat with a group of people uh, however.

✓ I like both, but I prefer to chat with a group of people when I want to enjoy and share many things; however, sometimes I prefer to chat with only one friend.

Problems: missing conjunctions and articles, incorrect noun phrases and word order. 'Prefer uh, to chat with a group of people or with only one friend' needs structure 'but I prefer... when...; however, sometimes...'. 'Share many for many friends' is incorrect; use 'share many things'. Suggestion: use conjunctions to join ideas, include articles where needed, and place modifiers near the words they modify.

× Well, I prefer basically communicate face to face because it gives many happy. It gives me happy and and delighted because I see in I see her face and touch and at that time I enjoy.

✓ Well, I basically prefer to communicate face to face because it makes me happy and delighted; I can see and touch the other person's face, and I enjoy that.

Errors: missing infinitive marker 'to' after 'prefer' ('prefer to communicate'), incorrect collocation 'gives many happy' should be 'makes me happy', redundant words and incorrect prepositions ('I see in I see her face and touch' is ungrammatical). Suggestion: use 'prefer to' + verb, use 'make someone happy', and write clear coordinated clauses like 'I can see and touch the other person's face'.

× Yes, I argue with friends because, but many things I don't. I argue with friends which is all things because my friend who says which is all are right there.

✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes, but not about many things. I argue when a friend insists that they are always right.

This has sentence structure problems and incorrect pronoun and relative clause use. 'Because, but many things I don't' is ungrammatical; use contrast 'but not about many things'. 'I argue with friends which is all things' and 'my friend who says which is all are right there' misuse relative clauses and agreement. Suggestion: simplify: 'I argue sometimes, but usually not; I argue when a friend says they are always right.'