Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear but quite brief. Try to add a bit more detail to make it more natural and informative. For example, mention what kind of rules or why they exist.

예시: Yes, there are many rules for students at my school, such as wearing uniforms and being punctual, to maintain discipline and a good learning environment.

제안: Your answer has some grammar mistakes and lacks coherence. Use linking words and correct vocabulary to make your answer more natural and effective. Also, avoid redundancy and be more specific.

예시: Yes, I believe that having more rules would help students develop better discipline and good manners, which are important for their personal growth.

제안: Your answer has grammatical errors and unclear sentences. Try to use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, provide more specific details about the teacher's qualities.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher named Cassie who does her job very well. She helps students understand the rules and encourages them to become well-mannered and disciplined individuals.

× I guess students will get more benefits from the roles.

✓ I guess students will get more benefits from the rules.

The word 'roles' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'rules' which refers to regulations. This is a vocabulary error but affects the meaning and clarity of the sentence.

× They will get discipline and well mannered.

✓ They will get discipline and become well-mannered.

'Well mannered' is an adjective phrase and needs to be connected properly in the sentence. The original sentence lacks a verb to link 'well-mannered' to the subject. Adding 'become' corrects the sentence structure and meaning.

× Yes, I have a teacher name Cassie.

✓ Yes, I have a teacher named Cassie.

The verb 'name' should be in the past participle form 'named' to correctly describe the teacher. This is an incorrect use of verb form related to pronouns and naming.

× She's very well in her job.

✓ She's very good at her job.

'Well' is an adverb and cannot be used as an adjective here. The correct adjective is 'good' and the preposition 'at' is needed to indicate proficiency in a job.

× She helped the students to understand the rules and regulations.

✓ She helped the students understand the rules and regulations.

The infinitive 'to understand' is unnecessary after 'helped'. The verb 'help' can be followed directly by the base form of the verb without 'to'. Removing 'to' improves sentence flow and correctness.

× See how those students to be well mannered and disciplined individual.

✓ She sees how those students become well-mannered and disciplined individuals.

The original sentence lacks a proper subject and verb agreement and uses incorrect verb form 'to be'. Correcting the subject to 'She', verb to 'sees', and verb phrase to 'become' fixes the sentence structure. Also, 'individual' should be plural 'individuals' to agree with 'students'.