Chatting— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 答えは直接的で内容も分かりやすいですが、文法と語順のミスを直し、少し具体例を加えるとより良くなります。例えば“my friend”は人数に合わせて複数形にするなどの注意が必要です。不要な繰り返しを避け、1〜2文で簡潔にまとめましょう。

예시: Yes, I do. I usually chat with my friends about our future plans and how our days went after work. For example, we often talk about career goals or weekend plans.

제안: 内容が散らかっており意味が伝わりにくいです。まず話すトピックを明確にし、そこに関する具体例を一つか二つ述べることで話がまとまります。冗長な語句や途切れた文を避け、接続詞（for example, when, because）を正しく使ってください。

예시: I usually talk about our future plans, such as career goals or where we'd like to live. For example, we discuss job opportunities and travel ideas when we don't have much free time.

제안: 考えは明確ですが、表現が冗長で語順や冠詞の誤りがあります。理由を一つに絞って具体的に説明し、接続詞（because, so）で文をつなぐと流れが自然になります。例えば“with only one friend”で良いです。

예시: I prefer chatting with one friend because it's easier to have a deep conversation. When I'm in a group I often feel nervous, so I can't express my ideas clearly.

제안: 答えは一貫していますが、文法ミスと断片的な文があります。理由を具体的に述べ、1〜2文で流れるように表現してください。語順（prefer to communicate）と不要なピリオドを直しましょう。

예시: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it's easier to understand tone and body language. This helps avoid misunderstandings that often happen online.

제안: 良いポイント（議論から学べる）があるものの、語順と前置詞の誤り、具体例の言い回しが不自然です。'a lot of new perspectives'のように複数形を使い、例を述べる時は自然な接続（for example, when I read environmental news, I discuss these topics with my friends）を使いましょう。

예시: Yes, I do. I argue with my friends because I can gain many new perspectives. For example, when I read environmental news, we discuss the issues and share different opinions.

× Yes I do. I usually talk with my friend about our future, our daily lives after work.

✓ Yes I do. I usually talk with my friends about our future and our daily lives after work.

The sentence uses singular 'my friend' while referring to 'friends' in the question and 'our' later; this is a pronoun/number consistency issue. Use 'my friends' to match plural 'our' and the general meaning. Also use 'and' to connect ideas smoothly.

× I I usually chat about our future or walk or romance for example, when I don't have enough time to take a rest. My friends keep.

✓ I usually chat about our future, walking, or romance, for example, when I don't have enough time to rest. My friends do too.

The original has a repeated 'I', unclear list items and an incomplete sentence 'My friends keep.' Correct by removing duplication, using parallel gerund nouns ('walking'), correcting 'take a rest' to 'rest', and completing the final clause to 'My friends do too.' This fixes sentence structure and clarity.

× I prefer to chat with my friend with only my friend because I can communicate with this friend a lot. When I chat with group I feel nervous.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I can communicate a lot. When I chat with a group I feel nervous.

Redundant phrases 'with my friend with only my friend' and awkward 'this friend' were corrected to 'only one friend'. Removed unnecessary pronoun and tightened wording. Also added the article 'a' before 'group' and 'chat with a group' for grammaticality.

× I prefer communicate with my friend face to face because it is easy to. Communicate.

✓ I prefer to communicate with my friend face to face because it is easy to communicate.

After 'prefer' the infinitive 'to communicate' is required. The sentence was split unnaturally; combine into one clause and keep the infinitive form. Alternatively, 'I prefer communicating...' would also be acceptable.

× Yes I do because I can get a lot of new perspective. For example when I see environment news or newspaper I argue with my friend this topic.

✓ Yes I do because I can gain many new perspectives. For example, when I see environmental news or read a newspaper I argue about these topics with my friend.

'A lot of new perspective' is ungrammatical: use plural 'perspectives' and 'gain' or 'get' is more natural. 'Environment news' should be 'environmental news'. The clause order was awkward; use 'read a newspaper' and 'argue about these topics with my friend' to fix preposition and word order issues.