Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some language inaccuracies and awkward phrasing that affect naturalness. For example, "license start promptly" is unclear and likely a mistake. Also, "we also have regulation in class" should be plural and more precise. Try to use more natural expressions and correct grammar. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, there are several important rules at my school. For example, we must arrive on time to ensure lessons start promptly. Also, in class, we have to raise our hands before speaking to maintain a good learning environment.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well and presents balanced views, but there are grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that reduce clarity. For example, "help students be more self-discipline" should be "help students be more self-disciplined". Also, "at the same times" should be "at the same time". Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and check your grammar carefully.

예시: On the one hand, I believe clear guidelines can help students become more self-disciplined and responsible. However, too many rules might limit their creativity and infringe on their individuality.

제안: Your answer is relevant and provides supporting details, but there are some language errors and awkward expressions. For example, "found the poised point" is incorrect; you could say "struck the right balance". Also, "specialized and knowledgeable and his own field" should be "specialised and knowledgeable in his own field". Try to use more natural phrases and check your grammar for smoother delivery.

예시: Yes, my high school economics teacher did his job very well. He struck the right balance between being friendly and supportive, while also being specialised and knowledgeable in his field, which made his lessons very effective.

× For instance, we have to arrive at school on time to ensure the license start promptly.

✓ For instance, we have to arrive at school on time to ensure the lessons start promptly.

The word 'license' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'lessons'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but it affects the sentence's meaning. 'Start' is correctly used here as the base form after 'to ensure'.

× Additionally, we also have regulation in class to make sure we have a good study environment, such as we have to raise hands before asking or answering any questions.

✓ Additionally, we also have regulations in class to make sure we have a good study environment, such as having to raise our hands before asking or answering any questions.

The word 'regulation' should be plural 'regulations' because it refers to multiple rules. Also, 'raise hands' should be 'raise our hands' to correctly use the possessive pronoun. The phrase 'such as we have to raise hands' is awkward; it is better to say 'such as having to raise our hands'. This corrects the noun number and pronoun usage.

× On the one hand, I believe some clear guidelines could definitely help students be more self-discipline and become more responsible.

✓ On the one hand, I believe some clear guidelines could definitely help students be more self-disciplined and become more responsible.

The word 'self-discipline' is a noun, but here an adjective is needed to describe 'students'. The correct adjective is 'self-disciplined'. This is an incorrect use of adjectives.

× However, too many regulations may cause students lose creativity at the same times, it can also infringe their individualities.

✓ However, too many regulations may cause students to lose creativity; at the same time, it can also infringe on their individuality.

The phrase 'cause students lose' should be 'cause students to lose' to be grammatically correct. 'At the same times' should be 'at the same time' (singular). 'Infringe their individualities' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'infringe on their individuality'. 'Individuality' is usually uncountable and singular in this context.

× Yes, my high school economic teacher did his job really well.

✓ Yes, my high school economics teacher did his job really well.

The word 'economic' is an adjective relating to the economy, but the subject is a teacher of the subject 'economics', which is a noun. The correct term is 'economics teacher'. This is a vocabulary correction rather than a tense issue, but it is important for accuracy.

× I believe he found the poised point of being friendly and supportive towards his students.

✓ I believe he found the right balance between being friendly and supportive towards his students.

The phrase 'the poised point' is incorrect and unnatural. The correct expression is 'the right balance'. This is a vocabulary and phrase usage correction.

× At the same time, he was really specialized and knowledgeable and his own field which made his classroom much more efficient.

✓ At the same time, he was really specialized and knowledgeable in his own field, which made his classroom much more efficient.

The phrase 'knowledgeable and his own field' is missing the preposition 'in'. The correct phrase is 'knowledgeable in his own field'. Also, a comma is needed before 'which' to separate the clauses.