Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but has some repetition and grammatical errors, such as "the hair should should be short" and "proper dress up" which should be "proper dress code". Try to avoid repeating words and use more natural phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your points smoothly, for example, "Firstly", "Secondly", and "Finally" are good but ensure the sentences flow well. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, there are several rules for students at my school. Firstly, students must keep their hair short. Secondly, wearing the proper dress code is mandatory. Finally, everyone should manage their time well and arrive to class punctually.

제안: Your answer has some unclear phrases like "experience would benefit more from more roles" which seems incorrect. Also, "rules and regulation" should be pluralized properly as "rules and regulations". Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words like "Firstly", "Moreover", or "In addition" to organize your points. Pay attention to verb tenses and subject-verb agreement to improve accuracy.

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. Firstly, these rules help shape their future by teaching discipline. Moreover, rules and regulations encourage students to be respectful and responsible, which prepares them for adult life.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but contains grammatical errors such as "he suggests me" instead of "he suggests that I" or "he advises me", and "done all the home task" should be "complete all the homework". Also, avoid repeating "he" unnecessarily by combining sentences. Use linking words like "and" or "also" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, when I was in school, my physical education teacher, Sharfat Kovit Tushar, did his job very well. He always guided me to be punctual and also advised me to complete all my homework on time and effectively.

× Firstly the hair, the hair should should be short and secondly proper dress up.

✓ Firstly, the hair should be short and secondly, proper dress is required.

The phrase 'proper dress up' is incorrect; 'dress up' is a verb phrase meaning to dress formally. Here, an adjective 'proper' should modify a noun like 'dress'. Also, the repetition of 'should' is an error. Correct usage is 'should be short' and 'proper dress is required'.

× No students are allowed without proper dress up.

✓ No students are allowed without proper dress.

The phrase 'dress up' is a verb phrase and does not fit here. The correct noun is 'dress'. Also, 'without proper dress' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate the condition.

× Everyone should reach class in time.

✓ Everyone should reach the class on time.

The phrase 'reach class in time' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on time' to indicate punctuality, and 'the class' is more appropriate here.

× Yes, I believe experience would benefit more from more roles.

✓ Yes, I believe students would benefit more from more rules.

The pronoun 'experience' is incorrectly used here; the subject should be 'students' who benefit from rules. Also, 'roles' is a wrong word; the correct word is 'rules'.

× Firstly, these rules shape the future of the students.

✓ Firstly, these rules shape the future of students.

The phrase 'the students' is unnecessarily specific; 'students' without 'the' is more general and appropriate here.

× Not only that, rules and regulation help them to be a respectful person and made them a better person for their future life.

✓ Not only that, rules and regulations help them to be respectful people and make them better persons for their future life.

'Rules and regulation' should be plural 'rules and regulations'. 'Help them to be a respectful person' is incorrect because 'them' is plural; it should be 'respectful people'. Also, 'made' should be 'make' to maintain present tense parallelism.

× Yes, when I was in school, a teacher named Sharfat Kovit Tushar, he is our physical education teacher and he always guides me to be punctual.

✓ Yes, when I was in school, a teacher named Sharfat Kovit Tushar was our physical education teacher and he always guided me to be punctual.

The sentence mixes past and present tense incorrectly. Since the context is past ('when I was in school'), verbs should be in past tense: 'was' instead of 'is' and 'guided' instead of 'guides'.

× Not only that, he suggests me to do all the homeworks in time and done all the home task effectively.

✓ Not only that, he suggests that I do all the homework on time and complete all the home tasks effectively.

'Suggests me to do' is incorrect; the correct form is 'suggests that I do'. 'Homeworks' is uncountable and should be 'homework'. 'Done all the home task' is incorrect; it should be 'complete all the home tasks' to maintain tense and plurality.