Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is a bit long and slightly repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and clear by directly stating the main rules and giving one or two specific examples. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, my school has strict rules because it is a military school. For example, students must follow a dress code and maintain discipline in their behavior.

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains some repetition and informal language. Try to express your opinion clearly with fewer repeated words and use linking words to explain your reasons logically.

예시: No, I don't think more rules would benefit students because too many strict rules can make them feel trapped, which might lead to negative behavior.

제안: Your answer has some hesitation and grammatical errors. Try to avoid fillers like 'yeah, yeah' and 'I mean, like'. Also, use correct verb tenses and provide a clear example with linking words.

예시: Yes, my principal does his job very well. Although he is strict, he always provides what we need for school work without making excuses.

× No, I don't think it will benefit the students for if there are more rules 'cause if there are more rules and more strict rules, then the the student will feel like they are in a jail and they can't do anything and they will eventually tend to do bad things.

✓ No, I don't think it will benefit the students if there are more rules because if there are more rules and stricter rules, then the students will feel like they are in jail and they can't do anything and they will eventually tend to do bad things.

The error is in the use of singular 'the student' when referring to students in general, which should be plural 'the students' to agree with the plural subject. Also, 'more strict rules' should be 'stricter rules' to correctly use the comparative form of the adjective. Additionally, 'in a jail' is incorrect; 'in jail' is the correct phrase without an article. These corrections improve subject-verb agreement and proper adjective comparison.

× For example, whenever we need anything related to school work, he just provided, he does not make any excuse for it.

✓ For example, whenever we need anything related to school work, he just provides it; he does not make any excuse for it.

The verb 'provided' is in the past tense, which is inconsistent with the present tense context indicated by 'whenever we need.' The correct verb form is 'provides' (present tense, third person singular) to match the habitual action described. Also, adding 'it' after 'provides' clarifies the object. This correction ensures tense consistency and clarity.