Rules— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to respond directly to the question with a clear topic sentence, and provide specific examples of rules at your school. Avoid redundancy and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, there are several rules at my school. For example, students must wear uniforms and arrive on time for classes. These rules help maintain discipline and create a focused learning environment.

제안: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clarity. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words, and provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion. Avoid filler words and incomplete sentences.

예시: Yes, I believe students would benefit from having more rules. For instance, rules about punctuality and respect can help students develop good habits, which are important for success in both school and future careers.

제안: Your answer provides relevant information but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use complete sentences with correct grammar and add linking words to improve coherence. Also, provide more specific examples of how the teacher does her job well.

예시: Yes, I have a teacher who does her job very well. Her name is Jaswinder Kaur, and she is my 10th grade math teacher. She always explains difficult concepts clearly and treats all students equally, which creates a positive learning environment.

× Yeah, I am of the opinion that I think a uniform rule is compulsory in the schools.

✓ Yeah, I am of the opinion that I think a uniform rule is compulsory in schools.

The preposition 'in the schools' is incorrect here because 'schools' is used in a general sense. The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before 'schools' when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× Yeah, there are so many rules in schools like time there.

✓ Yeah, there are so many rules in schools, like rules about time.

The original sentence is unclear and incomplete. Adding 'rules about time' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Yeah, definitely students would lots of benefits from her rules, like if they will follow the rules, then they will definitely success in their life and uh, definitely achieve their goals in life because without, without rules, uh, everything is not possible and with the aid of rules, uh.

✓ Yeah, definitely students would get lots of benefits from these rules. If they follow the rules, then they will definitely succeed in their life and definitely achieve their goals because without rules, everything is not possible, but with the aid of rules, it is possible.

The original sentence has incorrect pronoun use ('her rules' should be 'these rules'), missing verbs ('would lots of benefits' should be 'would get lots of benefits'), and incorrect verb forms ('will definitely success' should be 'will definitely succeed'). The sentence is also run-on and unclear, so it was split and corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, I have a lot of detail in my life who does his or her job very well.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of people in my life who do their jobs very well.

'Detail' is incorrect here; it should be 'people'. Also, 'who does his or her job' should be plural 'who do their jobs' to agree with the plural subject 'people'.

× Here I would like to talk about one of my teacher, her name is Jaswinder Kaur, she's my math teacher in 10th class.

✓ Here I would like to talk about one of my teachers. Her name is Jaswinder Kaur; she's my math teacher in 10th grade.

'One of my teacher' should be plural 'one of my teachers' because 'one of' requires a plural noun. Also, '10th class' is better expressed as '10th grade' in English.

× She is always give her best to teach a student.

✓ She always gives her best to teach students.

The verb 'give' should be in the third person singular form 'gives' to agree with the subject 'She'. Also, 'a student' is better as 'students' to generalize the statement.

× She is also believing equality.

✓ She also believes in equality.

The verb 'believing' is incorrectly used here; it should be 'believes'. Also, the phrase 'believes in equality' is the correct collocation.